Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Usually I would say I like typing but in examination I would say I love typing. Typing could make me to correct my mistake quickly 'cause there are like control C, control BI can change my issue quickly then the handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Nowadays I would like to say that I am practicing my typing on my lab board every day for about one hour every day 'cause I need to practice my writing part everyday now. So it helped me a lot because just few days ago I just type it with difficult.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
When I was in my primary school, maybe 7 or 8 years old, this classes is compulsory for everyone to practice typing on lab board and from that day on I started learning to use the computer to type.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Honestly, when I was in the school it is only the way that to practice sing to practice once and once. But nowadays I'm have more freedom on my personal training. So I would like to say I would rather to type different kind of articles.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 在回答中保持句子简洁并直接回应问题。注意语法(如时态和动词形式)与词序,避免重复表达(例如先说喜欢typing又说在考试中也喜欢)。可以用一至两句清楚说明偏好,并用一两个具体原因支撑,同时用连词使逻辑更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can correct mistakes quickly using shortcuts like Ctrl+C and Ctrl+V, and my typing is usually faster than my handwriting.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并避免冗余,不要重复“every day”。注意名词和短语的正确使用(如 'lab board' 应为 'lab computer' 或 'laptop'),语法上改正过去/现在时的混用,并给出具体细节(如练习内容、进步情况)。
Ví dụ: I practice typing on the lab computers for about an hour each day to improve my writing skills. This has helped a lot; a few days ago I still found typing difficult, but now my speed and accuracy have improved.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好但要修正语法(单复数、时态)和用词('primary school'后接动词等),并尽量精简为最多五句。可以补充一两个具体细节说明学习过程或感受以增加内容丰富度。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around seven or eight years old. The typing class was compulsory, and from then on I practiced regularly on the school computers.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并纠正语法错误(如 'I'm have'、'sing to practice')。给出具体的改进方法(例如使用在线练习、计时练习、练习不同题材的文章)并使用连接词使句子连贯。保持句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by doing timed online exercises and practicing different types of texts, such as news articles and essays. I also use accuracy drills and track my progress weekly to see improvements.
× Usually I would say I like typing but in examination I would say I love typing.
✓ Usually I would say I like typing, but in examinations I would say I love typing.
句子大体通顺,但“examination”在此处应使用复数形式“examinations”或加定冠词取决上下文。根据句意泛指一类事情,用复数更自然。建议:当泛指多次或一类考试时,用复数(examinations)。
× Typing could make me to correct my mistake quickly 'cause there are like control C, control BI can change my issue quickly then the handwriting.
✓ Typing lets me correct my mistakes quickly because there are shortcuts like Ctrl+C and Ctrl+B that help me fix issues faster than handwriting.
原句中存在动词+to 不当(make me to correct 应为 make me correct 或 lets me correct),还有单复数和表达不清问题。改为“lets me correct my mistakes”并使用复数“mistakes”,同时将口语缩写和按键写法规范化。建议:使用“let”或“make”后接动词原形,不要加“to”;注意可数名词复数。
× Typing could make me to correct my mistake quickly 'cause there are like control C, control BI can change my issue quickly then the handwriting.
✓ Typing lets me correct my mistakes quickly because there are shortcuts like Ctrl+C and Ctrl+B that help me fix issues faster than handwriting.
句中“like control C, control B”应使用表示举例的结构“shortcuts like Ctrl+C and Ctrl+B”。此外“issue”在此处不如“mistakes”自然。建议:使用恰当的量词或表例结构(like ...),并选择常用名词。
× So it helped me a lot because just few days ago I just type it with difficult.
✓ It helped me a lot because just a few days ago I typed with difficulty.
存在单复数和时态问题:"few days" 前应加不定冠词“a few days”;动词时态应与“just a few days ago”对应改为过去式“typed”;“with difficult”错误,正确短语为“with difficulty”。建议:注意时间状语对应的时态,并使用固定搭配“with difficulty”。
× Nowadays I would like to say that I am practicing my typing on my lab board every day for about one hour every day 'cause I need to practice my writing part everyday now.
✓ Nowadays I am practicing my typing on the lab computer every day for about one hour because I need to practice the writing part.
句中冗余“would like to say that I am practicing”不自然,使用现在进行时更直接;“lab board”不标准,改为“lab computer”;去掉重复的“every day”;“everyday”作形容词,不可用在此处,改为“every day”或重构句子。建议:在描述现在的常态或进行时用现在进行时或一般现在时,避免冗余并使用正确词语。
× When I was in my primary school, maybe 7 or 8 years old, this classes is compulsory for everyone to practice typing on lab board and from that day on I started learning to use the computer to type.
✓ When I was in primary school, maybe seven or eight years old, these classes were compulsory for everyone to practice typing on the lab computer, and from that day on I started learning to use the computer to type.
存在时态和主谓一致问题:"this classes is"应为复数“these classes were”以与复数主语和过去时间一致;“lab board”改为“lab computer”。建议:注意主语数与谓语形式一致,过去时间要用过去式动词。
× Nowadays I would like to say that I am practicing my typing on my lab board every day for about one hour every day 'cause I need to practice my writing part everyday now. So it helped me a lot because just few days ago I just type it with difficult.
✓ Nowadays I am practicing my typing on the lab computer every day for about one hour because I need to practice the writing part. It has helped me a lot because just a few days ago I typed with difficulty.
第二句时态需与“nowadays”联系:如果想表达到现在为止的影响,用现在完成时“has helped”;第一句同上应去掉冗余并用正确名词。建议:区分一般现在、现在完成和过去式,选择与时间状语一致的时态。
× Honestly, when I was in the school it is only the way that to practice sing to practice once and once.
✓ Honestly, when I was at school, the only way was to practise by repeating the exercises again and again.
原句中“it is only the way that to practice”结构错误,应为“the only way was to practise...”;“sing to practice”应为“by repeating”或“repeating the exercises”;时态需与过去时间一致。建议:使用正确的从句或名词短语结构,动词不定式前不加多余词。
× But nowadays I'm have more freedom on my personal training.
✓ But nowadays I have more freedom in my personal training.
存在助动词与动词重复错误“I'm have”应为“I have”;介词搭配“freedom in my training”更自然。建议:不要同时使用缩写助动词与实义动词;使用正确的介词搭配。
× So I would like to say I would rather to type different kind of articles.
✓ So I would rather type different kinds of articles.
“would rather”后应接动词原形,不加“to”;“different kind of”应为复数“different kinds of”。建议:掌握固定搭配“would rather + verb”及名词复数形式。