Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition ("friends" and "your" twice) and use natural phrasing ("by hand" instead of "by your hand").

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. It feels more personal, especially when writing letters to close friends, because a handwritten note shows more care and thought than a typed message.

Gợi ý: Clarify your main point and fix factual/logical errors. Begin with a clear statement (desktop or laptop), then give one coherent reason with correct comparisons. Use linking words (because, so) and correct vocabulary (textbooks, lighter/heavier).

Ví dụ: I usually use a laptop rather than a desktop because I need to carry it to school with my textbooks, and a laptop is much lighter and more portable.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and link cause and effect clearly. Start with the time, then explain briefly how you learned and the result, using linking words like "so" or "which".

Ví dụ: I learned to type about six years ago when I was in junior high. My teacher showed us basic computer skills, which made it much easier for me to complete homework and type assignments quickly.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant but can be slightly enriched with more specific details about the practice routine or measurable results. Use linking words to connect the method and the outcome.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing daily with an app called "Sushi Linda." I do 20 minutes of drills each day, which has noticeably increased my speed and reduced my errors over the past few months.

× For example, if you are going to write letters to your friends, it is more straightforward to show your appreciation to your friends if you write by your hand rather than typing.

✓ For example, if you are going to write letters to your friends, it is more straightforward to show your appreciation to your friends if you write by hand rather than type.

Use of the preposition 'by' + noun ('by your hand') is unnatural here; the correct idiom is 'write by hand'. Also maintain parallel verb forms: 'write by hand rather than type' keeps verbs consistent. Suggestion: use idiomatic prepositional phrase 'by hand' and parallel verb structure.

× I prefer a desktop computer because as an shouldn't, I usually have a lot of textbook to go with me to school, and it's more lighter and straightforward to carry desktop rather than laptop.

✓ I prefer a desktop computer because, as I shouldn't, I usually have a lot of textbooks to take to school, and it's lighter and more convenient to carry a desktop rather than a laptop.

Multiple issues: 'a lot of textbook' should be plural 'textbooks' (article error / singular-plural), 'to go with me to school' is awkward; use 'to take to school'. 'It's more lighter' is incorrect; use either 'lighter' or 'more light' — correct is 'lighter' (adjective form). Also articles are needed before 'desktop' and 'laptop'. 'As I shouldn't' is unclear but preserved per instruction only correcting listed types; here corrected to keep intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure nouns match singular/plural and use appropriate articles and comparative adjective forms.

× I learned about six years ago when I was junior high school student.

✓ I learned about six years ago when I was a junior high school student.

Missing article 'a' before 'junior high school student' is an article error; also sentence tense is fine. Suggestion: include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns.

× My teacher showed me how to start a laptop and type on the computer, and those experience made me much easier to finish homework.

✓ My teacher showed me how to start a laptop and type on the computer, and those experiences made it much easier for me to finish my homework.

Several article and noun-form errors: 'those experience' should be plural 'those experiences'. 'Made me much easier' is incorrect structure — use 'made it much easier for me'. 'Finish homework' needs a determiner: 'finish my homework'. Suggestion: make noun forms agree in number, use correct idiomatic causative structure 'made it easier for me', and include possessive for homework.

× I prefer a desktop computer because as an shouldn't, I usually have a lot of textbook to go with me to school, and it's more lighter and straightforward to carry desktop rather than laptop.

✓ I prefer a desktop computer because, since I usually have a lot of textbooks to take to school, it's lighter and more convenient to carry a desktop rather than a laptop.

Prepositional phrase 'to go with me to school' is awkward; 'to take to school' is idiomatic. Also 'carry desktop' needs an article: 'carry a desktop'. Suggestion: use idiomatic prepositions and include articles with countable nouns.