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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

He is of course, uh, I like to taking picture of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture, uh, mostly the nature, uh, views, like a natural views of our world, our earth and it makes me feel so good and relaxing.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I would like to prefer your views in rural areas because, uh, I was born in rural areas and I love to be every side of the rural areas. I also the grew up in the rural areas. That's why.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Why did you talk about this question? It's depends on my mood. Sometimes I feel like my own contributes are uh, so beautiful than other countries. But sometimes when I, uh, look at the oceans view, I would like to, to look that for a moment in my life because ocean is not in my country.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Be concise and use correct grammar and pronunciation. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and correct verb forms and articles. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you enjoy photographing nature and explain why, using words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I’m a nature lover, and photographing landscapes helps me relax. For example, I often capture sunsets and forests because their colors and tranquility make me feel calm.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then add one or two specific reasons. Correct word choice and sentence structure (e.g., “I prefer rural areas” not “your views”). Avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase like “because” or “since” to explain your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up there and feel more comfortable in the countryside. For instance, I like wide fields and quiet pathways, which remind me of my childhood.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid asking the examiner questions. Use correct grammar (e.g., “It depends on my mood”) and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “my country” not “contributes”). Give a brief specific example to support your answer and link ideas with “sometimes” and “because.”

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and beautiful. But other times I enjoy views in other countries, for example beaches and oceans, because there are no oceans where I live.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× He is of course, uh, I like to taking picture of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture, uh, mostly the nature, uh, views, like a natural views of our world, our earth and it makes me feel so good and relaxing.

Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture mostly natural views of our world; it makes me feel good and relaxed.

The original sentence used the wrong pronoun 'He' instead of the subject 'I' and had several issues that match other listed types: plural, gerund, article, adjective/adverb use. Corrections applied: replace 'He' with 'Of course, I' to use correct subject and natural phrasing; change 'to taking' to 'taking' because after 'like' the verb should be in gerund form (Grammar Problem Type 8); change 'picture' to plural 'pictures' for general preference (Grammar Problem Type 1); remove extra articles and change 'the nature views' to 'natural views' to use correct adjective form (Grammar Problem Type 13) and remove redundant 'the'; change 'so good and relaxing' to 'good and relaxed' so the correct adjective describes the speaker's feeling (Grammar Problem Type 13). Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure subject matches, use 'like' + verb-ing, use plural for general countable nouns, and choose correct adjective forms for feelings.

Verb + -ing form

× I like to taking picture of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture, uh, mostly the nature, uh, views, like a natural views of our world, our earth and it makes me feel so good and relaxing.

I like taking pictures of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture mostly natural views of our world, and it makes me feel good and relaxed.

After the verb 'like' you should use the gerund form 'taking' rather than the infinitive + -ing 'to taking'. Also 'picture' should be plural when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Natural views' is the correct adjective+noun order and 'relaxed' is the appropriate adjective to describe a feeling (Grammar Problem Type 13). Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing, pluralize general nouns, and choose proper adjectives for feelings.

Singular and plural issue

× I like to taking picture of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture, uh, mostly the nature, uh, views, like a natural views of our world, our earth and it makes me feel so good and relaxing.

I like taking pictures of different views because I'm a nature person and I love to capture mostly natural views of our world; it makes me feel good and relaxed.

'Picture' and 'views' were used inconsistently. When talking about general preferences, use plural 'pictures' and 'views' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'a natural views' is incorrect: either 'a natural view' (singular) or 'natural views' (plural). Suggestion: decide singular vs plural based on meaning and keep forms consistent.

Past tense issue

× I also the grew up in the rural areas.

I also grew up in the rural areas.

The sentence incorrectly includes the definite article 'the' before the verb phrase 'grew up'. 'Grew up' is correct past tense of 'grow up'; remove the extra 'the'. This is primarily a sentence structure/article error combined with past tense usage (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 22). Suggestion: use 'I grew up in the rural areas' or 'I also grew up in a rural area.'

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I would like to prefer your views in rural areas because, uh, I was born in rural areas and I love to be every side of the rural areas.

I prefer views in rural areas because I was born there and I love being surrounded by rural scenery.

'Prefer your views' is incorrect; change to 'prefer views' or 'I prefer rural views.' 'I love to be every side of the rural areas' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'I love being everywhere in the rural areas' or better 'I love being surrounded by rural scenery.' Also use 'born there' rather than repeating 'in rural areas.' These are preposition and idiom issues (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: use natural prepositional phrases like 'born in' and 'surrounded by' and avoid 'every side'.

Third person singular issue

× Sometimes I feel like my own contributes are uh, so beautiful than other countries.

Sometimes I feel like my own country is more beautiful than other countries.

'Contributes' is not the correct word; the speaker intended 'country.' The phrase incorrectly uses 'contributes' and also has subject-verb and comparison problems. Use 'my own country is more beautiful than other countries.' This addresses third person singular agreement and comparative structure (Grammar Problem Type 2 and 25). Suggestion: use the noun 'country' and the comparative form 'more beautiful'.

Sentence structure errors

× Why did you talk about this question? It's depends on my mood.

Why did you ask this question? It depends on my mood.

'Why did you talk about this question?' is awkward; a natural phrasing is 'Why did you ask this question?' Also 'It's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' should not take 'it is'—use 'It depends.' This is a sentence structure and auxiliary verb misuse (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 6). Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('ask') and the correct present simple 'It depends.'

Verb + -ing form

× But sometimes when I, uh, look at the oceans view, I would like to, to look that for a moment in my life because ocean is not in my country.

But sometimes when I look at the ocean view, I would like to look at it for a moment because the ocean is not in my country.

Use 'look at' with the object: 'look at the ocean view.' Do not repeat 'to' ('would like to, to look'). Use 'the ocean' with article 'the' when referring to a particular ocean; also refer back with 'it.' The phrase 'for a moment in my life' is awkward—'for a moment' suffices. These are gerund/infinitive, preposition, and article issues (Grammar Problem Types 8, 11, and 17). Suggestion: use correct verb patterns ('would like to' + base verb), include necessary prepositions, and use articles before 'ocean.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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