Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I favor writing by hand, especially when I am studying. I think it leaves a deeper impression on me than typing on a computer. Besides, I when I take notes I can be more focused on my study.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on laptop every day because I am preparing for the health exam now, so I need to use my laptop to finish the reading and writing sections.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Before I owned the laptop, I learned how to type on my smartphone. I practiced typing by communicating with my friends. I think it is easy because I only need to be good at peeing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think an effective way to improve my typing is to do some online typing exercises and keep practicing every day. As we all know, practice makes perfect.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 你的回答意思清楚,表達自然,但有幾處語法與流暢性問題需要改進:1) 有語法錯誤與多餘詞(例如 “I when I take notes”);2) 回答有些冗長,可用更緊湊的句子並加入連接詞以提高連貫性;3) 可以給出一個具體例子或比較來豐富內容。練習時注意句子結構和連接詞(e.g. because, so, moreover)。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting, especially when I study, because writing things by hand helps me remember them better. For example, when I take notes during lectures I write summaries and draw diagrams, which makes it easier to recall the information later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 84.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且相關,但可改進細節和語法使表達更自然:在 “type on laptop” 前加入冠詞(a/an/the),並用一個連接詞或短語進一步說明頻率或場景(e.g. every morning, at home)。若能補充一個具體例子(如每天練習多長時間)會更有說服力。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because I’m preparing for a health exam and use it to complete the reading and writing sections. For instance, I usually practice typing for about an hour each morning to improve my speed and accuracy.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 此回答有幾個嚴重問題需要修正:1) 最後一句話出現詞語錯誤("peeing")——應為“pressing”或“typing”之類,務必避免口誤;2) 缺乏時間點的明確表述(例如 when I was 12 / a few years ago);3) 可增加細節說明學習過程或方法來豐富內容。回答時先給出時間點,再用連接詞補充學習方式或例子。
Ví dụ: I learned to type a few years ago before I got my laptop. I practiced on my smartphone by chatting with friends and using typing apps, which helped me get used to the keyboard layout and improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答內容實用且相關,但可以更具體並避免陳詞濫調:給出具體方法(例如使用哪些網站、練習多久、如何測速與糾錯),並用連接詞連接要點以提升條理性。這樣能展示更豐富的語言和細節。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by doing online exercises on websites like TypingClub and practicing for 20 minutes every day. I also track my speed with weekly tests and focus on correcting frequent mistakes to steadily increase accuracy.
× Besides, I when I take notes I can be more focused on my study.
✓ Besides, when I take notes I can be more focused on my studies.
句子中有多处问题:首先存在多余的词汇“I”在“Besides, I when I take notes”中应删除。其次“study”在此处指可数的“学习(活动)”或“功课”,常用复数形式“studies”。根据题目的语境,使用現在一般時態描述習慣動作,原句第一个问题属于句子結構錯誤(但需依據清單只修正為動詞 -ing 相關或相近的問題,此處主要是修正動詞短語結構和名詞單複數);建議刪去多餘的“I”,並將“study”改為“studies”。改正後語法更自然。
× I type on laptop every day because I am preparing for the health exam now, so I need to use my laptop to finish the reading and writing sections.
✓ I type on a laptop every day because I am preparing for the health exam now, so I need to use my laptop to finish the reading and writing sections.
英文中在可數單數名詞前通常需要不定冠詞“a”或“an”。“laptop”作為可數單數名詞,前面應加“a”。建議養成在單數可數名詞前檢查是否需要冠詞的習慣。
× Before I owned the laptop, I learned how to type on my smartphone.
✓ Before I owned a laptop, I learned how to type on my smartphone.
原句語法並無大錯,但與語境更自然的表達應將“the laptop”改為“不定冠詞 + laptop”,因為前文並未特指某台筆記本電腦。根據清單第22(冠詞)與第26(句子結構)有交叉,這裡採用句子結構/冠詞修正,將“the laptop”改為“a laptop”。建議注意限定詞的使用,確定名詞是否特指再選用定冠詞或不定冠詞。
× I practiced typing by communicating with my friends.
✓ I practiced typing by communicating with my friends.
句子本身語法正確。保留原句,但根據題目要求只修正清單內類型,這句不需要改動。此處列出以表明已檢查,無需修改。
× I think it is easy because I only need to be good at peeing.
✓ I think it is easy because I only need to be good at typing.
原句將“typing”(打字)錯寫為“peeing”(撒尿),屬於錯字或用詞錯誤,影響句意且非題目想表達內容。根據清單,這更像是動詞使用錯誤與時態一致問題,應使用現在時“need to be good at typing”。建議在書寫或說話時注意發音相近詞的區別,確認專業或日常動詞是否正確。
× I favor writing by hand, especially when I am studying.
✓ I favour writing by hand, especially when I am studying.
原句語法正確且時態一致,僅注意英式拼寫“favour”與美式“favor”的差異。此處不必更改,但根據清單要求列出已檢查項,說明拼寫差異和保持一致性。