Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well I prefer handwriting because it make me very real unlike typing. Handwriting is is just like a another way to talk and typing is virtual so I don't like it.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I type on keyboard every day because keyboard is very convenient and the laptop is is less convenient than it so.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't really know that, maybe from the time I have form and I need to type them on phone before gradually I I learn how to type on computer or keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually I I didn't improve it before because I think it is a habit if you fearful if you are used of to it, you will learn it very soon.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 首先你的回答直接回应了问题,这是好的。但要注意语法(动词形式、冠词)和重复词(如“is is”)。句子不要过长或重复,控制在最多5句。可以增加一两条具体原因或例子并使用连接词(because, for example, so)使表达更连贯。发音上注意单词复数/动词变化的清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and tangible. For example, when I write a letter by hand, I can add little notes and drawings that make it unique. In contrast, typing feels more impersonal and fast, so I usually choose handwriting for important or thoughtful messages.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但表达含糊且有语法错误与重复(如“is is”,以及代词指代不清)。应明确说明使用的是desktop还是 laptop,并给出具体原因和比较,使用连词(because, although, while)使逻辑更清晰。注意冠词(a/the)和可数名词形式。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. Although desktop keyboards are sometimes more comfortable for long typing sessions, I prefer my laptop since I can work from different places.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏清晰时间点且语法混乱。应给出明确的时间框架(e.g., at school, as a child, in high school)并说明学习过程,用连接词(then, then gradually, after that)组织顺序。避免重复词并使用正确时态和代词。
Ví dụ: I don't remember the exact date, but I learned to type when I was in primary school. At first I practiced typing on my phone, and then as I started using computers at school, I gradually improved my keyboard skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容含混且逻辑不清,语法和搭配错误较多(例如“used of to it”,“fearful”用法不当)。考官希望听到具体方法(练习软件、定时练习、课程、练习打字速度与准确性等)并用连词说明原因。建议给出步骤或计划,使用正确词汇如 practice, typing lessons, online tutors, accuracy, speed。
Ví dụ: To improve my typing, I would practice for 20 minutes a day using online typing tutors to increase my speed and accuracy. I would also focus on proper finger placement and take weekly tests to track my progress.
× Well I prefer handwriting because it make me very real unlike typing.
✓ Well, I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more real compared with typing.
原句中用到動詞 make,但主語是單數第三人稱 handwritING(視為單一偏好)或主語為 I prefer handwriting,真正影響的是 "handwriting" 作為第三人稱單數應搭配動詞 makes;此外原句的形容詞/副詞用法混亂("very real" 和想表達的感覺不太貼切),更自然的表達是 "makes me feel more real"。建議:注意主語與動詞的一致性,並用動詞短語(make sb feel...)來表達感受。
× Handwriting is is just like a another way to talk and typing is virtual so I don't like it.
✓ Handwriting is just another way to communicate, while typing feels virtual, so I don't like it.
原句有重複詞("is is")與冠詞誤用("a another" 應為 "another"),句子結構也不夠連貫。調整為兩個並列分句,並用更自然的詞(communicate, feels virtual)。建議:刪掉重複詞,正確使用冠詞,並用連詞(while, so)使句子更通順。
× Well, I type on keyboard every day because keyboard is very convenient and the laptop is is less convenient than it so.
✓ Well, I type on the keyboard every day because the keyboard is very convenient, and the laptop is less convenient than it.
原句缺少定冠詞(應為 "the keyboard" 而非一般名詞 "keyboard"),並有重複詞("is is")。此外句尾的比較中不需要加 "so"(可視語氣決定)。建議:注意可數名詞前視情況使用定冠詞或不使用,刪除重複詞,使比較結構簡潔。
× Actually I don't really know that, maybe from the time I have form and I need to type them on phone before gradually I I learn how to type on computer or keyboard.
✓ Actually I don't really know—maybe from the time I was in form school and needed to type on the phone, and gradually I learned how to type on a computer or keyboard.
原句時態混亂,使用現在時(don't really know, have)與想表達過去經驗的情況不一致,且有重複詞("I I")。應將描述過去經驗的動詞改為過去式(was, needed, learned)。建議:敘述過去經驗時統一使用過去時,並刪除重複詞,提高句子清晰度。
× Actually I I didn't improve it before because I think it is a habit if you fearful if you are used of to it, you will learn it very soon.
✓ Actually I didn't try to improve it before because I thought it was a habit: if you are familiar with it, you will learn it very quickly.
原句有重複詞("I I")和結構混亂("if you fearful if you are used of to it")。"fearful" 用法不當,短語應為 "be used to" 或 "be familiar with"。時態也需要一致(過去描述用過去時 thought, was)。建議:刪除重複詞,使用正確片語(be familiar with / be used to),保持時態一致,並用 clearer 連接詞或標點分隔主從句。