Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing (e.g. "Where I can edit") and redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it helps me write much faster and keep my work neat. For example, I can easily edit and share documents online, which saves time. Also, I don't need to worry about losing paper or running out of ink.

Gợi ý: Clarify and tighten the response. Use a clear topic sentence, then support with two specific benefits. Fix grammatical errors (e.g. "more efficiently" needs an object or be rephrased) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually type on a desktop because it offers a larger screen and a full-size keyboard. This setup is more comfortable for long sessions, and being able to adjust the monitor and keyboard helps me maintain better posture.

Gợi ý: Reduce redundancy and correct tense and minor errors. Give a concise timeline and one specific detail about how you improved. Use linking words like "but" and "after" correctly.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in 10th grade. At first I was nervous because I couldn't find the keys, but after daily practice with typing exercises I became much faster and more confident.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid vague or awkward phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your method, then give concrete details (e.g. practice schedule, tools, exercises) and use linking words to connect ideas. Remove double negatives and wordy expressions.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day for 20–30 minutes using online typing tests and exercises. For instance, I focus on accuracy first, then gradually increase speed, and I track my progress weekly to stay motivated.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me express my ideas more quickly and clearly. Where I can edit, I easily share my work online and I don't have to worry about pen or paper, and I don't have to think twice before searching and then erasing on the paper.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me express my ideas more quickly and clearly. I can edit, easily share my work online, and I don't have to worry about pen or paper or think twice before crossing out and rewriting on the paper.

The original second sentence incorrectly begins with 'Where', which is not the right conjunction to connect ideas here. Use 'I can' to introduce capabilities and connect phrases with commas and coordinating conjunctions. Also 'searching and then erasing on the paper' is awkward; use 'crossing out and rewriting' or 'erasing and rewriting'. Improve cohesion by listing actions in parallel form.

× I prefer it to a laptop because the separate keyboard and monitor lets me adjust my posture and more efficiently.

✓ I prefer it to a laptop because the separate keyboard and monitor let me adjust my posture and type more efficiently.

Subject 'keyboard and monitor' is plural, so the verb should be 'let' (not 'lets'). Also 'more efficiently' needs an action to modify; add the verb 'type' for clarity and parallel structure.

× I first learned to type in 10th grade. During my school days, I I felt nervous at the beginning because I couldn't find the keys, but after practicing with my typing exercises and using the computer every day, I gradually become faster and more confident.

✓ I first learned to type in 10th grade. During my school days, I felt nervous at the beginning because I couldn't find the keys, but after practicing with typing exercises and using the computer every day, I gradually became faster and more confident.

There is an extra repeated word 'I I' which is a typographical error. The clause 'I gradually become faster' mixes past context with present tense; it should be past tense 'became' to match 'learned' and 'felt'. Also 'with my typing exercises' is better as 'with typing exercises' for natural phrasing.

× Well, I improved my typing with regular practice with great confidence and effort. Because until and unless you don't practice and you don't have the spirit of getting progress, then you definitely don't improve a lot.

✓ Well, I improved my typing through regular practice, confidence, and effort. If you don't practice and don't have the motivation to improve, you definitely won't make much progress.

The original uses awkward repetition 'with regular practice with great confidence' and an incorrect conditional structure 'Because until and unless you don't... then you definitely don't', which is ungrammatical. Replace with a clear conditional 'If you don't... you won't...' and use natural nouns 'motivation' or 'drive' and 'make much progress' instead of 'improve a lot' for smoother phrasing.