Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
From my perspective, I prefer handwriting. Although typing is more efficient and more quick, I think handwriting. Can deliver our mood and more for more people.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
No, I do not type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. I think the keyboard is too heavy to bring and we can type it on our smartphones more easier.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
We learn how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade 3. We have a class named Computers and in the beginning the teachers tell told us how to type on a keyboard using an app.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I don't improve my typing skills. From anyways, I think in daily lives I used typing to solve any problems. In this way can improve my typing skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更连贯并直接回应问题。首先给出清晰的主题句(我更喜欢手写),然后用一到两句具体原因支持(如情感表达、记忆效果),并用连接词衔接句子。注意语法(完整句子)和词汇搭配,例如“more quick”应为“quicker”,并把“Can deliver our mood”改为完整句子“it can convey my mood”或“it conveys emotion”。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and conveys personal emotion. For example, handwritten notes feel more personal than typed text, and I often recall things more easily when I write them by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要简洁且语法正确。先直接回答(No, I don’t),然后给出具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意比较级和词序('more easier'应改为 'more easily' 或 'easier'),以及'bring'应与'carry'搭配。
Ví dụ: No, I don’t type on a desktop or laptop every day because they are heavy to carry. Instead, I usually type on my smartphone because it is more convenient and easier to use on the go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 注意时态和主语一致。先用一句话直接回答(I learned...),然后补充细节(在电脑课上,使用教学软件)。确保句子完整且时态正确(过去时)。避免重复和语法错误('tell told' 改为 'taught')。
Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade three. We had a Computers class, and the teacher taught us typing using a learning app that showed proper finger placement.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要明确并有条理。先说明是否有刻意练习,然后描述具体做法(如练习软件、每天打字练习、错误纠正等),并用连接词把想法连贯起来。注意语法和句子完整性('From anyways' 不合适,短语应删除或改为 'Anyway'),以及避免自相矛盾。
Ví dụ: I haven’t practiced typing formally, but I improve it through daily use. For example, I practice with typing apps for ten minutes each day and try to focus on accuracy rather than speed, which gradually improves my skills.
× Although typing is more efficient and more quick, I think handwriting.
✓ Although typing is more efficient and quicker, I prefer handwriting.
原句中使用了“more quick”是不正确的,因為“quick”作為一級形容詞,其比較級是“quicker”而不是“more quick”。此外,“I think handwriting”在此語境中要表達偏好應使用“prefer handwriting”。建議使用正確的比較級形式,並用“prefer”表達偏好。
× Can deliver our mood and more for more people.
✓ It can convey our mood and more people can feel it.
原句的句子結構不完整且語義不清。“Can deliver our mood and more for more people”缺少主語和正確的動詞賓語搭配。將句子改為完整結構並明確主語(It)和謂語(convey),並用“more people can feel it”來表達“讓更多人感受到”。建議保持主語明確並使用正確的動詞搭配。
× No, I do not type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
✓ No, I do not type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
此句語法正確,主語與動詞一致。僅保留原句。
× I think the keyboard is too heavy to bring and we can type it on our smartphones more easier.
✓ I think the keyboard is too heavy to carry, and we can type on our smartphones more easily.
原句中“bring”用法不當,應使用“carry”來表達“帶著”;“type it on our smartphones”中的“it”多餘,應直接說“type on our smartphones”。此外,“more easier”是錯誤的,因為“easy”的比較級是“easier”,或者使用“more easily”作為副詞比較級。建議使用正確動詞(carry)、刪除不必要的代詞,並用“more easily”作為副詞。
× We learn how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade 3.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade 3.
原句中時態混用:開頭用現在時“learn”但後半段提到“when I was in grade 3”表示過去,應將動詞改為過去式“learned”。並且主語不一致,句子前用“We”但後文說“I”,需統一主語為“I”。建議將動詞改為過去式並保持主語一致。
× We have a class named Computers and in the beginning the teachers tell told us how to type on a keyboard using an app.
✓ We had a class called Computers, and at the beginning the teachers taught us how to type on a keyboard using an app.
原句存在時態和混合詞形問題:“have”應為過去時“had”;“named”可改為“called”更自然;“in the beginning”前需加介詞“at”;“tell told”出現重複且混亂,正確應為過去式“taught”。因此把句子統一為過去時並修正動詞形態。建議使用一致的過去時並刪除重複詞。
× To be honest, I don't improve my typing skills.
✓ To be honest, I don't practice improving my typing skills.
原句“don't improve”語義不自然,因為“improve”是需要主動行為的,通常使用“practice”或“I am not improving”更符合表達習慣。此處若談目前習慣,用“don't practice improving”或“I haven't improved my typing skills”更合適。建議使用合適的動詞短語來表達沒有進行提升的行動。
× From anyways, I think in daily lives I used typing to solve any problems.
✓ Anyway, I think in daily life I use typing to solve various problems.
原句“From anyways”是不正確的片語;“in daily lives”應為“in daily life”或“in daily life”;“I used typing”時態錯誤且語序不自然,應為現在時“I use typing”或更自然地“I use typing to solve various problems”。建議刪除冗餘連詞,修正單複數,並使用正確時態與更自然的詞彙(various)。
× In this way can improve my typing skills.
✓ In this way, I can improve my typing skills.
原句缺少主語,從句“In this way can improve my typing skills”需在“can”前加主語“I”。建議在此類句子中明確主語,保證句子完整。