Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and correct minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief reason. Avoid unclear phrases like “remember the tip.” Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes because they inspire me and preserve memories. For example, when I travel and see mountain lakes, I take photos to remember the light and colors, which helps me recall the trip later.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific descriptive detail. Use linking words to join ideas and avoid fragmented phrases. Replace vague words like “the all of greenery” with precise descriptions.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is more natural and peaceful. For example, rivers, fields and country roads full of greenery help me relax and feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and complete sentences. Correct grammar and avoid incomplete thoughts. Add one or two specific examples of places or features and a brief reason why you prefer local views.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Bangladesh has unique riverine landscapes. For example, the Sundarbans and many inland rivers offer rich wildlife and familiar scenery that I find comforting and meaningful.

× I never hesitate to capture them because they often inspire me and help me remember the tip.

✓ I never hesitate to capture them because they often inspire me and help me remember the moment.

The phrase 'remember the tip' is incorrect in this context; 'tip' is not the intended noun. Use 'moment' or 'scene'. This is not a verb form error but a word choice error; however, it fits under choosing correct verb-related noun complement. Suggest replacing 'tip' with 'moment' to convey recalling the experience.

× I do prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas the scenery is really natural like river ponds and roads.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery there is truly natural, like rivers, ponds, and country roads.

Remove redundant 'I do prefer' to match natural speech; use definite article 'the' with 'scenery' and refer back with 'there'. Also plural nouns need commas and conjunctions. This is an article and noun form correction to improve grammar and clarity.

× The all of greenery and makes feel unwind and relax.

✓ All the greenery makes me feel unwound and relaxed.

Original has wrong word order and incorrect forms. 'All the greenery' (correct noun phrase), verb should be 'makes' with subject-verb agreement, object pronoun 'me' required, and adjectives 'unwound' and 'relaxed' describe the speaker's state. This corrects adjective/adverb misuse and sentence structure.

× I do prefer views in my own country. Bangladesh is the natural beauty.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. Bangladesh is naturally beautiful.

Use natural adjective/adverb forms correctly: 'naturally beautiful' is the appropriate phrase. Also omit redundant 'do' in positive statements. This fixes article/adjective usage and makes sentence idiomatic.

× There are so many rivers, forest and mountains especially Bangladesh is the riverine country.

✓ There are so many rivers, forests, and mountains; Bangladesh is a riverine country.

Pluralize 'forest' to 'forests' for parallel structure, add commas, and separate clauses properly with a semicolon. Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'riverine country'. This fixes noun number and article use.

× Many people depends on it and it's very.

✓ Many people depend on them, and it is very important.

'Many people' requires plural verb 'depend'. Replace 'it' reference to 'rivers/riverine nature' with 'them' or rephrase; complete the sentence by adding an adjective like 'important' or 'valuable'. This addresses subject-verb agreement and incomplete sentence.