Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing because I think type uh use type to have convenient uh on the Internet is very convenient for me. Handwriting is so slow when I have a check with my friends, especially the score gossip.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

I tap a laptop every day because laptop is easy to port and is convenient than desktop and I can use my laptop everywhere.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

That's a good question. Let me think. It's long time ago, maybe when I'm in primary school. In that time the Internet become fashion and I learned how to play computer games. So I learned how to type in and the play computer games with my friends.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

I think it's so easy, just keep practicing. When I was a child I can't type very quick that time, but I practice more, have a communication with my friends on the Internet and play computer games. That helps me to become more quickly.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 答题要更直接、流利并减少填充词(如 uh)。先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体理由支持,注意语法和短语使用(例如 say "typing is more convenient for online communication")。尽量不要使用模糊或不恰当的表达(例如 "score gossip"),可以说 "sharing results or messages"。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for online communication. For example, I can quickly text friends, share photos, or check messages, which is much harder with handwriting.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 答案要更自然并纠正词汇和语法错误,例如将"tap a laptop"改为"use a laptop","easy to port"改为"portable"。结构上先给出直接答案,然后补充1-2个具体原因并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: I use a laptop every day because it’s portable and more convenient than a desktop. For instance, I can take it to class or work and use it in different rooms at home.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 避免不必要的填充句(如 "That's a good question"、"Let me think")并注意时态一致。应先直接回答时间点,再用一两句具体背景说明原因或方式。改正不自然短语,如 "the Internet became popular" 和 "learned to type while playing computer games"。

Ví dụ: I learned to type a long time ago, probably in primary school. Back then the Internet became popular and I practiced typing a lot while playing online games with my friends.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并纠正语法错误(例如时态和副词位置)。先给出方法概述,然后用具体例子说明怎么练习(例如使用打字软件、每天练习20分钟、通过聊天和游戏提高速度)。使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I spent 20 minutes every day using online typing tutors and chatting with friends while playing games, which gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I prefer typing because I think type uh use type to have convenient uh on the Internet is very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer typing because I think typing on the Internet is very convenient for me.

句中重复且混乱地使用了“type”等词,且搭配不当。应使用动名词“typing”表示打字这个动作,并去掉多余词语,使表达清晰。建议用“typing on the Internet”或仅“typing”,避免重复。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Handwriting is so slow when I have a check with my friends, especially the score gossip.

✓ Handwriting is very slow when I check things with my friends, especially scores or gossip.

原句中“so slow”可以,但“have a check with my friends”用法不地道,名词搭配错误,“score gossip”也不明确。应改为动词结构“check things with my friends”,并把“score gossip”拆为更常见的词组“scores or gossip”。

Verb in the present participle form

× I tap a laptop every day because laptop is easy to port and is convenient than desktop and I can use my laptop everywhere.

✓ I use a laptop every day because a laptop is easy to carry and more convenient than a desktop, and I can use it everywhere.

“tap a laptop”错误,应使用“use a laptop”。“easy to port”不恰当,常用“easy to carry”。比较句需要“more convenient than”。注意重复名词可用代词“it”替代。

Present tense issue

× That's a good question. Let me think. It's long time ago, maybe when I'm in primary school.

✓ That's a good question. Let me think. It was a long time ago, maybe when I was in primary school.

谈过去的时间应使用过去时,故“It's long time ago”应改为“It was a long time ago”,“when I'm in primary school”也应改为“when I was in primary school”。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× In that time the Internet become fashion and I learned how to play computer games.

✓ At that time the Internet became fashionable and I learned how to play computer games.

时间短语通常用“At that time”。“become fashion”搭配错误,应为“became fashionable”。时态应使用过去式“became”。

Verb + -ing form

× So I learned how to type in and the play computer games with my friends.

✓ So I learned how to type and play computer games with my friends.

“type in”在此多余且不恰当,前后的“the play”有多余定冠词且时态结构不对。两个动词应并列为不定式形式“learned how to type and play”。

Past tense issue

× I think it's so easy, just keep practicing.

✓ I think it's very easy: just keep practicing.

这里不是严格时态错误,但用词“so easy”与正式表达可改为“very easy”,并用冒号或逗号更清晰地引出建议。保持一般现在时讨论习惯动作是可以的。

Past tense issue

× When I was a child I can't type very quick that time, but I practice more, have a communication with my friends on the Internet and play computer games.

✓ When I was a child I couldn't type very quickly, but I practiced more, communicated with my friends on the Internet and played computer games.

描述过去的能力和行为应使用过去时:'can't'应改为过去式'couldn't',副词应为'quickly',主句动词改为过去式'practiced/communicated/played',并且'have a communication'不自然,改为'communicated'更简洁。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× That helps me to become more quickly.

✓ That helped me to become quicker.

句子讲述过去的结果,应使用过去时'h elped'。'become more quickly'中'quickly'为副词,似乎想表达'变得更快',应使用形容词'quicker'或'faster'来修饰主语。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Quick— Fast; Hasty; Sudden; Intelligent
Slow— Unhurried; Long-drawn-out; Obtuse; Reluctant; Sluggish
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