Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I more like to handwriting because learning to typing is hard for me and handwriting is actually more convenient to me.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I think I type on laptop people every day because first, I don't have a desktop and second, I think laptop is more convenient than a desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Well I learned this a few months ago because I need to deal with the IL testing so I need to learn typing to make sure I can having the exam.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually sit down and choose one my favorite letter and I type it out. This is a more interesting way to do it to me rather than just type the letter.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,句子结构需改进,减少语法错误并提供一到两个具体原因。建议使用主题句开头(I prefer handwriting.),随后用连接词给出具体原因(because, moreover),并控制在最多五句内。注意动词形式(prefer, typing/typing)和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I find it faster for brainstorming and easier to organize my thoughts. Moreover, I usually remember things better when I write them by hand, so it’s more helpful for studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并修正词语搭配错误(‘laptop people’应为‘laptop’或‘on a laptop’)。用主题句直接回答,然后用两个简短的原因支持,使用连词(first, second)。注意重复表达的修正。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day. First, I don’t own a desktop, and second, a laptop is more convenient because I can work in different places.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需校正时态和语法,句子应更自然并提供具体时间点和原因。避免模糊表达(‘this’ 指代不明),用连词(because, so)连接理由,并修正动词形式(learned, to take the exam)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type a few months ago because I had to prepare for an important online test. I practised regularly so that I would feel confident during the exam.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并逻辑清晰,说明具体练习方法和频率,使用连接词(for example, therefore)并修正表达错误(‘choose one my favorite letter’ → ‘choose one of my favourite keys/letters’)。避免重复,并提供效果或结果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising specific keys repeatedly and using online typing exercises for 20 minutes every day. For example, I focus on one letter or key combination each session so I can gradually increase my speed and accuracy.
× I more like to handwriting because learning to typing is hard for me and handwriting is actually more convenient to me.
✓ I prefer handwriting because learning to type is hard for me, and handwriting is actually more convenient for me.
错误类型:量词/表达选择不当(更自然的比较表达)。说明:原句中“I more like to handwriting”不符合英语习惯,使用“prefer”更自然;“handwriting”作名词时不需不定式“to handwriting”;“learning to typing”中“to”后应接动词原形“type”;“convenient to me”习惯用法为“convenient for me”。建议:用“prefer + 名词/动名词”表达偏好,使用动词不定式“to + 原形动词”,并用“convenient for someone”。
× I think I type on laptop people every day because first, I don't have a desktop and second, I think laptop is more convenient than a desktop.
✓ I think I type on a laptop every day because, first, I don't have a desktop, and second, I think a laptop is more convenient than a desktop.
错误类型:主谓一致/冠词使用错误。说明:原句“type on laptop people”明显错误,可能想表达“on a laptop”;名词前需要不定冠词“a laptop”;句中缺少逗号与连词使结构更清晰。建议:在可数单数名词前加冠词,保持句子连贯。
× Well I learned this a few months ago because I need to deal with the IL testing so I need to learn typing to make sure I can having the exam.
✓ Well, I learned this a few months ago because I needed to deal with the IL testing, so I needed to learn to type to make sure I could take the exam.
错误类型:时态使用不当。说明:句子谈的是几个月前发生的事情,主句和相关动作应使用过去时:“learned”后相关原因和能力也应为过去时(needed, could);“learn typing”应为“learn to type”或“learn typing”(更常用不定式);“can having the exam”语法错误,应为“could take the exam”。建议:叙述过去事件时保持动词时态一致,使用正确的动词形式和搭配。
× Well, I usually sit down and choose one my favorite letter and I type it out. This is a more interesting way to do it to me rather than just type the letter.
✓ Well, I usually sit down and choose one of my favorite letters and type it out. This is a more interesting way for me to practice than just typing the letters.
错误类型:动词+ -ing形式 / 介词搭配错误。说明:原句“choose one my favorite letter”缺少介词“of”;“type it out”可以保留但后半句“way to do it to me”不自然,应为“a more interesting way for me to practice”;比较对象要统一动作形式,使用“than just typing the letters”。建议:注意固定搭配“one of my ...”,使用“way for someone to do something”,以及比较结构中动词形式一致。