Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and fix errors like "in on the paper" and double words.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and reduces stress. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures I remember key points better than if I type them, so I revise more effectively.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, single-sentence topic answer then add one or two brief supporting details. Remove hesitations and repetitions, and finish the sentence. Use linking words like "because" to show reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for internet research and chatting with friends and colleagues. I usually spend an hour or two each day typing for study and communication.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with past tense and clear time reference. Reduce filler words and give one specific detail about the lessons (e.g., age, activities). Use a linking word like "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at primary school; we had computer classes once a week, so I practiced basic typing and simple programs from about age nine.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear method and a specific example of practice. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I practice typing") and avoid repeating the same idea. Include a linking phrase such as "for example" or "by" to show how you improve.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day; for example, I do 15 minutes of online typing exercises and regularly type essays, which has made me faster and more familiar with the keyboard.

× I prefer handwriting because when I'm writing in on the paper I can focus my my mind and relieve my stress and remember things quickly than the typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I'm writing on paper I can focus my mind, relieve my stress, and remember things more quickly than when typing.

Errors: extra preposition 'in', duplicated 'my', incorrect comparison structure 'remember things quickly than the typing', and missing commas. Use 'writing on paper' (no 'in'), 'focus my mind' (single 'my'), and comparative 'more quickly than when typing'. Also remove the article before 'paper' and 'the' before 'typing'.

× So I prefer handwriting it can remember the things quickly.

✓ So I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things quickly.

Run-on sentence and incorrect subject 'it can remember the things quickly'. Add conjunction 'because' and correct subject 'it helps me' and remove unnecessary article 'the'. This clarifies meaning and corrects structure.

× Uh, yeah, yes, I I type on my laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop keyboard every day.

Redundant fillers 'Uh, yeah, yes' and repeated word 'I I' create disfluency. For clear written response, use a single affirmative 'Yes' and one 'I'.

× I have a laptop on my desk, so I need to type on the laptop every day to search on the Internet and chat with my friends and colleagues and.

✓ I have a laptop on my desk, so I need to type on it every day to search the Internet and chat with my friends and colleagues.

Use 'type on it' to avoid repetition, and 'search the Internet' is correct rather than 'search on the Internet'. Remove trailing 'and' at the end. Also avoid repeating 'the laptop'. Replace 'search on the Internet' with 'search the Internet'.

× Uh, when I was young, we have the computer classes, uh, so I learn how to type on a, a keyboard and yeah.

✓ When I was young, we had computer classes, so I learned how to type on a keyboard.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'had' and 'learned' instead of present 'have' and 'learn'. Remove filler words and extra articles 'a, a'.

× And we, we use the, uh, computer, uh, once a week.

✓ And we used the computer once a week.

Context is past ('when I was young'), so verb should be past 'used' not present 'use'. Remove fillers and unnecessary commas. Replace 'the computer' with 'the computer' is acceptable but keep concise.

× So I I just typing on the laptop every day.

✓ So I just type on the laptop every day.

Incorrect verb form: use base form 'type' after subject, not present participle 'typing'. Remove duplicate 'I I'.

× So which help me to improve my typing.

✓ This helps me improve my typing.

Sentence fragment 'So which help me...' lacks a clear subject; replace with 'This helps me' and use present simple 'helps' for habitual action. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'improve'.

× So we need to practice every day and improve the typing skills and familiar with the keyboard.

✓ So we need to practice every day to improve our typing skills and become familiar with the keyboard.

Use 'to improve' for purpose, 'our typing skills' instead of 'the typing skills', and 'become familiar with' rather than just 'familiar with'. Corrects quantifier/possessive and verb form.