Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I prefer typing because now nowadays most communication is digital, so it's easier to edit message on phone. It's also more convenient for sharing information where it's.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, Sir. Uh, now every day I use both desktop keyboard and laptop keyboard because when I go for work I use the company desktop, but when I pair pair for hours I use.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, it must be better than my primary school. We have a computer classes where we practice keyboard, practice typing and. I learned how to use the keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Hmm, I think at normal person method for example you set a 5 minute or one minute and you you type a an article to to practice how many words you can type in limit.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题,同时纠正语法和冗余。先用一句明确的主题句说明偏好,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免重复(例如去掉“now nowadays”)。注意介词和冠词用法,如“edit messages on my phone”或“share information with others”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because most communication today is digital. For example, typing makes it easy to edit messages on my phone and quickly share documents with colleagues.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰完整,避免犹豫词(uh, sir)和重复词(pair pair)。用一到两句说明具体情况并加上简短解释。注意时态和词汇选择,例如说“when I work at the office”或“when I travel”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use both every day. I use my company desktop at the office for heavy tasks, and my laptop when I work from home or travel.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要明确时间点并修正语法错误。不要使用模糊或错误的短语(如“must be better than my primary school”)。用一句话说出大概时间,再用一到两句具体说明学习方式或环境。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where we practiced typing and learned proper finger placement.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并使用更自然的表达。先给出方法的总体描述,然后提供具体细节和频率。避免重复词和不自然的短语(如“normal person method”)。可以提及练习时长、工具或测速网站。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with timed drills. For example, I do five-minute typing tests on a typing website every day to increase my speed and accuracy.
× Yeah, I prefer typing because now nowadays most communication is digital, so it's easier to edit message on phone.
✓ Yeah, I prefer typing because nowadays most communication is digital, so it's easier to edit messages on my phone.
问题:现在时使用和词语搭配不当。“now nowadays”重复,冗余;“message”应为复数“messages”;缺少所有格限定“on phone”应为“on my phone”。改正建议:去掉重复词,名词根据语境用复数,并加上适当的限定词。
× It's also more convenient for sharing information where it's.
✓ It's also more convenient for sharing information.
问题:句末的“where it's”结构不正确且多余,导致句子不完整。改正建议:删除多余片段,保持简洁完整的表述;如果想表达“在那里的话”,应重写为完整从句(例如"wherever it is")。
× Yes, Sir. Uh, now every day I use both desktop keyboard and laptop keyboard because when I go for work I use the company desktop, but when I pair pair for hours I use.
✓ Yes, Sir. Every day I use both a desktop keyboard and a laptop keyboard because when I go to work I use the company desktop, but when I travel for hours I use my laptop.
问题:动词和结构多处不当:"go for work" 应为固定表达 "go to work";重复词"pair pair"应为"travel"或其他意图词;省略冠词"a desktop keyboard";句尾缺主语或对象,应明确为"my laptop"。改正建议:使用正确固定搭配(go to work),添加冠词与所有格,并用合适词替换重复错误。
× Umm, it must be better than my primary school. We have a computer classes where we practice keyboard, practice typing and. I learned how to use the keyboard.
✓ Umm, it must have been during primary school. We had computer classes where we practiced keyboard skills and typing, and I learned how to use the keyboard.
问题:时态混用导致时间表达不清楚:原句先用现在时“have”又说“I learned”(过去);"a computer classes" 中冠词和单复数不一致;"practice keyboard" 要改为动词过去式或名词短语。改正建议:根据说的是过去经历把句子改为过去时:had, practiced;修正冠词与复数形式,连接词补全。
× Hmm, I think at normal person method for example you set a 5 minute or one minute and you you type a an article to to practice how many words you can type in limit.
✓ Hmm, I think a common method is, for example, you set a one- or five-minute timer and you type an article to practice how many words you can type within the time limit.
问题:现在时表达混乱且词序、冠词和重复词错误:"at normal person method" 不自然,应为 "a common method";“a 5 minute or one minute” 冠词和连字符错误,应为 "a one- or five-minute timer";存在重复"you you"、"a an"、"to to";"in limit" 应为"within the time limit"。改正建议:使用常见表达,修正冠词和连字符,删除重复词,使用正确介词短语表时间范围。