Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and choose clearer vocabulary. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., "I try"), replace incorrect/uncommon words ("anesthetic") with appropriate ones ("aesthetic"), and simplify phrases to avoid redundancy. Also limit to 3–4 sentences for naturalness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. I try to find aesthetic moments in everyday scenes, so I take pictures in many countries and cities using my phone. For example, I have unique shots from markets and parks that capture local atmosphere, which makes my collection special.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and improve coherence with linking words. Use correct expressions ("both, because" instead of "both cause") and avoid filler sounds ("uh"). Specify examples to make content more concrete (e.g., "mountain streams" vs "historic facades"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (plural/singular agreement).

Ví dụ: I prefer both, because each has its own charm. For instance, I like photographing rural scenes like mountain streams and fields, while in cities I focus on historic facades and busy streets to show contrast.

Gợi ý: Avoid saying you "cannot answer"—give a clear opinion or balanced view. Be concise and avoid exaggeration ("thousands"). Use linking words to explain reasons and give one specific example with a short explanation of why you like those views. Fix small grammar issues ("twice or three times" → "two or three times").

Ví dụ: I don't really prefer one over the other because both offer great photo opportunities. For example, I love Prague for its architecture, so I often photograph buildings two or three times to capture the best light and angle, while my home country offers familiar scenes with cultural details.

× I'm a person who try to find out anesthetic in each moment.

✓ I'm a person who tries to find aesthetic value in each moment.

The relative clause has a third-person singular subject 'who' referring to 'I' as a person; within the clause the verb must agree: 'tries' not 'try'. Also 'anesthetic' is incorrect word choice for visual appreciation; use 'aesthetic value'. Suggestion: use 'tries' for subject-verb agreement and choose the correct noun 'aesthetic value'.

× I have a lot of photos from different areas, from different countries, cities where I capture the moment by using my phone and I find it so unique 'cause it's not specific folder that have everyone but mine.

✓ I have a lot of photos from different areas and countries, from cities where I capture moments with my phone, and I find it unique because it's not a folder that everyone has but mine.

Several agreement and article issues: 'moments' plural fits repeated actions; 'capture the moment' -> 'capture moments' is more natural. 'It's not specific folder that have everyone' has subject-verb agreement and article errors: use 'a folder that everyone has' and 'it's unique because' for clarity. Also use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. Suggestions: make nouns plural when referring to repeated instances, ensure verbs agree with subjects, and include the indefinite article 'a'.

× I believe that I can say both cause each of these areas have their beauty which is not specifically connected to the other.

✓ I believe I can say both, because each of these areas has its own beauty that is not specifically connected to the other.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'each' is singular so requires 'has' not 'have'. Use 'its own beauty' for correct possessive pronoun. Also 'because' rather than 'cause' in formal speech. Suggestion: match 'each' with singular verb and use appropriate possessive pronoun 'its'.

× And when I travel I have photo either from nature where uh real areas or urban areas when I visit some historical buildings.

✓ And when I travel I have photos either from natural areas or urban areas when I visit historical buildings.

Use plural 'photos' for multiple images. 'Nature where uh real areas' is ungrammatical; 'natural areas' conveys the intended meaning. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'some' before 'historical buildings'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'natural' and plural nouns for countable items.

× I cannot answer this question, particularly because I have a lot of photos from different cities, from my own country, as well as when I travel around the world.

✓ I cannot answer this question, mainly because I have a lot of photos from different cities in my own country as well as from places I visit when I travel around the world.

The original sentence mixes prepositional phrases awkwardly. 'Particularly' is acceptable but 'mainly' fits better. Also include 'from' before 'places' to parallel 'from different cities'. Suggestion: maintain parallel prepositional structures and use clearer adverb choice.

× I've captured each building twice or three times that just in case to have a beautiful picture of it.

✓ I've captured each building two or three times, just in case, to have a beautiful picture of it.

Expression of frequency should use 'two or three times' rather than 'twice or three times'. Punctuation and word order improve clarity: place 'just in case' set off by commas. The present perfect 'I've captured' is appropriate for experience; adjust numeral phrase. Suggestion: use standard expressions 'two or three times' and punctuate the clause 'just in case' for clarity.