Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because it is convenient for me. We use computer a lot today. So just like, uh, sending emails? How do you work?
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I always use the laptop in nowadays. For me as a trainer I must go to different places, just like the store, the office and the the class office. So are you.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Well, it's maybe on my secondary school 'cause I remember I had a lessons about typing and and interdays computer is not very popular in China and we don't have too much time to.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think the word practice make perfect so I always use much of time to type in. For me I want to attend the health test on computers so I match the typing the words.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需更直接且自然,避免多余填充词(如 "uh"、疑问句回问考官)。开头句可明确表明立场,随后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持。注意句子数量不超过5句且逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents quickly and send them by email, which saves time compared with handwriting.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需更清晰并避免多余内容(如把话题转回考官)。先直接回答问题(desktop or laptop),再用一两句具体原因支持,并检查语法("nowadays"位置和冠词用法)。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because I travel between my office, training sites and stores. The laptop is portable, so I can prepare materials and check emails wherever I go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁并注意时态与连贯性。先给出一个明确时间点,然后用一两句具体细节说明(例如课程内容或练习频率)。避免语法和表达错误("interdays" 应为 "in those days")。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in secondary school when we had a basic computer class. At that time computers were not common, so we only had a few lessons focused on typing and simple programs.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并说明具体方法。先给主要方法(practice),然后列举具体练习方式(在线练习、计时测试、练习速度与准确性)。修正句子结构与用词("practice makes perfect")。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising regularly on online typing sites and doing timed tests to increase speed and accuracy. I also copy passages to improve my accuracy and use shortcut keys to work more efficiently.
× I prefer typing because it is convenient for me. We use computer a lot today.
✓ I prefer typing because it is convenient for me. We use computers a lot today.
问题:名词单复数与一般现在时搭配不当(属于现在时语境)。说明:在一般陈述现在事实时,应使用一般现在时,并且“computer”在此处指代可数名词的复数用法。建议:将“computer”改为复数“computers”。(简体中文)
× So just like, uh, sending emails? How do you work?
✓ So, just like sending emails. How do you work?
问题:在口语句子中标点和连接处理不当,导致句子结构不清晰。说明:原句用了问号和不完整的短语,建议将“just like”后的短语作为例子并用句号分开,形成两个完整句子。建议:去掉不必要问号并调整为完整句子。
× Well, I always use the laptop in nowadays.
✓ Well, I always use a laptop nowadays.
问题:时态与限定词使用不当(属于现在时语境)。说明:固定用法是“nowadays”与一般现在时连用,表示现在的习惯;同时“the laptop”暗指特定一台,口语中应使用不定冠词“a laptop”。建议:改为“use a laptop nowadays”。
× For me as a trainer I must go to different places, just like the store, the office and the the class office. So are you.
✓ As a trainer, I must go to different places, like the store, the office and the class. How about you?
问题:句子结构与主谓呼应错误,并且后半句用法不当。说明:“So are you”不是恰当的回应或反问,正确表达应为“How about you?”此外,“the the class office”重复且措辞奇怪,应简化为“the class”或“the classroom”。建议:重写为两部分:说明工作地点的句子和礼貌反问“How about you?”。
× Well, it's maybe on my secondary school 'cause I remember I had a lessons about typing and and interdays computer is not very popular in China and we don't have too much time to.
✓ Well, maybe in secondary school, because I remember I had a lesson about typing, and in those days computers were not very popular in China and we didn't have much time.
问题:过去时使用错误及名词复数/单数、介词短语和句子末尾结构不完整。说明:描述过去经历应使用过去时“were”与“didn't”;“a lessons”应为单数“a lesson”;“interdays”应为“in those days”;“too much time to”句尾不完整需改为“didn't have much time”。建议:按上述更正,使用过去时和正确的词形。
× I think the word practice make perfect so I always use much of time to type in.
✓ I think practice makes perfect, so I always spend a lot of time typing.
问题:动词形式、短语搭配和词类使用错误。说明:短语应为“practice makes perfect”,主语单数时动词要加-s;“use much of time to”是不自然的搭配,应改为“spend a lot of time typing”。建议:用“makes”并用固定搭配“spend a lot of time + verb-ing”。
× For me I want to attend the health test on computers so I match the typing the words.
✓ I want to take a computer-based health test, so I'm practicing typing words.
问题:句子结构混乱、动词搭配和用词错误。说明:“attend the health test on computers”表意不清,建议改为“take a computer-based health test”;“match the typing the words”不合语法,应改为“practicing typing words”或“practise typing”。建议:重构句子,使用“practicing typing words”来表示练习打字以应对测试。