Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
For me I prefer typing because in a quick pace in the environment I think typing is have more efficiency and you can time more within the limited time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I tap on a laptop because it's the only keyboard when I get in the compo company and the company will offer one. So instead of a desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type in college and there's a course called computer intelligence and the teacher will taught me how to type and they also have a header examination of the texting speed.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
As I said, I had a communal intelligence course during college and where the teacher told me some proper typing techniques and we also have to take a typing speed test with some typing software and which tell me I'm a lot in improving.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需更自然、语法更准确,突出主题句并用一两句具体支持理由。注意时态和词序,避免冗长重复。例如把“in a quick pace in the environment”简化并改为具体情境。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting. Typing is more efficient when I need to work quickly, such as during exams or meetings, and it helps me save time and organise my notes more easily.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,使用了不准确的词(tap, compo)。应直接回答并补充简短理由或例子,使用连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop. My company provides laptops to all employees, so I don't have access to a desktop, and I find the laptop keyboard convenient for working at different places.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 需要更准确的时态和词汇(例如“taught”,"typing speed test"),并用一两句说明学习内容或感受,使回答具体。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in college during a course on basic computer skills. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and we had to take a typing speed test to track our progress.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且语法错误较多,应直接说出现在如何练习并举具体方法或工具,使用连接词提高流畅度。避免重复前面内容。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising with online typing programs and exercises. I use typing software to practise daily, focusing on accuracy first and then increasing speed, and I regularly track my progress with timed tests.
× For me I prefer typing because in a quick pace in the environment I think typing is have more efficiency and you can time more within the limited time.
✓ For me, I prefer typing because, in a fast-paced environment, I think typing is more efficient and you can save more time within the limited time.
问题类型:现在时或相关用法混乱。句子中出现了不正确的动词形式“is have more efficiency”,应使用现在时的系动词加形容词结构,改为“is more efficient”或直接用“typing is more efficient”。另外,“in a quick pace”搭配不当,应为“in a fast-paced environment”(快速节奏的环境)或“at a quick pace”。最后“you can time more”不是地道表达,改为“you can save more time”更清晰。建议:使用正确的现在时态结构(主语 + 系动词 + 形容词),注意固定搭配(fast-paced),并用常用表达替换错误短语。
× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
句子本身语法正确,无需更改。只是提醒:介词“on”用于表示在键盘上打字是正确的。
× I tap on a laptop because it's the only keyboard when I get in the compo company and the company will offer one. So instead of a desktop.
✓ I type on a laptop because it's the only keyboard available when I join the company, and the company provides one, so I don't use a desktop.
问题类型:代词与词汇使用不当。原句中“tap”应为“type”;“when I get in the compo company”中代词、冠词和名词搭配错误,应为“when I join the company”或“when I get into the company”;“the company will offer one”时态和表述不自然,改为现在时“provides one”;“So instead of a desktop.”是残句,需要完整表达为“so I don't use a desktop”。建议:注意代词和固定短语的正确使用(join the company),使用恰当动词(type),并保证句子完整。
× I learned how to type in college and there's a course called computer intelligence and the teacher will taught me how to type and they also have a header examination of the texting speed.
✓ I learned how to type in college. There was a course called Computer Intelligence, and the teacher taught me how to type. They also had a timed test of typing speed.
问题类型:过去时使用错误。原句混合使用了过去和将来时/错误形式:既有“I learned”(过去)又有“there's a course”(现在缩写)和“will taught”(错误的时态和形式)。应统一使用过去时:课程存在应为“there was a course”;教师教授为过去式“taught”;“header examination of the texting speed”措辞不当,应为“timed test of typing speed”或“typing speed test”。建议:在叙述过去发生的事情时,统一使用过去时并使用正确的动词形式;注意名词短语的自然表达(typing speed test)。
× As I said, I had a communal intelligence course during college and where the teacher told me some proper typing techniques and we also have to take a typing speed test with some typing software and which tell me I'm a lot in improving.
✓ As I said, I had a Computer Intelligence course during college where the teacher taught me proper typing techniques. We also had to take a typing speed test using some typing software, which showed me that I had improved a lot.
问题类型:现在时/时态与从句结构错误。原句时态混乱(“had”与“told”、“have to take”、“which tell me I'm a lot in improving”),且从句连接不当。改为过去时以保持一致(had ... where the teacher taught ...; We also had to take ...; which showed me that I had improved a lot)。另外,“I'm a lot in improving”是错误表达,改为“I had improved a lot”或“I have improved a lot”。建议:叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时;注意关联词(where, which)的位置和从句完整性;使用自然表达描述进步。