Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer handwriting because my mom used to use handwriting and I learn that from her, so I'm familiar with handwriting rather than typing.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Yeah, desktop or laptop is common, was comments. It was common in our daily life and, uh, just if we want to use laptop or desktop, we must tap on it.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I learned it when I was in primary school. The school set a computer class in in. In the class the teacher will taught us how to tap on the keyboard and the and the teacher set an competition about typing to.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

As we all know, practice makes perfect to improve typing. Just need a plenty of hard work and you need to practice typing every day until you are familiar with the keyboard every single umm.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但表达不够自然,语法和时态存在错误,且有重复。建议使用清晰的主题句,随后简短解释原因并给出具体例子,句子保持在3-4句内。注意时态一致和代词/动词形式(e.g., "learned" 而不是 "learn").

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I grew up watching my mother write by hand, so it feels more natural to me. For example, I often take handwritten notes during meetings because it helps me remember things better. That said, I use typing when I need to write long documents.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语法错误与不相关片段("was comments"),表达重复。建议先直接回答是否每天打字,然后给出简短具体说明(例如何时使用哪种设备),并使用连词使句子连贯。避免口头填充词如 "uh"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually type every day, mostly on a laptop for work and on a desktop when I play games at home. For instance, I type emails and reports on my laptop in the morning, and use the desktop in the evening for leisure.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答给出时间,但存在重复、语法错误和不连贯(例如多余的"in in"、"will taught")。建议说清学会的具体阶段,描述课堂活动或练习,使用正确时态和流畅的连接词,控制在最多4句。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. Our school had a weekly computer class where the teacher taught proper finger placement and typing techniques. We even held a typing competition once, which helped me improve my speed.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容正确但过于笼统,且有语法和词汇搭配问题(如"a plenty of"应为"plenty of")。建议给出具体方法(例如使用在线练习、正确指法、定期测速),并用连词组织信息,避免填充词。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing programs that track my speed and accuracy. I also focus on learning proper finger placement and do short daily drills for 10–15 minutes to build muscle memory.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer handwriting because my mom used to use handwriting and I learn that from her, so I'm familiar with handwriting rather than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because my mom used to write by hand and I learned that from her, so I'm more familiar with handwriting than typing.

句中代词和表达不当:“use handwriting”不自然,改为“write by hand”;时态需一致,用过去习惯“used to”后,主句应使用过去习惯影响“learned”。“rather than typing”搭配不太自然,改为“more familiar with handwriting than typing”。建议:用更自然的动词短语,保持时态一致。

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yeah, desktop or laptop is common, was comments.

✓ Desktops and laptops are common.

原句存在单复数和结构错误。主语有两个项应使用复数并与复数动词匹配,“is”应改为“are”。多余的短语“was comments”无意义应删除。建议:列举复数名词时用复数动词,删掉无用片段。

26: Sentence structure errors

× It was common in our daily life and, uh, just if we want to use laptop or desktop, we must tap on it.

✓ They are common in our daily life, and if we want to use a laptop or desktop, we must type on the keyboard.

句子结构混乱:“It”指代不清,应用“They”指代前文的复数名词;“tap on it”表达不准确,键盘上正确动词为“type on the keyboard”;需要冠词“a laptop or desktop”。建议:明确主语,使用恰当动词短语并加上必要冠词。

5: Past tense issue

× I learned it when I was in primary school.

✓ I learned it when I was in primary school.

此句本身时态使用正确,描述过去的学习经历应使用过去式“learned”。无需更改。仅说明原因:在描述过去完成的动作时用过去式。

26: Sentence structure errors

× The school set a computer class in in.

✓ The school set up a computer class.

重复“in in”且结构不自然,常用表达为“set up a computer class”或“The school offered a computer class”。建议:删除多余词并使用常见搭配。

6: Present tense issue

× In the class the teacher will taught us how to tap on the keyboard and the and the teacher set an competition about typing to.

✓ In the class the teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard, and the teacher organized a typing competition.

存在时态和动词形式错误:“will taught”混用未来助动词与过去式,应用过去式“taught”。“tap on the keyboard”应改为“type on the keyboard”。“set an competition about typing to”不符合英语搭配,改为“organized a typing competition”。建议:不要混用助动词和过去式,使用正确动词短语及名词搭配。

8: Verb + -ing form

× As we all know, practice makes perfect to improve typing.

✓ As we all know, practice makes perfect for improving typing.

不定式“不正确地”与短语搭配,“practice makes perfect”后若要说明目的或方式,用“for improving typing”或直接说“practice improves typing”。建议:用介词短语或把不定式改为动名词短语以符合习惯用法。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Just need a plenty of hard work and you need to practice typing every day until you are familiar with the keyboard every single umm.

✓ You just need plenty of hard work, and you need to practice typing every day until you are familiar with the keyboard.

“a plenty of”搭配错误,正确为“plenty of”或“a lot of”。句首缺主语,需补“You”。重复“every single umm”不必要,去掉语气词。建议:使用正确量词搭配并保持句子完整,去除口语填充词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Perfect— Ideal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
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