Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer temping because in these days we all have our cell phones and computers, so it's much more convenient to tamping on the laptop or desktop that you can take easy in any way you want, but for handwriting that's really outdated and less convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Actually I tapping on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my laptop so I can take it easy to library for study and everywhere I want, but for desktop is really huge and heavy, I can't carry it to the coffee shop or library.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
That is about 16 years old in the middle school and we have a computer class so we get together in that case we protect how to tamping and the known the keyboard scale that really drive me camping quickly and accurately.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Yes, actually I have a computer team both class in the middle school because in that in that case, we always protect tapping exercise and learn how to use the Kimball some space go such as that and it really drive me camping quickly and accurate 80 in the attempts.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 发音和用词注意纠正(如 typing 而非 temping/tamping),回答要更简洁并包含一两个具体原因。句子不宜过长,注意主句和从句结构,使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来保持连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents easily on my phone or laptop and share them instantly with others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意动词形式和短语使用(use "I type on my laptop every day" 而非 "I tapping" 或 "take it easy to library")。回答结构清晰:先直接回答,再给一两个具体理由,使用连接词 like "because" 或 "so"。
Ví dụ: I type on my laptop every day because it's portable and convenient. I often take it to the library or a café to study, which I couldn't do with a desktop computer.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 时间表达要准确(说 "when I was 16"),并用清晰的句子描述学习过程。避免错误动词(learned, practiced 而不是 protect/tamping/camping)。可用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来解释效果。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about 16 in middle school. We had a computer class where we practiced typing exercises, which helped me type more quickly and accurately.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要具体并用正确词汇说明提升方法,例如 regular practice, online typing tests, accuracy drills。避免重复和无意义短语,使用清晰的连接词来解释方法和效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing through regular practice and online typing tests. I also do drills focusing on accuracy and use typing software that tracks my speed, which gradually increased my WPM and reduced errors.
× I prefer temping because in these days we all have our cell phones and computers, so it's much more convenient to tamping on the laptop or desktop that you can take easy in any way you want, but for handwriting that's really outdated and less convenient.
✓ I prefer typing because these days we all have cell phones and computers, so it's much more convenient to type on a laptop or desktop and you can take them anywhere you want; handwriting is outdated and less convenient.
句子结构混乱与用词错误(如 temping/tamping )导致意思不清。应使用动名词 typing/an infinitive type,去掉多余词组“in these days”改为常用表达 these days;将不定式或动名词形式统一为 type 或 typing;修正代词和并列结构,使句子更通顺。建议多练习主从句连接与代词一致性。
× Actually I tapping on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my laptop so I can take it easy to library for study and everywhere I want, but for desktop is really huge and heavy, I can't carry it to the coffee shop or library.
✓ Actually I tap/type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my laptop, so I can take it easily to the library or anywhere I want. A desktop is really big and heavy; I can't carry it to a coffee shop or the library.
原句主谓不一致且动词形式错误(I tapping 应为 I tap/I type)。另外存在名词单复数和冠词问题(to library -> to the library;for desktop -> A desktop)。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯动作,注意主语与动词形式一致并且加上适当冠词。
× That is about 16 years old in the middle school and we have a computer class so we get together in that case we protect how to tamping and the known the keyboard scale that really drive me camping quickly and accurately.
✓ I was about 16 years old in middle school when we had a computer class. We learned how to type and learned the keyboard layout, which really helped me type quickly and accurately.
原句时态混用且动词形式错误(is -> was;have -> had;protect/tamping/drive/known 等为无意义的错误词)。应使用过去时描述过去经历(was, had, learned)。还需修正词汇为正确的动词或名词(learned, keyboard layout, helped me type)。建议复习过去时的常用表达和正确词汇。
× Yes, actually I have a computer team both class in the middle school because in that in that case, we always protect tapping exercise and learn how to use the Kimball some space go such as that and it really drive me camping quickly and accurate 80 in the attempts.
✓ Yes. In middle school I was in a computer club and we often did typing exercises and learned how to use the keyboard properly. This really helped me type quickly and accurately.
原句结构混乱、重复用词并包含许多拼写与词汇错误(computer team both class, protect tapping exercise, Kimball, camping, accurate 80)。需要重构句子,使用清晰的主谓结构和正确词汇(computer club/class, typing exercises, keyboard, helped me type quickly and accurately)。建议多练习句子重构与词汇准确使用,并检查拼写。