Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer type typing because I belong to typing club Club in journey in high school student and the college is difficult for me so typing is changing character easily. Just one tab, yeah that's all.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do uh, in my university, uh, most assignment are like report or essay, uh, log essay. So I have backpack laptop. So yeah every day using this one.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Elementary school because my mother teach typing on game Pokémon Pokémon name game so I think cool typing over.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think that just everyday typing uh for 10 minutes three times because I improve my timing typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は主旨が伝わりますが、文法や語順、語彙の選び方に不自然さがあり、冗長・反復も見られます。まず簡潔なトピックセンテンス(I prefer typing.)で始め、続けて理由を2つまでに絞って具体例を1つ加える構成にしましょう。接続詞(because, so, for example, therefore)を使って論理を明確にし、重複(typing club Clubなど)やあいまいな表現を避けてください。文法面では時制と冠詞、前置詞の誤りを正し、発音で躊躇する部分は短いフレーズで練習して流暢さを上げると良いです。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. I joined a typing club in high school, so I'm comfortable with keyboards and can type quickly. For example, when I edit essays, I can change words easily with a single keystroke, which saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答えは肯定して理由も述べていますが、流暢さを妨げる多くのうなり(uh)と語順・冠詞の誤りがあります。まずは短い明確な主文(Yes, I do. I use my laptop every day.)を言い、その後で理由を一つ加えましょう。集合名詞や複数形の一致(assignments)と冠詞(a laptop)にも注意してください。接続詞(because, so)を使って文をつなげ、言い換えの練習で詰まりを減らしましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I use a laptop every day because most of my university assignments are reports and essays. I usually carry it in my backpack and work on it between classes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 答えは時期を示していますが、文法(過去形)、語順、語彙選択が不正確で、詳細が不明瞭です。まず直接に時期を答え(I learned to type in elementary school.)、次に短い理由や具体例(My mother taught me using a typing game)を付け加えましょう。具体的なゲーム名を1回だけ述べ、感想は簡潔に(I thought it was fun)表現すると良いです。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in elementary school. My mother taught me using a Pokémon-themed typing game, and I found it fun, so I practiced regularly.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 改善法は述べていますが、不必要な語句と躊躇があり、表現の正確さが不足しています。具体的な練習方法と頻度を明確にし、目的(speed, accuracy)を含めて話すと説得力が増します。例:I practice for ten minutes three times a day using online typing tests to improve my speed and accuracy. また、linking words(for example, by doing this)で論理をつなげましょう。
Ví dụ: I practice typing every day for about ten minutes, three times a day. For example, I use online typing tests and focus on accuracy first, then gradually increase my speed.
× I prefer type typing because I belong to typing club Club in journey in high school student and the college is difficult for me so typing is changing character easily. Just one tab, yeah that's all.
✓ I prefer typing because I belonged to a typing club during my time as a high school student, and college was difficult for me, so typing changed my character easily. Just one tap, yeah that's all.
The sentence has multiple issues: word choice and adjective/adverb usage (using 'type typing' instead of 'typing'; 'changing character easily' should be 'changed my character easily' to match context), articles ('a typing club'), tense consistency ('belonged' and 'changed' for past context), and vocabulary ('tab' should be 'tap' if referring to a key press). Suggestion: use correct noun/verb forms (typing), include appropriate articles (a), maintain consistent past tense for past experiences, and choose the correct word (tap).
× Yes, I do uh, in my university, uh, most assignment are like report or essay, uh, log essay. So I have backpack laptop. So yeah every day using this one.
✓ Yes, I do. At my university, most assignments are reports or essays, like lab reports or long essays. I have a laptop in my backpack, so I use it every day.
Errors include article and plural usage: 'most assignment' should be 'most assignments' (plural), 'report or essay' should be plural nouns, and 'I have backpack laptop' needs articles and word order ('I have a laptop in my backpack'). Also sentence fragments ('So yeah every day using this one') need a subject and verb: 'so I use it every day.' Suggestion: ensure plural forms for countable nouns, include articles where needed, and write complete sentences with subjects and verbs.
× Elementary school because my mother teach typing on game Pokémon Pokémon name game so I think cool typing over.
✓ I learned in elementary school because my mother taught me typing through a Pokémon game, so I thought typing was cool.
The main problems are verb tense and form: use past tense 'learned' and 'taught' for past events. 'Teach' should be 'taught', and 'my mother teach typing on game' needs object and preposition changes: 'taught me typing through a Pokémon game'. Also word order and clarity: 'I thought typing was cool.' Suggestion: use past tense for completed actions, include direct objects, and choose correct prepositions ('through' or 'using').
× I think that just everyday typing uh for 10 minutes three times because I improve my timing typing.
✓ I think that just typing every day for 10 minutes, three times, helps improve my typing speed.
Problems: word order and gerund usage: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase), and 'timing typing' is incorrect—use 'typing speed' or 'typing timing'. Also sentence needs a main verb: 'helps improve.' Suggestion: use 'typing' as a gerund with a clear object ('typing speed'), write 'every day' as two words for frequency, and include a main verb to complete the sentence.