Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense or question tags. Use linking words if you add details (for example, “because” or “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different landscapes because I love capturing light and colors, and it helps me practice composition. For example, I often take pictures at sunrise to get warm tones and long shadows.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, single preference and explain why with a specific reason. Avoid vague or contradictory statements. Use one linking phrase to connect your reason (for example, “because” or “while”).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and variety of architecture and street life, while rural scenes are nicer for peaceful nature shots.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clearly. If you prefer your own country, say so and give specific reasons (culture, scenery, convenience). Avoid filler words and repetition. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence with a concrete example.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with many beautiful spots and the culture makes the scenes more meaningful; for instance, I often photograph traditional festivals and historic streets that I know well.

× Yes, I like taking photos of different views and glimpse of this views because I love photography and I like photography and and shall I will be become a good photographer?

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views and glimpses of these views because I love photography, and I want to become a good photographer.

Errors: 'glimpse' should be plural 'glimpses' to match count (Grammar Problem Type 10: Verb in the present participle form is closest but actually this is plural noun issue -> use type 1 or 27; following instructions, only correct types listed — here corrected as noun plurality). 'this views' should be 'these views' because 'views' is plural and requires the plural demonstrative 'these' (Grammar Problem Type 1 Singular and plural issue). 'and and' is a duplication; remove extra 'and'. 'shall I will be become' is ungrammatical: use 'I want to become' to express intention. Suggestion: use plural forms for countable nouns, match demonstratives to number, avoid duplicated words, and use a simple verb phrase 'want to become' or 'will become' depending on certainty.

× Yes, I prefer views of urban areas and rural areas. I like. I like urban areas.

✓ Yes, I prefer both urban and rural views, but I especially like urban areas.

Original has choppy repetition 'I like. I like urban areas.' and awkward phrasing 'views of urban areas and rural areas.' Combine into a clear sentence. Use 'both' to show inclusion and 'especially' to indicate preference. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and create a single coherent sentence that shows contrast or emphasis.

× No, I couldn't prepare reviews in in your own country or in other country because because I can't, because my country has is very beautiful and very, very, very, very, very established country and I like my country.

✓ No, I couldn't prepare reviews of places in other countries because I can't travel there; my country is very beautiful and well established, and I like it very much.

Multiple issues: duplicate words 'in in' and 'because because' removed. 'prepare reviews in your own country or in other country' is unclear; corrected to 'prepare reviews of places in other countries'. 'couldn't' vs 'can't' mixed tenses—choose past or present; here keep ability: 'I couldn't prepare reviews... because I can't travel there' clarifies reason. 'my country has is very beautiful' incorrect verb; use 'my country is very beautiful'. 'very, very, ... established country' reduce to 'well established'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use consistent tense and clear phrasing, and remove redundant intensifiers.