Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

Where it depends on what I'm doing. When I am studying, I prefer handwriting well. When I'm work, I prefer typing.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Yes, I tapped on desk desktop every day because my work needs to type on the computer and I have a computer in my office.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I learned how to ride on the keyboard when I was six years old in my school. My computer teacher told me how to use it. It helped me a lot.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Honestly, by chatting with my friends, I always use the computer to chat with them on WeChat, so that makes me type faster.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接,并用一两句话说明原因和对比,避免语法错误和多余词。注意时态和冠词(例如“when I’m at work”),把句子控制在最多5句内并使用连接词如“because”或“while”。

Ví dụ: It depends on what I'm doing. I prefer handwriting when I'm studying because writing by hand helps me remember information better, while I prefer typing at work because it's faster and more efficient.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 注意动词形式和词序,使用正确的词汇(e.g. “use a desktop computer”)。开头直接回答并补充简洁原因,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I use a desktop computer every day because my job requires a lot of typing and there is a desktop in my office.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: “learned how to type”更合适,避免误用词(如“ride”)。可以给出更具体细节,如学到哪些技能或印象深刻的事情,并用连词衔接句子。

Ví dụ: I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six at primary school. My computer teacher taught me the basic finger placement and practicing drills, which really helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接说方法,避免口语填充词(如“Honestly”)。用更具体的细节说明如何练习(例如速度练习、打字软件、定时练习),并用连接词解释因果关系。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by chatting with friends on WeChat, which gives me lots of real-life practice. I also use online typing tests and set aside 10–15 minutes daily to practice accuracy and speed.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Where it depends on what I'm doing.

✓ It depends on what I'm doing.

这句话的句子结构不正确。原句以 Where 开头造成句意不明,应使用主语 It + 谓语 depends 引出从句,构成完整句子。建议:遇到表达“这取决于……”时用 It depends on ...。

Present tense issue

× When I am studying, I prefer handwriting well.

✓ When I am studying, I prefer handwriting.

句中使用了副词 well 放在 handwriting 后不自然。handwriting 是名词,prefer 后直接接名词或动名词,若想表达写得好应说 write neatly。此处根据语境应表示偏好手写,去掉 well 即可。建议:prefer + 名词/动名词。

Present tense issue

× When I'm work, I prefer typing.

✓ When I'm working, I prefer typing.

此句时态与动词形式错误。短语 When I'm work 不正确,应使用进行时 am working 表示正在做某事或在某种情境下。建议:be + verb-ing 表示进行时。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I tapped on desk desktop every day because my work needs to type on the computer and I have a computer in my office.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop every day because my work requires me to use a computer and I have one in my office.

原句里用 tapped(过去式)不合上下文且用法不正确;on desk desktop 词序和介词用法错误;my work needs to type on the computer 结构不自然,应使用 requires me to do sth 或 need me to do sth。建议:use 动词 type(现在时)与 everyday 搭配,desktop 作名词前可加 a,表达“需要我使用电脑”用 requires me to use a computer。

Past tense issue

× I learned how to ride on the keyboard when I was six years old in my school.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was six years old at school.

原句使用 ride(骑)误用了动词,应为 type(打字);介词短语 in my school 更自然的表达是 at school;learned 表示过去发生的动作时态本身正确,但动词选择和介词需改正。建议:learn how to type / at school。

Incorrect use of articles

× My computer teacher told me how to use it.

✓ My computer teacher taught me how to use it.

句子主要问题是动词选择。told me how to use it 在口语中可理解,但 teach 更准确地表示“教会某人做某事”。此外,定冠词使用正确,无需更改。建议:使用 teach sb how to do sth 更地道。

Present tense issue

× It helped me a lot.

✓ It helped me a lot.

此句本身语法正确(过去时),用于描述过去的帮助合适,无需修改。解释:helped 为过去时,与上文 learned when I was six 的时间背景一致。

Verb + -ing form

× Honestly, by chatting with my friends, I always use the computer to chat with them on WeChat, so that makes me type faster.

✓ Honestly, by chatting with my friends on WeChat, I always use the computer to chat with them, which has made me type faster.

原句中时态与连接方式混乱:开头使用 by chatting 表示方式,后半句用 so that makes me type faster 不自然。建议将状语置于主句并用 which 引出结果,或使用 has made 表示从过去持续到现在的影响。此处将动名词短语与现在完成时结合更贴切语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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