Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting because my typing script is very slow and I'm not very like true type under computer difficult for me to handle. So I'm not like to typing, I will prefer to do a handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Umm I just type laptop keyboard every day is because I think laptop keyboard is just enough umm I think this is very comfortable for me to do some exercise or homework for example umm I need to do an essay umm essay homeworks and I will need to use my laptop to search some question and search and do and. Type my homework into computer. So I think I type a laptop cables everyday.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think that's when I was primary school student because in my primary school we need to do a homework on, on computer, which is umm, like a introduction, something on PowerPoint, we need to do a presentation presentation. So umm, in that time I've learned how to type in. And on the keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I just found some website for example I'm in online actually have a lot of website umm but I find they're quite interesting website. I am and I forgot about the website name umm which is just umm the screen which shows some umm vocabularies and you just type it and the apps would calculate. About your speed and your craft or nose on the number of your crash correct or not, and I think this is quite interesting for learning.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更直接和简洁,避免语法错误与重复。开头直接给出观点,然后用1-2个具体原因支持(例如速度、习惯或清晰度),并使用连词使句子流畅。注意时态和代词用法,别混用“typing/script/true type”。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I write faster and my typing is quite slow. For example, handwriting helps me organize my thoughts more clearly when I study, so I usually take notes by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更结构化,先给直接答案(Yes, I use a laptop),然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。减少口头语(umm)和冗长重复,注意单复数及词汇搭配(e.g. "essay homework"改为"essays"或"homework")。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and comfortable. For example, I often write essays and search for information online, so using my laptop is convenient for both research and typing.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 应直接回答时间点(e.g. when I was in primary school)並简要说明场景。减少重复和口语填充词,使用完整句并添加一两个具体细节(如做PowerPoint或演示)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school because our teachers asked us to create PowerPoint presentations. At that time I practiced typing while preparing slides for class projects.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要言简意赅,先说明方法(use online typing websites),再给出具体细节(typing drills, speed tests, feedback)和一个例子。避免含糊描述和重复,使用正确词汇(accuracy, speed, exercises)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using online typing websites that offer drills and speed tests. For example, a site gives me timed exercises and shows my accuracy and words-per-minute so I can track my progress.
× I prefer handwriting because my typing script is very slow and I'm not very like true type under computer difficult for me to handle.
✓ I prefer handwriting because my typing is very slow and I don't like typing on a computer; it's difficult for me to handle.
句中使用了不正确的代词和表达(例如“my typing script”、“I'm not very like true type under computer”),应使用正确的代词和固定搭配。建议:用“my typing”表示打字速度,用“don't like typing on a computer”表示不喜欢在电脑上打字。避免直译和拼凑短语。
× So I'm not like to typing, I will prefer to do a handwriting.
✓ So I don't like typing; I prefer to write by hand.
“I'm not like to typing”中主语和动词搭配错误,应使用“don't like + 动词原形(动名词)”,且“a handwriting”用法不当,应为“write by hand”或“handwriting”作为不可数名词。建议使用固定表达“prefer to write by hand”。
× Umm I just type laptop keyboard every day is because I think laptop keyboard is just enough umm I think this is very comfortable for me to do some exercise or homework for example umm I need to do an essay umm essay homeworks and I will need to use my laptop to search some question and search and do and. Type my homework into computer.
✓ I just type on a laptop keyboard every day because I think a laptop keyboard is sufficient. I find it comfortable for doing exercises or homework. For example, when I need to write an essay, I use my laptop to search for information and type my homework into the computer.
原句有多处代词、介词和可数名词用法错误(例如缺少介词“on”,重复和不完整的句子,“essay homeworks”应为“essays”或“essay homework”,“type my homework into computer”应为“type my homework into the computer”)。建议:注意介词搭配(type on)、名词单复数及完整句子表达。
× So I think I type a laptop cables everyday.
✓ So I think I type on a laptop keyboard every day.
原句“a laptop cables”有单复数和名词搭配错误:同时使用了不定冠词和复数形式且“cables”不符合语境,应为“a laptop keyboard”或“laptop keyboards”。建议:确认要表达的名词(keyboard)并确保单复数与冠词一致。
× I think that's when I was primary school student because in my primary school we need to do a homework on, on computer, which is umm, like a introduction, something on PowerPoint, we need to do a presentation presentation.
✓ I think it was when I was a primary school student because at my primary school we had to do homework on the computer, such as making an introduction or a PowerPoint presentation.
句中时态和冠词不当(“I was primary school student”缺少不定冠词,且事件发生在过去应使用过去式“had to”而非现在时“need to”)。同样“a presentation presentation”重复。建议:谈过去经历时使用过去时,并注意冠词和避免重复。
× So umm, in that time I've learned how to type in. And on the keyboard.
✓ So at that time I learned how to type on the keyboard.
原句混用了现在完成时和不完整的断句(“I've learned”与上下文过去时间冲突,应为过去时“learned”),并且介词和词序错误。建议:使用简单过去时描述过去发生的动作,并把句子合并为完整结构。
× I just found some website for example I'm in online actually have a lot of website umm but I find they're quite interesting website.
✓ I found some websites online; there are actually a lot of websites, and I find them quite interesting.
原句代词与数的一致性有误(“some website”应为“some websites”,代词“they're”应指复数名词),并且时态可用过去式“found”。建议:保持名词与代词在人称与数上的一致。
× I am and I forgot about the website name umm which is just umm the screen which shows some umm vocabularies and you just type it and the apps would calculate.
✓ I forgot the website's name. It displays a screen that shows some vocabulary and you just type it; the app calculates your speed and accuracy.
原句结构混乱,断句不完整,使用不恰当的时态和单复数(“vocabularies”应为“vocabulary”,“apps would calculate”应为“the app calculates”或“the app would calculate”取决于语境)。建议:将句子拆分为更清晰的短句,使用正确的名词形式和时态。
× About your speed and your craft or nose on the number of your crash correct or not, and I think this is quite interesting for learning.
✓ It measures your speed and the number of correct keystrokes, and I think this is quite interesting for learning.
原句中使用了不正确或误拼的词(“craft or nose”、“crash correct”),导致意思不清楚;应使用准确的名词短语“the number of correct keystrokes”或“accuracy”。建议:使用准确的词汇表达技术性指标,如“speed”与“accuracy”。