Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct in your topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), and add a brief specific reason or example. Use one linking phrase to connect idea and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because I grew up using computers and smartphones. For example, I type notes and messages on my phone every day, which is faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

Gợi ý: Answer directly first (desktop or laptop), then clarify with a brief example. Remove hesitation and correct grammar (it counts). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day. For instance, I play Counter-Strike 2 and use the laptop keyboard for gaming and chatting with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear time reference and avoid repeating fillers. Use one or two concise supporting details to explain context. Correct article and noun phrases (a computer, birthday). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about six or seven years old. My parents gave me a computer for my birthday, and I practised typing while playing games and learning basic computer skills.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, actionable method first and follow with one specific example. Avoid vague phrases (‘something else’) and keep sentences grammatical and concise. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising on a computer every day. For example, I type messages to friends and use online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy.

× Well, I guess I'm more likely prone to typing rather than writing because, uh, since I was young I've been using like digital technology like cell phones or playing computer.

✓ Well, I guess I'm more prone to typing rather than handwriting because since I was young I've used digital technology like cell phones and computers.

This sentence mixes continuous and simple present forms awkwardly and uses incorrect collocations: 'more likely prone' is redundant; 'writing' better as 'handwriting' in this context; 'I've been using' can be simplified to 'I've used' to match 'since I was young' and present perfect; 'playing computer' is incorrect — use 'computers' or 'playing computer games'. Suggestion: remove redundancy, choose correct nouns, and use consistent tense (present perfect) for actions from past to present.

× I do play counter strike two every day, so I guess it that counts typing on a keyboard every day.

✓ I play Counter-Strike 2 every day, so I guess that counts as typing on a keyboard every day.

Problems: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' when simple present suffices; game title should be capitalized and use correct punctuation; 'it that counts' is ungrammatical — correct phrase is 'that counts as'; missing article 'as' after 'counts'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct word order, and include 'as' in 'counts as'.

× I think it was when I was six or seven years old, uh, for my birthday, my parents, uh, gifted me a set of computer as an birthday gift.

✓ I think it was when I was six or seven years old; for my birthday my parents gifted me a computer set as a birthday present.

Errors: 'gifted me a set of computer' has noun number and article errors — should be 'a computer set' or 'a set of computers' depending on meaning; 'an birthday' incorrect article before consonant sound — should be 'a birthday'; 'present' is more natural than repeating 'gift'. Suggestion: fix noun phrase order, correct articles, and use consistent past tense 'gifted'.

× So since then I've been, uh, playing computer games, uh, actually, which involved.

✓ So since then I've been playing computer games, actually, which involved using the keyboard a lot.

Original ends with a dangling clause 'which involved' that lacks an object, making sentence incomplete. Also filler words interrupt clarity. Suggestion: complete the relative clause with what was involved ('using the keyboard a lot') and remove unnecessary fillers.

× I guess the best way to learn how to type fast is you use computer or a laptop every day.

✓ I guess the best way to learn to type quickly is to use a computer or a laptop every day.

Issues: 'learn how to type fast' is grammatical but 'learn to type quickly' is more natural; missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'use'; article missing before 'computer' — should be 'a computer'; 'fast' is an adverb so 'quickly' preferred. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to' for purpose, include articles, and use appropriate adverb.

× On a daily basis you try to type to your friends.

✓ On a daily basis you should try to type to your friends.

'Type to your friends' is odd — one 'types to' someone usually in messaging; adding modal 'should' makes suggestion clearer. Also could use 'type messages to your friends' for clarity. Suggestion: include object 'messages' or use 'message' and consider adding 'should' to express recommendation.

× Maybe search for something from Google browser like something else.

✓ Maybe search for something using a web browser like Google or similar services.

Problems: 'from Google browser' is unnatural; 'Google' is a search engine, not a 'browser' necessarily; 'like something else' is vague. Suggestion: use 'using a web browser' or 'on Google' and specify alternatives ('or similar services').