Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
For me, I prefer typing because when I use tap to express myself, it can quickly end more convenient, such as when we write a report, typing is good.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I use them every day because. On the holiday there have there are different works need to use desk, desktop or laptop keyboard.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learn how to tip a keyboard in my free time when I finished my study or work. I have my own time to learn something I need to know and I like the quiet atmosphere to learn it. Maybe in the morning or in the.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
There are many ways I use to improve my typing, for example. I sign up for some online clothes online class that taught me how to type in quickly or properly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、准确并使用恰当词汇。建议先直接回答(I prefer typing),然后给出一到两条具体原因并用连接词衔接,避免语法错误和重复。可以练习常用表达如“more convenient”、“faster”、“easier to edit”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. It's faster and more convenient for tasks like writing reports, because it's easier to edit and share documents quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更连贯并注意句子完整。先给出明确主句(Yes, I do.),然后说明频率和原因,避免断句和重复。使用时间状语(e.g. every day, during holidays)并举具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a computer every day. Even during holidays I often need to type for different tasks, such as writing emails or finishing online assignments.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要用正确时态并给出具体时间或阶段(e.g. at school, a few years ago)。保持句子完整并避免含糊。可以说明学习方式和时间段,使用连接词如“so”或“because”。
Ví dụ: I learned to type a few years ago during my free time after finishing school. I practised at home in the mornings because I prefer a quiet atmosphere for learning.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要具体说明方法並使用准确词汇。不要重复或使用错误词(如“clothes”)。列举一到两个具体方法(online typing courses, practice with typing tests, regular practice)并说明效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by taking online typing courses and practising with timed typing tests. Regular daily practice helps me increase speed and reduce errors.
× For me, I prefer typing because when I use tap to express myself, it can quickly end more convenient, such as when we write a report, typing is good.
✓ For me, I prefer typing because when I use typing to express myself, it is quicker and more convenient; for example, when we write a report, typing is better.
句子中多处动词和动名词使用不当:原句的 'use tap' 用词错误,且 'end more convenient' 结构不正确。应使用动名词 'typing' 或动词短语 'use typing' 来表达使用键入,比较时用形容词比较级 'quicker and more convenient',并用连接词重组句子以清晰表达。建议多练习动名词与动词短语的搭配以及比较级表达。
× Yes I do. I use them every day because. On the holiday there have there are different works need to use desk, desktop or laptop keyboard.
✓ Yes, I do. I use them every day because on holidays there is different work that needs a desktop or laptop keyboard.
原句存在人称单数和主谓一致问题:'there have there are different works' 混用且不符合主谓一致,应使用 'there is' 或 'there are' 取决于后面的名词单复数。这里 'work' 作不可数或单数职业/任务时用 'there is different work',但更自然是 'there is different work that needs a desktop or laptop keyboard' 或将 'work' 改为复数 'tasks' 并使用 'there are tasks that need...'. 同时 'need' 要与先行词一致并使用关系从句 'that needs'。建议注意主谓一致和从句动词形式。
× I learn how to tip a keyboard in my free time when I finished my study or work.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in my free time after I finished my studies or work.
句子时态混用:主句 'I learn' 用现在时而时间状语 'when I finished' 用过去时,应统一时态表达过去经历,使用过去时 'learned'。此外,动词 'tip' 应为 'type',固定搭配为 'type on a keyboard','study' 作可数或不可数时此处用复数 'studies' 更自然。建议在描述过去发生的动作时统一使用过去时并注意常见拼写。
× I have my own time to learn something I need to know and I like the quiet atmosphere to learn it.
✓ I have my own time to learn what I need to know, and I like the quiet atmosphere for learning.
原句重复且结构不够地道:'something I need to know' 可改为限定性从句 'what I need to know',更明确。'the quiet atmosphere to learn it' 中的 'to learn it' 结构不自然,应使用动名词短语 'for learning'。建议使用更简洁的从句和合适的介词短语来表达目的。
× Maybe in the morning or in the.
✓ Maybe in the morning or in the evening.
原句不完整,缺少并列项的具体内容。根据上下文,应为 'in the morning or in the evening'(或 'afternoon')来表示可能的时间段。建议完整表达时间范围以使句子完整。
× There are many ways I use to improve my typing, for example. I sign up for some online clothes online class that taught me how to type in quickly or properly.
✓ There are many ways I use to improve my typing. For example, I sign up for some online classes that teach me how to type quickly and properly.
原句存在动词形式和名词形式错误:'clothes online class' 是拼写/词序错误,应为 'online classes'(复数更自然)。时态应与常态一致,使用一般现在时 'teach',而不是过去时 'taught',因为这是持续或反复发生的动作。'how to type in quickly' 中 'in' 多余,应为 'how to type quickly',并用 'properly' 表示正确地。建议注意动名词短语、复数形式以及副词位置。