Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I think it really depends on the situation. If I may in a hurry, I prefer typing because it's faster. If I want to write some important things, I prefer handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I wanna type on my phones because it's very convenient and easy to use. I always use it whenever I want.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I was in high school, we had some lessons about computers so I learned some typing that time, but now I forget most about it.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I had a drops which needs typing so I had some experience until now and I just have a computer so I can improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体可以理解,但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题。建议:1) 开头直接回答并用更自然表达(如“I prefer typing in most cases, but...”);2) 修正语法错误(例如“if I may in a hurry”应为“if I am in a hurry”);3) 用连接词使逻辑更顺畅(because / however / when);4) 保持句子简洁,最多不超过5句。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer typing because it’s faster when I’m in a hurry. However, when I need to record something important or personal, I prefer handwriting because it feels more permanent and helps me remember details better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够正式且有口语缩略(wanna),语法和用词有误(phones应为phone)。建议:1) 使用正式表达(I usually type on my phone);2) 提供具体频率或场景细节(e.g., for messages, emails);3) 用连接词或原因支持观点;4) 避免重复(always…whenever)。
Ví dụ: I usually type on my phone because it’s the most convenient device for messaging and quick searches. I use it multiple times a day, especially when I’m commuting or between classes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答能传达时间点,但句子结构松散且存在语法错误。建议:1) 用更自然的时态和连贯结构(I learned to type in high school when we had computer lessons);2) 说明具体程度或记忆(e.g., I learned basic touch-typing, but I’ve forgotten some skills);3) 使用连接词(but / however)清楚表达转折。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in high school during computer lessons, where I picked up basic touch-typing. However, I haven’t practiced much since then, so I’ve forgotten some of the technique.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法错误严重,信息不清楚。建议:1) 明确描述改进方法(练习、在线课程、打字软件);2) 使用正确时态和词汇(I have a job that requires typing / I practice using typing websites);3) 提供具体频率或工具以示具体性;4) 保持句子简短有逻辑。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on online platforms like TypingClub for about 20 minutes a day. I also type regularly for my work, which helps me build speed and accuracy over time.
× If I may in a hurry, I prefer typing because it's faster.
✓ If I am in a hurry, I prefer typing because it's faster.
句子中使用了非标准的动词短语“may in a hurry”。正确的表达是使用be动词“am”加状态“in a hurry”。建议记住固定结构:主语 + be + 状态/形容词(例如:I am in a hurry)。
× I wanna type on my phones because it's very convenient and easy to use.
✓ I want to type on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to use.
“wanna”为口语缩略写法,正式写作应为“want to”。另外“phones”与上下文不符,应为单数“phone”。建议区分口语与书面语,并注意可数名词单复数形式。
× I always use it whenever I want.
✓ I always use it whenever I need to.
原句中“whenever I want”语义虽可理解但与习惯搭配更自然的是“whenever I need to”或“whenever I want to”。若保留“want”应加不定式“to”构成“want to”。建议注意动词搭配和习惯表达。
× I was in high school, we had some lessons about computers so I learned some typing that time, but now I forget most about it.
✓ When I was in high school, we had some lessons about computers, so I learned to type then, but now I have forgotten most of it.
句子中存在时态混用问题:描述过去经历应使用过去时(was, had, learned),但后半句“now I forget”需改为现在完成时“have forgotten”表示从过去到现在的结果。另外“learned some typing”不自然,应为“learned to type”;“that time”改为“then”。建议保持时态一致并使用正确的动词短语。
× I had a drops which needs typing so I had some experience until now and I just have a computer so I can improve my typing.
✓ I had a job that required typing, so I gained some experience. I still have a computer, so I can continue to improve my typing.
原句中“a drops”不符合名词搭配,应为“a job”或“tasks”。“which needs typing”时态和关系词使用不当,改为“that required typing”。“so I had some experience until now”结构混乱,改为“so I gained some experience”并分别处理现在情形“I still have a computer”。建议把复杂句拆成两句,保持时态一致并使用正确的名词与关系从句。