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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing. This is because it is very useful for me. For example, I can uh no taste. I can do not taking with typing uh for student handwriting.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I type on laptop. This is because I work as marketing manager, so I use I type laptop to make some contents for marketing advertisements.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

When I was Virginia high school student, I studied typing on it lesson. It helps me typing more fast.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

When I was a junior high school student, I used a typing game to improve my typing skill. It is very useful because usually type in practice. Practice it's very boring. So typing game makes me fun.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答を簡潔かつ明確にし、意味の不明瞭な表現(“no taste”, “do not taking”など)を修正してください。また、1つの理由を述べた後に具体例を1つ入れて、文のつながりを示す接続語(for example, because, so)を使ってください。発音のあいまいさを減らすために、文を落ち着いて話す練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and save my notes easily on a laptop, so I rarely need to rewrite them by hand.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答の構造を整え、文法ミス(冠詞や語順)を直してください。仕事の理由を述べる際は接続詞(because, so)で自然につなぎ、具体的な作業内容を一つ示すと説得力が増します。語彙は“contents”より具体的な単語(documents, campaign materials)を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I work as a marketing manager. I usually use it to write campaign materials and prepare advertisements for our products.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 時制と語順、前置詞の誤りを直してください(“When I was a high school student in Virginia”など)。さらに、学んだ時期とその効果を論理的につなげる接続語(and, so, which)を使い、具体的な成果(wpmや具体的な改善点)を示すと良いです。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a high school student in Virginia, and the typing classes helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 現在の改善方法について話す場合は現在形を使い、過去の経験と区別してください(現在継続中なら“Nowadays I”)。理由を述べるときは簡潔にし、接続詞(because, so, which)で文をつなぎ、冗長な表現は避けましょう。また“make it fun”のような自然な表現に直してください。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing with typing games because they make repetitive practice more enjoyable, which helps me stay motivated to practice regularly.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer typing. This is because it is very useful for me.

I prefer typing because it is very useful to me.

この文では 'useful for me' も許容されますが、より自然な英語では 'useful to me' と言うことが多く、また文中の不要な句読点を取り除き一文にすることで流れが良くなります。改善案: 'I prefer typing because it is very useful to me.'

Sentence structure errors

× For example, I can uh no taste.

For example, I don't lose my train of thought.

元の文は意味が不明瞭です。おそらく『考えが途切れない』や『集中を保てる』などを言いたかった可能性があります。文構造を明確にして意味に合う表現に直しました。改善案: 'For example, I don't lose my train of thought.'

Incorrect use of verbs

× I can do not taking with typing uh for student handwriting.

I can take notes by typing rather than by handwriting.

元の文は語順と動詞形が誤っています。'do not taking' は誤りで、'take notes' が正しい動詞句です。また 'with typing for student handwriting' は不自然なので 'by typing rather than by handwriting' の形にして比較を明確にしました。改善案: 'I can take notes by typing rather than by handwriting.'

Present tense issue

× Yes I do. I type on laptop.

Yes, I do. I type on a laptop.

可算名詞 'laptop' には冠詞が必要です。また 'Yes I do.' の後に読点を入れると自然です。改善案: 'Yes, I do. I type on a laptop.'

Incorrect use of articles

× This is because I work as marketing manager, so I use I type laptop to make some contents for marketing advertisements.

This is because I work as a marketing manager, so I use my laptop to create content for marketing advertisements.

職業の前には不定冠詞が必要です('a marketing manager')。'I use I type laptop' は冗長かつ誤りで、'my laptop' が正しい所有表現です。'make some contents' は不自然で集合名詞として 'create content' を使います。改善案: 'This is because I work as a marketing manager, so I use my laptop to create content for marketing advertisements.'

Past tense issue

× When I was Virginia high school student, I studied typing on it lesson.

When I was a high school student in Virginia, I took typing lessons there.

時制自体は過去で問題ありませんが、語順と冠詞が不適切です。'Virginia high school student' は 'a high school student in Virginia' の方が自然です。'studied typing on it lesson' は誤った語順なので 'took typing lessons there' に直しました。改善案: 'When I was a high school student in Virginia, I took typing lessons there.'

Verb in the present participle form

× It helps me typing more fast.

It helped me type faster.

文脈が過去の経験を述べているため過去形にするべきです('helps' → 'helped')。また 'me typing' は不自然で動詞の原形 'type' を使います。'more fast' は誤りで副詞比較は 'faster' を使います。改善案: 'It helped me type faster.'

Past tense issue

× When I was a junior high school student, I used a typing game to improve my typing skill.

When I was a junior high school student, I used a typing game to improve my typing skills.

文はほとんど正しいですが 'typing skill' は通常複数形で 'typing skills' と表現します。改善案: '...to improve my typing skills.'

Sentence structure errors

× It is very useful because usually type in practice.

It was very useful because I usually practiced typing with it.

主語が欠けており時制と語順が不自然です。過去の話をしているため過去形にし、主語 'I' を補って 'practiced typing with it' とするのが自然です。改善案: 'It was very useful because I usually practiced typing with it.'

Sentence structure errors

× Practice it's very boring.

Practice is very boring.

'Practice it's' は誤った短縮形であり、正しくは 'Practice is' です。さらに文脈が過去なら 'Practice was very boring.' にすることもできます。改善案: 'Practice is very boring.'

Sentence structure errors

× So typing game makes me fun.

So the typing game makes learning fun for me.

'makes me fun' は誤った表現で、'make something fun' の構造を使うべきです。ここでは 'the typing game makes learning fun for me' のように目的語と補語を明確にしました。改善案: 'So the typing game makes learning fun for me.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
FastSpeedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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