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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I preferred typing over Henry first because typing is much more convenient. You can literally type on typing everywhere, like on your phone, your iPod, your computer, but writing the only way on a paper or pen. But what if you don't get them besides you?

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

I toggle my touts keep going every day because it's much more convenient and because my laptop is a bit too stuck to be able to type very suddenly. And the second is because the laptop is, I don't actually like to use it very much.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I learned to type in a keyboard when I was about 6 years old when our teacher asked me to write a summary about a movie class that we were taking our time and it was very very difficult at first because I don't even know how to use the keyboard. But as I got more practice I typing got better too.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

I improve my typing by typing more because I think this is a thing that you can just improve over time, not just you can improve overnight.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意时态和词汇准确性,避免重复与无关的词语,并且用一到两句清晰表达你的观点与原因。可以使用连接词如“because”“so”来连接论点与细节。举例或比较能使答案更具体。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop anywhere, so I can take notes quickly during lectures.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接回应问题并说明频率与原因,避免含糊不清和拼写/发音错误引起的语句混乱。尽量把句子控制在三到四句内,使用明确的词汇(desktop/laptop)并解释偏好原因。

Ví dụ: I usually type on my laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. I rarely use a desktop since I don't have one at home, and I prefer the laptop's keyboard for quick tasks.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答包含时间和背景很好,但需简化与纠正语法(例如时态和词序),并用连词使逻辑更清晰。去掉冗余的短语,提供一两个具体细节(如练习方法或进步速度)。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about six because my teacher asked us to type a summary of a movie we watched. It was difficult at first, but with regular practice using simple typing games, my speed and accuracy improved.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 答案方向正确但表达可更具体。说明具体方法(例如练习软件、定时练习、正确指法)并用连接词说明原因与效果。保持句子简洁,最多三句。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising daily with online exercises and typing tests. Over time, this improves my speed and accuracy, and I also focus on using the correct finger placement to avoid bad habits.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I preferred typing over Henry first because typing is much more convenient.

I preferred typing at first because typing is much more convenient.

句中“over Henry first”不符合语境。这里想表达“起初更喜欢打字”,应使用短语“at first”。这是时态/用法问题,改为“I preferred typing at first...”更自然。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× You can literally type on typing everywhere, like on your phone, your iPod, your computer, but writing the only way on a paper or pen.

You can literally type everywhere, like on your phone, your iPod, or your computer, but writing is only possible on paper with a pen.

原句中有多处介词和结构错误:"type on typing everywhere"冗余且介词位置错;列举项应使用"or"连接;"writing the only way on a paper or pen"结构不正确,应改为"writing is only possible on paper with a pen"。这些都是介词和短语搭配问题,修正后更符合英语表达。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× But what if you don't get them besides you?

But what if you don't have them with you?

原句"get them besides you"中代词和搭配错误。正确表达应为"have them with you"(把某物带在身边)。这是代词与固定短语搭配的问题,改正后更通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× I toggle my touts keep going every day because it's much more convenient and because my laptop is a bit too stuck to be able to type very suddenly.

I use my laptop every day because it's much more convenient, although my laptop can be a bit slow so I can't type very quickly on it sometimes.

原句“toggle my touts keep going”无语义且语序混乱,属于句子结构错误。并且"too stuck to be able to type very suddenly"表达不当,应表达为"a bit slow"和"can't type very quickly"。修正后句子符合语法并保持原意。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And the second is because the laptop is, I don't actually like to use it very much.

Also, the second reason is that I don't actually like to use it very much.

原句中断裂的结构和代词使用不当("the laptop is,"之后缺补语)。将句子重构为"the second reason is that..."更符合语法。该问题涉及代词/指代和句子结构,故归为代词使用问题。

Past tense issue

× I learned to type in a keyboard when I was about 6 years old when our teacher asked me to write a summary about a movie class that we were taking our time and it was very very difficult at first because I don't even know how to use the keyboard.

I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about six years old. Our teacher asked me to write a summary about a movie in class, and it was very difficult at first because I didn't even know how to use the keyboard.

原句时态混用和介词错误:应使用"on a keyboard"而非"in a keyboard";叙述过去事件时应统一使用过去时("didn't even know"而非"don't even know");句子较长需分句使结构清晰。属于过去时和介词使用问题,已作相应更正。

Verb + -ing form

× But as I got more practice I typing got better too.

But as I got more practice, my typing got better too.

原句中缺少所有格代词或名词所有格形式,应为"my typing"而不是"I typing"。这是动词+ -ing形式(作为名词)与代词所有格搭配的问题,修正后语法正确。

Present tense issue

× I improve my typing by typing more because I think this is a thing that you can just improve over time, not just you can improve overnight.

I improve my typing by practicing more because I think it's something you can improve over time, not overnight.

原句时态和用法稍冗长:"typing more"可用动名词"practicing more"更自然;"a thing that you can just improve"结构冗余,简化为"something you can improve"更地道。属于现在时和短语搭配问题,修改后更简洁自然。

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BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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