Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is really convenient. You just use your pen writing on the paper. But typing is you should remember what words in what position and to click it. That's hard for me.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
No, because the most of the time I started using the pipe and writing with the pied pan. So a laptop and a tabletop desktop is not my choice.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think it is after my high school life and before my university, uh, university always use a laptop, so I must to practice it every day.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Oh I will type in everyday because I think practice makes me perfect. So I will making a plan and during the plan to practice the typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且条理清晰。先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免语法错误和冗余表达。注意时态和句子结构,如使用主谓一致、正确的动词形式,并用衔接词增加连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and is convenient for quick notes. For example, when I jot down ideas I can write them immediately without booting a device, which helps me think faster.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 答案含糊且有大量错误,首先要直接回答问题(Yes/No),然后给出清晰的原因和简洁细节。避免拼写错误和不相关词汇,使用简单正确的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually write by hand because I prefer taking notes on paper, so I rarely use a keyboard.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确的时间表达并改进语法。先给出简洁时间点,再用一两句说明背景或原因,避免口头语(如 "uh")和语法错误(如 "must to")。
Ví dụ: I learned to type properly after high school and before starting university. Because university courses required frequent computer use, I practised typing every day to improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体,说明具体方法和频率,使用正确的时态和短语(例如 "practice makes perfect" 是常用表达)。避免重复并控制句子数量。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising for 20–30 minutes every day using online typing exercises. I also follow a structured plan that focuses on accuracy first and then gradually increases speed.
× You just use your pen writing on the paper.
✓ You just use your pen to write on the paper.
原句中“use your pen writing”是不正确的动词搭配。动词“use”后面接动词时通常用不定式或名词短语,这里应使用不定式“to write”表示目的或动作。建议使用“use + object + to + base verb”结构:"use your pen to write"。
× But typing is you should remember what words in what position and to click it.
✓ But when typing, you have to remember which words are in which position and click them.
原句句子结构混乱,“typing is you should”不合语法。需要把状语提前并用适当的从句:"When typing"引导时间状语,主句用“have to”表达必须,定语从句用“which words are in which position”。“click it”中的代词不明确,改为复数“them”。建议分成更清晰的从句和使用正确的人称代词。
× No, because the most of the time I started using the pipe and writing with the pied pan.
✓ No, because most of the time I start using the pen and writing by hand.
原句有冠词和词形错误:“the most of the time”应为“most of the time”不加“the”;“pipe”和“pied pan”明显是拼写错误或发音误写,应为“pen”;时态与语境需用一般现在“start”或“use”;“writing with the pen”更自然,或用“writing by hand”。建议改为“most of the time I write by hand”或如上更正。
× So a laptop and a tabletop desktop is not my choice.
✓ So a laptop and a tabletop desktop are not my choices.
主语由两个并列名词组成(a laptop and a tabletop desktop),应使用复数谓语“are”。此外“not my choice”虽然可理解,但更自然是复数“not my choices”或改为单数并重写为“neither a laptop nor a desktop is my choice”。建议注意并列主语与动词的一致。
× I think it is after my high school life and before my university, uh, university always use a laptop, so I must to practice it every day.
✓ I think it was after my high school and before university. At university we always used laptops, so I had to practice typing every day.
原句时态混用且不符合语境。描述过去的时间应使用过去时:“was after my high school and before university”;“university always use a laptop”主语和动词时态不一致且单复数错误,应为“we always used laptops”或“the university always used laptops”;“I must to practice”中“must”后不接“to”,过去对应“had to practice”。建议在讲述过去经验时统一使用过去时并注意动词搭配。
× Oh I will type in everyday because I think practice makes me perfect.
✓ Oh I will type every day because I think practice makes me perfect.
原句“type in everyday”中“in”多余,应为“type every day”。“everyday”作为形容词意为“日常的”,副词短语应写作“every day”。建议把“every day”分开并注意副词/形容词区别。
× So I will making a plan and during the plan to practice the typing.
✓ So I will make a plan and during the plan practice typing.
原句中“will making”错误地将动词改为现在分词。情态助动词“will”后应接动词原形“make”。“during the plan to practice the typing”结构不自然,改为“during the plan practice typing”或更自然地“and during that period I will practice typing”。建议注意助动词后用动词原形,并简化结构。