Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because I learned to type playing video games, so I can type quickly. For example, gaming taught me keyboard shortcuts and timings, which improved my speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one or two specific details. Reduce hesitations and repeat words. Use a linking phrase to expand.

Ví dụ: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my laptop is not high-end. Specifically, I use a mechanical keyboard for gaming and typing since it is more comfortable and responsive.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct tense and a concise time reference, then give one specific detail. Avoid repeating phrases and improve grammar (past tense).

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight years old. Back then I played games like GTA Vice City, and practising the controls helped me get familiar with the keyboard early on.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain one or two concrete practices you use to improve. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by chatting with friends online, which forces me to type often. For example, I join group chats and reply quickly, and I also play typing practice games to increase speed and accuracy.

× Uh, if you talking about my personal choice, I love typing because I am uh, uh, uh, I have a pretty much good interest in gaming.

✓ Uh, if you are talking about my personal choice, I love typing because I have a strong interest in gaming.

The original uses 'if you talking' which omits the auxiliary 'are' needed for the present continuous form (be + -ing). Also 'I am ... I have a pretty much good interest' is non-idiomatic: 'I am' is unnecessary and 'pretty much good interest' is incorrect adjective use; 'a strong interest' is natural. Suggestion: include the auxiliary verb with -ing (are talking) and use natural collocations like 'a strong interest'.

× Uh, so I got a hands on experience on keyboard, so I know how to type fast.

✓ I got hands-on experience with the keyboard, so I know how to type fast.

'a hands on experience' should be 'hands-on experience' (hyphenated adjective) and usually no article 'a' when speaking of experience in general. Preposition 'on' with 'experience' is less natural than 'with'. Also include 'the' before 'keyboard' if referring to a specific keyboard; here 'the keyboard' works. Suggestion: use 'hands-on experience with' and hyphenate 'hands-on'.

× I use uh, desktop uh, PC for my typing and for my uh, gaming things because my laptop is not uh uh, high end, so I prefer uh, desktop keyboards.

✓ I use a desktop PC for typing and gaming because my laptop is not high-end, so I prefer desktop keyboards.

Missing article before 'desktop PC' ('a desktop PC'). 'For my typing and for my gaming things' is wordy and awkward; use 'for typing and gaming'. 'High end' as a compound adjective should be hyphenated 'high-end'. Remove unnecessary 'my' and filler words. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and use concise collocations ('for typing and gaming').

× I learn how to type on a keyboard or how to use a keyboard when Firstly, the GTA Vice City was released in my childhood back in when I was almost 7 to 8 years old.

✓ I learned how to type and use a keyboard when GTA Vice City was released during my childhood, when I was about seven or eight years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I learn' with past events; use past tense 'learned'. 'Firstly' is misplaced and unnecessary. 'Back in when I was almost 7 to 8 years old' is awkward; use 'when I was about seven or eight years old'. Suggestion: shift verbs to past tense for past events and simplify time expressions.

× From that year of gaming, I experienced a lot of interest in this gaming industry.

✓ From that year of gaming, I developed a strong interest in the gaming industry.

'Experienced a lot of interest' is unnatural; collocation is 'developed an interest' or 'became very interested'. 'A lot of interest' is vague; 'a strong interest' is clearer. 'This gaming industry' should be 'the gaming industry'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'developed a strong interest in the gaming industry'.

× Mostly my typing is improved by chatting with friends and my group circle because they are they prefer messaging and typing instead of direct calling.

✓ Mostly my typing has improved by chatting with friends and my group because they prefer messaging and typing instead of calling directly.

'My typing is improved' is awkward passive; use present perfect 'has improved' to show a change over time. 'My group circle' is redundant; 'my group' is enough. 'They are they prefer' repeats 'they' incorrectly. 'Direct calling' is unnatural; use 'calling directly' or 'phone calls'. Suggestion: use present perfect for gradual improvement and correct word order ('calling directly').