Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and produce a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and ambiguous phrases. Improve coherence by using linking words and give a specific reason or example (e.g., personal experience) to support your opinion. Replace vague expressions like "it has been individuals" and "nostalgia feeling for everyone" with precise wording.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and unique. For example, when I receive a handwritten letter from my grandmother I can immediately tell it's hers by her writing style, which makes the message more meaningful.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct, grammatical topic sentence. Remove fillers and correct phrase choices. Add a brief reason using a linking word (because/so) and a specific detail about why the laptop is better (portability, keyboard feel, workspace).

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because my company provided one. I find it better than a desktop because it is portable and the keyboard layout suits my typing style, so I can work comfortably from different locations.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, well-structured response: state the time directly, then add a concise supporting detail. Reduce repetition and improve grammar ("When I was a student"), and use linking words (since/after) to show improvement over time.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about 15 at school in a computer class where the teacher taught touch-typing. Since then I have practiced regularly, so now I can type both faster and more accurately.

Gợi ý: Be specific about the method and describe how it helps using clear linking words. Avoid fillers and vague phrases like "plans to type same alphabets." Name the app type (typing tutor, drills), explain the exercises you did and give a result (words per minute improvement).

Ví dụ: To improve my typing I used a typing tutor application that provides timed drills and repeated practice of common letter combinations. As a result, after a few weeks of daily 20-minute sessions my speed improved from about 40 to 55 words per minute.

× 'Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think it has been individuals and when we see handwriting, uh, we can understand who wrote a note and I think it can have a nostalgia feeling for, umm, everyone.'

✓ 'Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think it is more personal, and when we see someone's handwriting we can understand who wrote a note, and I think it can evoke nostalgia for everyone.'

'Issues: incorrect pronoun/reference and awkward phrasing. "it has been individuals" is ungrammatical and unclear; use a clear noun phrase "it is more personal". "when we see handwriting" should specify whose handwriting: use possessive pronoun "someone's handwriting" or "a person's handwriting". "have a nostalgia feeling" is incorrect collocation; use "evoke nostalgia" or "feel nostalgic". Suggestion: prefer clear noun phrases and correct possessive pronouns, and use natural verb-noun collocations like "evoke nostalgia".'},{