Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because typing is more convenient than handwriting. Uh, everyone use typing and handwriting sometimes will make mistakes.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on laptop keyboard every day. Because the desktop keyboard is on the desktop, I don't want to bring it to everywhere. If I put my desktop on the table, I can tap with keyboard on.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
My childhood, about 10 years old, I got my first iPad. I learned how to type on keyboard. That's common key skills.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, that's easy question. I type uh, to send messages every day. That's improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且自然,避免重复和口头语。起始说出立场,然后用具体原因和例子支持。可以添加比较和个人经历来丰富内容,但不要超过5句。注意语法(例如“everyone use”应为“everyone uses”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can quickly edit and share typed notes on my phone or laptop. Also, typing reduces spelling mistakes because of spell-check, which helps me write more accurately.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并且语法正确,避免不必要的信息和重复。先给出直接答案,再用一到两句说明原因或细节。注意词汇使用(desktop/laptop区别,表达携带方便用portable或take it everywhere)。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is portable and I can use it anywhere. A desktop is bulky and hard to move, so I rarely use one for everyday tasks.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更符合英语习惯,先给出时间点,然后简要说明背景或动机。避免模糊表达,改用完整句子并提供小细节。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about ten years old after my parents bought me my first iPad. I practiced regularly to get comfortable with the on-screen and physical keyboards.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体,提供明确方法和例子(如练习网站、练习习惯、速度/准确度目标)。避免口头禅并用连词使逻辑更清楚。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing daily: I send messages, type notes for school, and use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy. I also set small goals like reducing errors and reaching a certain words-per-minute score.
× Uh, everyone use typing and handwriting sometimes will make mistakes.
✓ Uh, everyone uses typing, and handwriting sometimes leads to mistakes.
句子中“everyone”是单数代词,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“uses”,所以将“use”改为“uses”。此外将后半部分重构为“handwriting sometimes leads to mistakes”使语义更通顺。建议:注意以 -one 结尾的代词(everyone, someone 等)搭配单数动词。
× I type on laptop keyboard every day.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.
此句主要缺少冠词,不属于第三人称单数错误,但与题目要求只纠正列出的类型,故改为加冠词(Article errors,编号22)。然而为了保持内容准确,这里提供正确句子并在解释中说明需加不定冠词。建议:单数可数名词前通常需要冠词或其他限定词。
× Because the desktop keyboard is on the desktop, I don't want to bring it to everywhere.
✓ Because the desktop keyboard is on the desk, I don't want to bring it everywhere.
原句中“bring it to everywhere”搭配不当,应为“bring it everywhere”;同时“on the desktop”重复导致歧义,通常说“on the desk”。“everywhere”前不加介词。建议:注意动词短语与副词的固定搭配,并避免重复词。
× If I put my desktop on the table, I can tap with keyboard on.
✓ If I put my desktop on the table, I can type with the keyboard.
原句中“tap with keyboard on”结构不正确。“type”更合适且“the keyboard”需加定冠词以指特定键盘。建议:使用正确动词(type)并在特指物品前使用冠词。
× My childhood, about 10 years old, I got my first iPad.
✓ When I was a child, at about 10 years old, I got my first iPad.
句子断裂且时态混乱,需用过去时的完整从句“When I was a child”来引导时间状语,从而使句子结构完整。建议:描述过去发生的事情时用完整的时间状语从句并使用过去式。
× I learned how to type on keyboard.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard.
“type on keyboard”缺少冠词导致结构不自然,属于句子结构/冠词使用问题。建议:在可数单数名词前加适当冠词(a/the)。
× That's common key skills.
✓ Those are common keyboard skills.
原句“That's common key skills”在主谓一致和名词短语形成上有问题。若指多项技能,应使用复数主语“Those are”并改为“keyboard skills”更符合习惯表达。建议:注意主语和表语在数的一致以及固定搭配词序。
× Well, that's easy question.
✓ Well, that's an easy question.
可数名词“question”前缺少不定冠词“an”。这属于冠词错误(Article errors)。建议:可数单数名词前加a/an或the。
× I type uh, to send messages every day.
✓ I type, uh, to send messages every day.
该句基本时态正确,但“type to send messages”结构不太自然,可改为“I type to send messages every day”或“I type, uh, to send messages every day.” 此处主要是标点和流畅性调整,时态为一般现在时,符合习惯用法。建议:保持句子连贯,避免多余停顿。
× That's improve my typing.
✓ That improves my typing.
主语“That”后谓语需用第三人称单数“improves”,这是第三人称单数问题(ID 2/27),也属一般现在时。建议:当主语为第三人称单数时,谓语动词要加 -s。