Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자주 끊기고 불필요한 반복이 있습니다. 주제 문장을 더 명확히 하고 문장 연결어(therefore, because, so 등)를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어지도록 연습하세요. 또한 ‘it is easier’ 같은 표현을 구체적으로 확장해 이유를 하나 또는 두 개로 정리해서 말하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is generally easier and less tiring. For example, handwriting often makes my hand sore after long periods, whereas typing allows me to work for hours without discomfort.

Gợi ý: 응답은 직접적이지만 문장 구조가 약간 불완전하고 연결이 끊깁니다. ‘no difference between them and’ 같은 문장 끝맺음을 고치고, 이유나 간단한 비교를 덧붙여 내용을 풍부하게 하세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 자연스럽게 연결하도록 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use both desktop and laptop keyboards every day, and I don't feel much difference between them. Generally, both are more comfortable than handwriting because the keys are easier to press and I can type faster.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중간에 끊기고 불필요한 반복(‘no idea’ 등)이 있습니다. 학습 시기와 초기 어려움, 그 후 개선 과정을 논리적으로 연결해 말하세요. 연결어들(first, at first, however, gradually)로 흐름을 매끄럽게 하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around seven or eight years old. At first it was really difficult because I didn't know where to place my fingers, but with practice and guidance from friends I gradually became much more confident.

Gợi ý: 구조는 비교적 좋지만 말이 약간 어색하고 반복(‘playing video playing computer games’)이 있습니다. 구체적인 방법(연습 빈도, 구체적 활동, 온라인 연습 사이트 등)을 제시하고, 문장을 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어 말하세요.

Ví dụ: There isn't a single method, but the best way is regular practice to build muscle memory. For example, I type daily for at least 30 minutes and I also improved a lot by playing computer games that required quick typing.

× I prefer typing over handwriting because it is. Easier I feel like.

✓ I prefer typing over handwriting because it is easier, I feel.

The original has improper sentence breaks and word order. Combine fragments into one sentence and place the adjective 'easier' directly after the verb phrase. Use a comma before the tag phrase 'I feel' to show it's an added opinion.

× When I'm handwriting it can. Bring stress to my hands if I write for an extended period, but when I'm typing, it doesn't matter how long I type, it doesn't hurt my hands.

✓ When I handwrite, it can bring stress to my hands if I write for an extended period, but when I type, no matter how long I type, it doesn't hurt my hands.

Use the verb 'handwrite' rather than 'I'm handwriting' for habitual action (present simple). Remove incorrect period breaks. Use 'bring stress to my hands' is acceptable but better to keep 'it can bring stress to my hands'. For the typing clause, use 'no matter how long' for clarity and keep consistent verb forms.

× Yes, I type every day, whether on a desktop or on a laptop. I personally think there's no difference between them and. Whenever I type in a keyboard I find it. Comfortable over handwriting.

✓ Yes, I type every day, whether on a desktop or a laptop. I personally think there's no difference between them, and whenever I type on a keyboard I find it more comfortable than handwriting.

Fix sentence fragments and preposition use: 'on a keyboard' not 'in a keyboard'. Remove extraneous 'and.' Use comparative 'more comfortable than' to compare typing with handwriting. Keep verbs consistent.

× Oh, let me see. I think I learned it when I was at primary school, so at the age of 7 or 8, at first I found it really difficult because my. Friends were used to typing. They had nowhere, no idea where to. I had no idea where to place my hands. But slowly I.

✓ Oh, let me see. I think I learned it when I was in primary school, at the age of 7 or 8. At first I found it really difficult because my friends were used to typing; I had no idea where to place my hands, but slowly I improved.

Use 'in primary school' rather than 'at' for school level. Combine fragments and correct tense: 'learned' and 'found' are simple past, which is appropriate for past events. Replace broken fragments with complete clauses and add 'improved' to finish the sentence.

× I think there is no fixed answer to that, but you just have to type very often and make your fingers get used to it. Strengthen your muscle memory. For me, umm, playing video playing computer games helped me improve my typing.

✓ I think there is no fixed answer to that, but you just have to type very often and make your fingers get used to it to strengthen your muscle memory. For me, playing computer games helped me improve my typing.

Combine fragments to avoid sentence fragments: 'make your fingers get used to it to strengthen your muscle memory' is a clearer single sentence. Remove repeated word 'playing' and use 'playing computer games' as the activity. Use past tense 'helped' for a past action.