Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing online, it's convenient and handwriting is so difficult for me and I want to check what's my writing and hand typing is easy.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I usually tap on the keyboard. Umm, maybe the desktop for me is too difficult, but umm, in my spare time I will try to type on the desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I can't remember clearly, Maybe in my Junior School I learned how to type on the keyboard. Our school had lessons to teach us how to type.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I just send more message to my friends and practice the speed.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、有条理,并避免重复。先给出直接回答(主题句),然后用1-2句具体理由并使用连接词。注意时态和语法,如将“hand typing”改为“handwriting”或“typing by hand”,并改正语序。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and faster. Moreover, typing lets me easily check and edit my work, which reduces mistakes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答不够明确且含有口头语。先直接回答是 desktop 还是 laptop,然后补充频率和原因。用连词提高连贯性,去掉“umm”。
Ví dụ: I usually use a laptop keyboard because it's more portable. However, I sometimes practise on a desktop at home to improve speed and accuracy.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 回答较好但可更简洁并使用更自然的表达。直接给出时间段并补充一句具体细节,使用连接词使句子更流畅。注意大写和时态。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in junior school. At that time our school offered lessons where we practiced touch-typing on basic exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 内容简单,可给出更具体的方法并用连接词扩展。避免口语化的简略表达,描述具体练习方式和效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising regularly online, such as using typing websites and sending messages to friends. In addition, I time myself to track progress and focus on accuracy as well as speed.
× I prefer typing online, it's convenient and handwriting is so difficult for me and I want to check what's my writing and hand typing is easy.
✓ I prefer typing online; it's convenient. Handwriting is very difficult for me, and I want to check my writing, so typing by hand is not easy.
句子中存在形容词/副词使用和表达不清的问题:原句中 "handwriting is so difficult for me and I want to check what's my writing and hand typing is easy" 结构混乱,逻辑不清。应将一句话拆成两句或更多,使用更合适的副词/形容词(如 "very difficult"),并使用正确的短语顺序(如 "check my writing","typing by hand")。建议将复杂句拆分,确保每一部分主谓明确,形容词或副词放置在修饰对象附近。
× I usually tap on the keyboard. Umm, maybe the desktop for me is too difficult, but umm, in my spare time I will try to type on the desktop.
✓ I usually type on a keyboard. The desktop is too difficult for me, but in my spare time I try to practice typing on the desktop.
原句中副词和动词短语位置不当,且动词选择不自然("tap on the keyboard" 更常用为 "type")。将副词短语放在动词前后更自然,如 "usually type";同时将时态调整为习惯性或现在进行/一般现在时,去掉多余填充词以使句子更清晰。
× I can't remember clearly, Maybe in my Junior School I learned how to type on the keyboard. Our school had lessons to teach us how to type.
✓ I can't remember clearly. Maybe in junior school I learned how to type on the keyboard. Our school used to have lessons to teach us how to type.
句子时态混用问题:第一句为现在时表达记忆不清,接下来叙述过去发生的事应使用过去时或过去习惯时。将 "had lessons" 改为 "used to have lessons" 更清楚地表示过去的习惯。注意首字母大小写(junior school 小写更常见)。
× I just send more message to my friends and practice the speed.
✓ I just send more messages to my friends and practice my typing speed.
原句中动名词短语和名词复数使用不当:"message" 应为复数 "messages";"practice the speed" 不自然,需改为 "practice my typing speed" 或 "practice to increase my speed"。同时保持动词形式一致,确保名词和短语搭配正确。