Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'a relaxing thing' → 'relaxing' or 'relaxing activity') and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. For example, I write in my diary every day and using different colored pens is a relaxing activity that helps me clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Be direct and reduce filler words. Use clearer phrasing and a linking phrase to explain why you use an iPad. Replace vague phrases like 'the other stuff' with specific examples.

Ví dụ: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. Instead, I usually type on my iPad to reply to emails and take notes because it's more portable.

Gợi ý: Avoid fillers and fix grammar ('started high school', 'use computers'). Give one clear supporting detail about the lesson and use a linking word to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I started high school because our teachers expected us to use computers. For instance, we had a basic typing class in which we practiced touch-typing.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and be specific about methods. Use a present-tense plan and link reasons or outcomes (e.g., 'so that' or 'which helps'). Mention a concrete technique or resource (typing practice, online course).

Ví dụ: To improve my typing, I practice on my laptop every day by writing emails and using online typing exercises, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I'd say I generally prefer handwriting simply because I write my day diary every day and filling the paper and the different colors of pens is relaxing thing for me and help me to clear my mind more.

✓ I'd say I generally prefer handwriting simply because I write in my diary every day, and filling the pages and using different colored pens is a relaxing thing for me and helps me clear my mind more.

Errors: 'write my day diary' is incorrect collocation and preposition use; use 'write in my diary'. 'filling the paper' should be 'filling the pages' and parallel structure requires gerunds; 'and help me' must agree with singular subject 'filling the pages and using different colored pens' which functions as a singular activity, so use 'helps'. Also use 'different colored pens' (adjective order) and remove unnecessary 'to' before 'clear'. Suggestion: use correct collocations (write in a diary), keep parallel gerunds (filling... and using...), ensure subject-verb agreement with compound gerund phrases, and choose appropriate nouns (pages instead of paper).

× Actually, I'm not typing on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Actually, I don't type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day.

Error: Present continuous 'I'm not typing' is unnatural for habitual actions; use simple present 'I don't type'. Also use correct auxiliary 'do' for negation in simple present. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual routines and form negatives with 'do/does'.

× Instead of those, I'm using my iPad to type things and reply emails and the other stuff.

✓ Instead of those, I use my iPad to type and reply to emails and do other tasks.

Errors: 'I'm using' suggests current action rather than habit; consistent simple present 'I use' fits context. 'type things' is vague; 'type' alone is fine. 'reply emails' needs preposition 'reply to emails'. 'the other stuff' is informal and inaccurate; use 'other tasks'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms for habitual actions, include necessary prepositions with verbs (reply to), and choose clearer nouns.

× Well, I remember, uh, it happened when I started to high school because teachers expected us to use computer.

✓ Well, I remember it happened when I started high school because teachers expected us to use computers.

Errors: Remove filler commas and 'uh'. Use 'started high school' not 'started to high school'. 'use computer' needs plural 'computers' or the article 'a computer'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('start high school'), and match countable nouns with plural or articles.

× We had a lesson about it, so we had to use that.

✓ We had a lesson about it, so we had to use the computers.

Errors: 'use that' is vague and ungrammatical; 'that' does not clearly refer to 'lesson'. Replace with clear object 'the computers' or 'it' referring to computers. Suggestion: make pronoun references clear and use appropriate noun phrases.

× To improve my typing, I would probably choose uh, using my laptop every day and writing emails, umm, to my teachers or the other people.

✓ To improve my typing, I would probably use my laptop every day and write emails to my teachers or other people.

Errors: 'choose using' is awkward; after 'would probably' use base verb 'use' or 'choose to use'. Keep parallel structure: 'use... and write...' rather than gerund phrases. Remove fillers 'uh, umm' and unnecessary article 'the' before 'other people'. Suggestion: use base verbs after modal-like expressions for hypothetical actions, maintain parallel verbs, and omit filler words.