Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting because I write on paper, I can concentrate better, it helps me organize my source. So I often hand write notes when I study or playing something.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I always have on laptop keyboard. I think it's very convenient. I can use it very time when I need to use it. I think it's very convenient for me.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
When I was year, I learned how to tap on a keyboard. Uh, because the same time the teacher will teach me how to type a sentence, so I learn it.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I will cheat in the keyboard because I think we should cheat every day and I could improve my typing by cheating with my friends.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且语法准确。避免重复表达,句子不超过5句。可以先给出明确观点,再用一两句具体原因并用连接词衔接,最后给例子或频率。注意单词拼写与搭配(organize my notes; when I study or practice)。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because writing on paper helps me concentrate and organize my notes. For example, when I study for exams I make handwritten summaries and diagrams, which make it easier to remember information.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁且避免重复。先直接回答问题(desktop or laptop),然后提供一到两个具体理由并用连接词衔接,避免冗余或含糊短语(e.g., 'very time'不自然,应说 'whenever I need it')。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, I can work on documents or browse the internet anywhere, which saves me time.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要提供具体时间点并用流利句子表达原因或背景。避免填充词(uh)和语法错误。句子结构应更清晰,例如使用过去时说明何时学会并描述学习方式。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. My teacher showed us basic typing techniques and we practiced typing sentences in class, which helped me build speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 内容不恰当且含义模糊('cheat'用法错误)。应解释具体、积极的方法来提高打字,如练习、使用打字软件或触摸打字练习,并给出频率或成果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs and timed exercises. For example, I spend 20 minutes daily on a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy, and I track my progress each week.
× I prefer handwriting because I write on paper, I can concentrate better, it helps me organize my source. So I often hand write notes when I study or playing something.
✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write on paper I can concentrate better and it helps me organize my sources. So I often handwrite notes when I study or am playing something.
该句存在主谓一致和句子结构混乱问题(属于“主谓一致错误/句子结构错误”范畴)。1) “organize my source” 中 source 应为复数 sources,因为指的是资料或信息的集合(参见复数使用);2) “hand write” 更常见的单词是合成词 handwrite;3) “when I study or playing something” 中 playing 为非谓语但前面用了连词 or,应与 study 保持并列形式,正确为 “study or am playing”。建议:注意并列结构中动词形式一致;复数名词用法根据语境调整;常用合成动词应连写。
× I always have on laptop keyboard. I think it's very convenient. I can use it very time when I need to use it. I think it's very convenient for me.
✓ I always use a laptop keyboard. I think it's very convenient. I can use it anytime when I need to. I think it's very convenient for me.
此处为时态/动词使用和副词搭配问题(属“现在时问题/句子结构”)。1) “have on laptop keyboard” 用法不当,应使用动词 use 并加冠词 a:use a laptop keyboard;2) “very time” 是错误搭配,应为 anytime 或 whenever;3) 句中多处重复“I think it's very convenient”,可以保留但注意表达简洁。建议:注意动词搭配和常用时间副词的正确形式。
× When I was year, I learned how to tap on a keyboard. Uh, because the same time the teacher will teach me how to type a sentence, so I learn it.
✓ When I was a child, I learned how to type on a keyboard. At the same time, the teacher taught me how to type sentences, so I learned it.
这是过去时使用错误(属于“过去时问题”)。1) “When I was year” 缺少年龄表达,改为 a child 或具体年龄;2) 原句时态混用(learned / will teach / learn),应全部用过去时:teacher taught me / I learned;3) “tap on a keyboard” 更常用的是 type on a keyboard;建议:叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时态,注意动词词汇选择。
× I will cheat in the keyboard because I think we should cheat every day and I could improve my typing by cheating with my friends.
✓ I used to practice on the keyboard with my friends because I thought we should practice every day and I could improve my typing by practicing with them.
该句存在过去时与词义错误(属“过去时问题”和词汇使用问题)。1) “will cheat in the keyboard” 语义不明确且 cheat 表示作弊,与学打字不符,应该用 practice;2) 时态不一致,应根据上下文改为过去或过去习惯:used to / practiced;3) “cheating with my friends” 改为 practicing with my friends。建议:选用语义准确的动词(practice),并根据时间背景使用恰当的时态(过去习惯用 used to + 动词)。