Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызды нақты әрі табиғи етіп қысқартуды үйреніңіз. Тақырып сөйлемді анық айтыңыз, сосын бір-екі қосымша мәлімет беріңіз. Мысалы, артық үзіктерді алып тастаңыз, қосымша байланыстырғыштарды (for example, so, because) қолданыңыз және грамматикалық қателерді түзетіңіз. Мысалы: "It depends on my mood, but generally I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than take photos."

Ví dụ: I sometimes take pictures, but it depends on my mood. Generally, I prefer to enjoy the moment because taking photos can distract me from the experience.

Gợi ý: Сөздерді дұрыс жазуға және нақты логика қолдануға көңіл бөліңіз. Тақырып сөйлемді анық айтыңыз, себептерді жүйелі түрде түсіндіріп, байланыстыру сөздерін пайдаланыңыз. Қате сөздерді (ruleria, pawn) түзетіп, қарапайым және байланыстыратын сөздермен (because, so, therefore) сөйлем құрыңыз. Мысалы: "I prefer rural areas because they are close to nature and feel calmer than cities."

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are closer to nature and feel more peaceful than cities. For example, the fresh air and quiet countryside help me relax and think clearly.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ қайталауды азайтыңыз және сөйлем құрылымын таза ұстаңыз. Тақырып сөйлемнен кейін себептерді екі-үш қысқа сөйлеммен нақтылаңыз және байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз. Мысалы: "It depends, but I enjoy both; travelling helps me explore, while my hometown is special because of memories."

Ví dụ: It depends on the view. I enjoy travelling abroad to see new places and cultures, but my hometown is special because it holds many memories that shaped who I am.

× It depends on my mood at that exact time whenever I see different views, but generally I prefer enjoying moment rather than. Trying to take picture of something.

✓ It depends on my mood at that exact time whenever I see different views, but generally I prefer enjoying the moment rather than trying to take a picture of something.

The sentence has tense and sentence-fragment issues. 'prefers enjoying moment' needs the definite article 'the' and 'enjoying' is fine but should be parallel with 'trying' in the same clause. The short fragment 'Trying to take picture of something.' should be joined to the previous clause and needs articles: 'a picture'. Suggestion: combine clauses and use 'the moment' and 'a picture' to make the sentence grammatically complete and natural.

× Ruleria's appeals me more than urban areas because ruler areas are interconnected with with nature and it is a pawn of human mind and urban areas are just human made. There is nothing.

✓ Rural areas appeal to me more than urban areas because rural areas are interconnected with nature and they are a refuge from the human-made environment of cities.

Multiple preposition and word-choice errors: 'appeals me' should be 'appeal to me' (use correct verb pattern); 'ruler' is a misspelling of 'rural'; 'interconnected with with' duplicates 'with' and should be 'interconnected with nature' or 'connected to nature'; 'it is a pawn of human mind' is unclear and ungrammatical—replace with a clearer noun phrase like 'a refuge from the human-made environment'; 'human made' needs a hyphen in adjective form 'human-made' or reword. Also combine short sentence 'There is nothing.' into a more meaningful clause or remove it. This correction improves preposition and phrasing.

× It again depends on on the view.

✓ It again depends on the view.

Repeated word 'on on' is a typo; remove the duplicate. The verb 'depends' is present tense and appropriate. Keep 'the view' with definite article if referring to a specific view.

× I would like to travel all across the world and see wonderful places, but there is something special with my own town which is filled with a lot of memories which made me who I am today.

✓ I would like to travel all across the world and see wonderful places, but there is something special about my own town, which is filled with many memories that made me who I am today.

Use 'about' rather than 'with' after 'something special'. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for a more natural formal phrasing. Add comma before 'which' for the non-restrictive clause. Use 'that' for the restrictive clause 'that made me who I am today.' These changes correct article/word choice and improve sentence flow.

× So yeah.

✓ So, yes.

'So yeah' is conversational but vague; 'So, yes.' is a clearer short response in a test context. This adjusts register and punctuation to form a concise sentence.