Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing. There are two reasons. The first one is that nowadays we use the mobiles and the computers frequently than before, so we need to handle the skill of right of typing. And the second I know the sequence of the keyboard orders and.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Not every day. Usually I type out my phones 'cause we need to send messages and we need to take notes. And sometimes when I walk I tap on the desktop and make some to make my work efficiently.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
When I was in my college and I need to complete my essays by computer, so that time I remember the layout of the keyboard and I can type it quickly without take a glance of it.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Nothing special, but practicing as a sense as practice makes perfect. So I remember I always typing and typing and in reinforce the layout of the keyboards and my hands are flexibility.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁并注意语法与表达准确性。建议先给出直接的主题句,然后用一到两句具体且连贯的理由,使用连接词(e.g. firstly, secondly, because)并纠正语法错误(e.g. "the skill of right of typing" -> "typing skills")。避免冗长或重复句子,限制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. Firstly, I use phones and computers every day, so typing skills are more practical for communicating and working. Secondly, I'm familiar with the keyboard layout, which helps me type quickly and accurately.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和用词不准确,内容不够清晰。建议先用一句话直接回答是否每天打字,然后用一到两句具体说明常用设备和场景,使用连词(e.g. usually, sometimes)并避免不合逻辑的表述(如在走路时使用桌面电脑)。
Ví dụ: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. Usually I type on my phone to send messages and take notes. Occasionally I use a laptop when I need to do more serious work at home or in class.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 结构和时态需要改进。建议用过去时描述学习时间,然后具体说明原因和结果,使用连接词(e.g. because, so)并纠正短语("without take a glance" -> "without looking at it")。控制在三到四句内。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in college because I had to write essays on a computer. At that time I practiced a lot and memorized the keyboard layout, so now I can type quickly without looking at the keys.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且有语法错误。建议先说明方法(e.g. regular practice, typing exercises),然后给出具体做法(e.g. online typing tests, daily drills)并说明效果。使用连词和正确短语(e.g. "practice makes perfect", "reinforce muscle memory")。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I do daily typing exercises and use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, which helps reinforce my muscle memory and finger flexibility.
× I prefer typing. There are two reasons. The first one is that nowadays we use the mobiles and the computers frequently than before, so we need to handle the skill of right of typing.
✓ I prefer typing. There are two reasons. The first one is that nowadays we use mobile phones and computers more frequently than before, so we need to learn the skill of correct typing.
问题类型:现在时/词语搭配及表达不当。解释:原句中“the mobiles and the computers”中不需要定冠词且用词不自然,改为“mobile phones and computers”。“frequently than before”错误,正确表达为“more frequently than before”。“handle the skill of right of typing”结构不正确,改为“learn the skill of correct typing”。建议:使用自然短语(mobile phones, computers);比较级结构用“more + 副词 + than”;表示掌握技能用“learn the skill of .../learn how to ...”。
× And the second I know the sequence of the keyboard orders and.
✓ The second is that I know the order of the keys on the keyboard.
问题类型:句子结构错误。解释:原句缺少系动词和完整从句结构,“the second I know...”不通顺;“sequence of the keyboard orders”冗余且不地道,改为“order of the keys on the keyboard”。建议:补全句子结构,用“the second is that...”引导完整说明;使用更自然的名词短语“order of the keys”。
× Not every day. Usually I type out my phones 'cause we need to send messages and we need to take notes.
✓ Not every day. Usually I type on my phone because we need to send messages and take notes.
问题类型:现在时/介词使用及冗余。解释:“type out my phones”不正确,常用表达是“type on my phone”;缩写'cause在正式回答中应改为“because”;“we need to send messages and we need to take notes”中第二个“we need to”可省略以避免重复,保持现在时一致。建议:使用正确介词“on”搭配设备,避免口语缩写并简化重复结构。
× And sometimes when I walk I tap on the desktop and make some to make my work efficiently.
✓ And sometimes when I walk I tap on my phone to make my work more efficient.
问题类型:句子结构错误与词语搭配。解释:原句“tap on the desktop”与“when I walk”矛盾,桌面电脑不会在走路时使用,应为“phone”;“make some to make my work efficiently”语义与语法混乱,改为“tap on my phone to make my work more efficient”。建议:保持语义连贯,使用正确设备名词并用“more efficient”作比较/程度副词。
× When I was in my college and I need to complete my essays by computer, so that time I remember the layout of the keyboard and I can type it quickly without take a glance of it.
✓ When I was in college I needed to complete my essays on the computer, so at that time I learned the layout of the keyboard and I could type quickly without taking a look at it.
问题类型:过去时错误与动词形式。解释:这里叙述的是过去的经历,应使用过去时:将“need”改为“needed”;“by computer”更常用“on the computer”;“so that time I remember”应为“so at that time I learned/remembered”;“I can type”改为过去时“I could type”;“without take a glance of it”中不定式和介词错误,改为“without taking a look at it”。建议:叙述过去事件时全句保持过去时态,使用正确动名词形式和常用搭配。
× Nothing special, but practicing as a sense as practice makes perfect. So I remember I always typing and typing and in reinforce the layout of the keyboards and my hands are flexibility.
✓ Nothing special, but practice makes perfect. So I remember I always practice typing to reinforce the layout of the keyboard and make my hands flexible.
问题类型:现在时/动名词与动词形式及搭配错误。解释:“practicing as a sense as practice makes perfect”不通,通常说“practice makes perfect”。“I remember I always typing and typing”需要动词“practice”或“type”且保持现在时,“I always practice typing”更好;“in reinforce”错误介词,改为“to reinforce”;“the keyboards”应为“the keyboard”或“the layout of the keyboard”;“my hands are flexibility”形容词/副词混用,应为“make my hands flexible”或“my hands become flexible”。建议:使用简明句子“practice makes perfect”,用动词不定式“to reinforce”,保持主谓一致并使用正确形容词形式。