Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "capture it with me for a long time."

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside sunsets to preserve memories; these photos let me revisit special moments later.

Gợi ý: Remove filler words, correct grammar, and use linking words to explain reasons. Give one concrete example or detail about what you enjoy seeing at night to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views, especially at night, because rooftops and high viewpoints reveal city lights and busy streets. For instance, from a tall building I enjoy the contrast of neon signs and traffic, which looks beautiful and energetic.

Gợi ý: Organize your response: state your preference clearly, then give specific reasons and a concrete example. Fix grammar (e.g. "I prefer views in my own country"), avoid unclear phrases like "I have not wished many places"—say "I haven't visited many places."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the culture and can explore places I haven't visited yet. For example, I plan to visit rural coastal areas this year to see traditional fishing villages and scenic cliffs I haven't seen before.

× I like to capture difference in scenario because it is a relaxing hobby for me.

✓ I like to capture different scenes because it is a relaxing hobby for me.

The adjective 'difference' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'different'. 'Scenario' is awkward here; 'scenes' fits photographic context. Use 'different scenes' to describe varied views.

× I take different pictures for making memories and capture it with me for a long time as capturing photo can recreate your.

✓ I take different pictures to make memories and keep them with me for a long time because photographs can help recreate them.

The original mixes forms: 'for making' is acceptable but 'to make' is more natural. 'Capture it with me' is incorrect pronoun and verb choice; use 'keep them with me'. 'Capturing photo can recreate your' is ungrammatical; use 'photographs can help recreate them' with correct pronouns and plural forms.

× Definitely urban areas because uh, I like to prefer views in night in urban areas from roof or from a higher place because they show a different side of view that I can see and enjoy.

✓ Definitely urban areas, because I prefer views at night from a roof or another high place; they show a different side of the city that I can see and enjoy.

'I like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I prefer'. 'views in night' should be 'views at night'. 'from roof' needs an article: 'from a roof'. 'different side of view' is awkward; 'different side of the city' or 'different perspective' is better. Adjusted article and word order for clarity.

× According to me, but I like to prefer views in my own country as I'm familiar to my countries.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with my country.

'According to me, but' is unnecessary and incorrect; simply 'I prefer'. 'like to prefer' is redundant. Use 'familiar with' rather than 'familiar to'. 'my countries' is wrong when referring to one country; use 'my country'.

× How about nature, culture as I have not wished many places in my nation so I'll try to visit there and have a perfect view of it.

✓ I also want to see the nature and culture, and because I have not visited many places in my country, I will try to visit them and enjoy their views.

The original sentence has poor structure and wrong verb 'wished' instead of 'visited'. 'Visit there' is incorrect; use 'visit them' for places. 'Have a perfect view of it' is vague; 'enjoy their views' matches plural 'places' and is clearer. Reordered for natural English flow and tense consistency.