Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because I think typing can help me save my time. I can use time to do more thing which I like.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually type on laptop keyboard every day because you in my country I would usually use WeChat to chart chart with my friends to share my some funny funny thing and interesting thing.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Uh, actually when I was a child child, I learned how to type on the laptop and desktop because because in my school there is a design arrange a class to teach us how to type on the desktop.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually I I've typed the I use the laptop type keyboard keyboard every day because so it can help me improve my type skill.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然並直接回應問題,避免重複和語法錯誤。建議先用一句主題句表達偏好,然後用1–2句具體原因或例子支持。注意動詞形式(things、do more things)、句子流暢度和連接詞的使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more efficient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop, I can finish quickly and then spend more time on hobbies like reading or exercising.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 需要更清晰和有組織的回答,避免重複詞語和語法錯誤。先直接回答是哪一種設備,然後用1–2句說明原因或情境,使用連接詞(because、so、for example)。注意單詞拼寫(chat)、句子結構和代詞使用。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient. For example, I often use WeChat on my laptop to chat with friends and share funny or interesting moments.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答應更簡潔並修正重複與語法錯誤。先說出時間(e.g., when I was a child/at primary school),然後說明學習方式或情況,使用連接詞(because/so)並避免重複。注意時態和名詞單數/複數(a class)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child, around primary school age. My school arranged a class that taught us how to use desktop keyboards, so I practiced regularly during lessons.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 需要提供具體方法來展示進步過程,不要只是重複“每天使用”。建議說明具體練習方式(定時練習、練習軟件、正確指法)並用連接詞連接原因和結果。簡短有條理(不超過5句)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day and using online typing tutors to build speed and accuracy. I also focus on proper finger placement and do short timed exercises to track my progress.
× I prefer typing because I think typing can help me save my time.
✓ I prefer typing because I think typing can help me save time.
句子中“save my time”在英语中通常说“save time”,不需要物主代词“my”。这是固定搭配,属于现在时描述的用法,需用一般现在时。建议多记常用动词短语搭配,如“save time/ save money”。(语法问题类型:6)
× I can use time to do more thing which I like.
✓ I can use the time to do more things that I like.
原句中“more thing”应为复数“more things”;另外定冠词“the time”更自然,关系代词用“that”。这是名词单复数和冠词用法问题。建议注意可数名词的单复数与冠词搭配。(语法问题类型:1)
× Yes, I usually type on laptop keyboard every day because you in my country I would usually use WeChat to chart chart with my friends to share my some funny funny thing and interesting thing.
✓ Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because in my country I usually use WeChat to chat with my friends to share some funny and interesting things.
原句存在多处错误:缺少不定冠词“a”使单数名词不完整;多余的“you”应删除;动词“chat”拼写错误并被重复;“my some”顺序错误,应为“some”;名词要用复数“things”。这些都是主谓一致、冠词、复数和词序错误。建议简化句子,逐项检查冠词与可数名词、代词位置及拼写。(语法问题类型:27)
× Uh, actually when I was a child child, I learned how to type on the laptop and desktop because because in my school there is a design arrange a class to teach us how to type on the desktop.
✓ Actually, when I was a child, I learned how to type on laptops and desktops because my school arranged a class to teach us how to type on desktops.
原句有重复词“child child”“because because”;“laptop and desktop”在泛指时用复数;“there is a design arrange a class”结构不正确,应使用过去式“my school arranged a class”。这些是过去时使用和复数问题。建议去掉重复词,使用正确的过去式和复数形式。(语法问题类型:5)
× Actually I I've typed the I use the laptop type keyboard keyboard every day because so it can help me improve my type skill.
✓ Actually, I use the laptop keyboard every day because it helps me improve my typing skills.
原句有多处冗余和重复:不需要“I've typed the I”;“type keyboard keyboard”重复且“type”作形容词时不自然,应直接说“laptop keyboard”;“improve my type skill”中“type”应改为动名词“typing”,并且“skill”常用复数“skills”。此外现在时应用一般现在时“helps”。建议学习动名词作宾语的用法及常用固定搭配。(语法问题类型:8})]}