Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting because I think it's a good way for me to remember something like it's very important to me
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on my laptop table every day since I want to enhance my typing speed.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
The time la I first learned how to type on a tea board bus at my elementary school in at my elementary school there are a class code computer science there so we could learn how to use computer and how to type on a keyboard in that class.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I improved my typing speed by just like writing an email or surving on the internet and find some report tools practice.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并结构清晰,避免冗余和口头禅。首先给出明确立场,然后用一两句具体原因支持,并用连接词衔接。例如说明手写如何帮助记忆,可举具体场景。发音和语法要注意时态及句子完整性。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take lecture notes by hand, I retain key points more effectively than when I type. Therefore I usually write important ideas in a notebook to study later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并修正措辞错误(“laptop table”应为“laptop”或“laptop keyboard”)。给出一两句具体细节,如每天使用场景、时长或目的,并用连接词明确因果关系。
Ví dụ: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I want to improve my typing speed. Usually I type for about two hours a day when I study or write emails, which helps me practice regularly.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁并按时序说明学习时间和地点,避免重复和口误(如“tea board bus”明显错误)。使用连接词组织信息,例如先说时间,再说地点和课程内容,尽量使用正确词汇如 “typing”, “computer class”, “elementary school”。
Ví dụ: I first learned to type at elementary school when I was about eight years old. We had a computer class where the teacher taught us basic skills, including how to use a keyboard and type simple sentences.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要使用正确动词时态和词汇(例如 “surving” → “surfing”,“report tools” 不清楚可改为 “typing practice tools”)。说明具体方法与频率,并用连接词列举不同练习方式,使细节更具体和可操作。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I write emails daily and surf the internet to type articles, and I also use online typing practice tools for 15–20 minutes to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer handwriting because I think it's a good way for me to remember something like it's very important to me
✓ I prefer handwriting because I think it's a good way for me to remember things; it's very important to me.
原句中“something like it's very important to me”结构混乱且代词使用不明确。将“something”改为复数“things”更符合上下文,使用分号或句号将两部分分开,使句子更清晰。建议在表达泛指可记住的多项内容时用复数,并分句以避免冗长。
× I type on my laptop table every day since I want to enhance my typing speed.
✓ I type on my laptop every day since I want to improve my typing speed.
原句中“type on my laptop table”使用了错误的介词短语。通常说在“laptop”上打字(type on my laptop),而不是“laptop table”。另外将“enhance”换为更常用的“improve”更自然。建议使用正确的介词短语并选择更常见的动词搭配。
× The time la I first learned how to type on a tea board bus at my elementary school in at my elementary school there are a class code computer science there so we could learn how to use computer and how to type on a keyboard in that class.
✓ The first time I learned how to type on a keyboard was in elementary school. There was a computer science class where we learned how to use computers and how to type.
原句语序混乱、重复且包含拼写错误(如“la”“tea board bus”)。这是句子结构问题:需要拆分为两个清晰的句子,先说明时间,然后说明原因或细节。将“there are a class code computer science”改为“there was a computer science class”并修正“computer”和“keyboard”的单复数和搭配,确保时态与背景一致。建议简化句子,按时间和地点先后逻辑组织信息。
× I improved my typing speed by just like writing an email or surving on the internet and find some report tools practice.
✓ I improved my typing speed by writing emails, surfing the internet, and using typing practice tools.
原句时态和动词形式混用,“just like”不必要且口语化,“surving”拼写错误,应为“surfing”。动词并列时要保持形式一致(writing, surfing, using),并使用复数或同类名词(emails, tools)。建议注意平行结构、正确拼写并使用合适的名词形式。