Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like "umm", and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I type I often make spelling and formatting mistakes, so writing by hand helps me think more clearly and makes fewer errors.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one concise supporting detail. Remove repetition and correct basic grammar (use present simple for routines). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I type on my personal laptop every day. Because I don't have a desktop, I use the same laptop for work and at home, so it is my primary device for typing.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence with specific time, reduce informal fillers, and clarify unfamiliar terms (e.g., name of place). Use a linking word to add one specific detail about what you learned.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in grade five. At that time I took an Information Technology certificate course at a local training center, where I learned touch-typing and basic desktop skills.

Gợi ý: State a clear main idea and give specific, structured examples of how you improved. Use linking words to show cause and effect, and correct quantifiers and tense.

Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly through university work. Because we had to write many long reports of around 1,000–2,000 words, I practiced typing frequently, which increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer mostly handwriting because umm, when I was typing I got a lot of mistakes.

✓ I mostly prefer handwriting because when I typed I made a lot of mistakes.

The sentence mixes present preference with past action. Use simple past 'typed' and 'made' to describe past events. Also move 'mostly' before 'prefer' for natural word order. Suggestion: keep present tense for current preference and simple past for past experiences.

× I type on my personal laptop because I have no desktop computer, so the laptop was my office laptop.

✓ I type on my personal laptop because I don't have a desktop computer, and the laptop is my office laptop.

Use present simple 'don't have' to match current situation rather than 'have no' (which is acceptable but less natural here) and 'is' instead of past 'was' to state a current fact. Maintain consistent present tense.

× So when I was working in office and when I was in home I usually use my use the laptop to typing.

✓ So when I was working in the office or at home, I usually used the laptop for typing.

Multiple issues: missing articles ('the office', 'at home'), incorrect preposition 'in home' (use 'at home'), extra word 'use my use', incorrect verb forms 'usually use' with past time reference. Change to past tense 'used' to match 'when I was working', and 'for typing' or 'to type' for correct verb form. Simplify conjunction to 'or'.

× Oh, I remember when I was in grade 5 I did a Information Technology certificate course and Nanopiaza.

✓ Oh, I remember when I was in grade 5 I took an Information Technology certificate course at Nanopiaza.

Use 'took' instead of 'did' for courses, and use the article 'an' before a vowel sound 'Information'. Use 'at' to indicate the place (Nanopiaza). This matches past tense memory.

× So in that time period I learned how to use a keyboard and how to use the desktop machine as well.

✓ During that time period I learned how to use a keyboard and a desktop computer as well.

'During' is more natural than 'So in that time period'. 'Desktop machine' is awkward; 'desktop computer' is standard. Sentence is past tense so 'learned' is correct. No -ing form needed here.

× I gain lot of experience in the university because we have to do lot of assignments and we have to type a word report and about thousand 2000 words so and that will affect on my typing skills.

✓ I gained a lot of experience at university because we had to do many assignments and type word reports of about 1,000–2,000 words, which improved my typing skills.

Use past tense 'gained' to match the time frame, include articles ('a lot', 'a word report' corrected to 'word reports'), use 'at university' instead of 'in the university' for general statement, and 'many' instead of 'lot of'. Specify the range '1,000–2,000 words' in correct format. Replace 'will affect on' with 'improved' to express the actual result. Remove redundant 'so and'.