Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting and you can typing everything on phone in whether you want and you did, you didn't need a pen or pencil. Yeah. So I think handwriting is more typing is more convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always tap on the desktop or laptop every day and I always use these for finish my homework or finish my report in daily issue.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned to type on the keyboard keyboard when I was in the elementary school and my teacher showed us how to keep the basic during the regularly at home and it help it helped me become confidently and faster.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I improve my typing about practice more regularly and learning on the Internet to improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 在回答中要更清晰、有条理地表达观点并修正语法错误。尽量用一到两句给出直接的主题句,然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例,避免重复或多余表述。注意时态和动词形式(例如 use typing 而不是 you can typing),以及句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can type notes on my phone or laptop without carrying a pen, and it's easier to edit and store digital documents.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 需要用更自然的词汇和正确的语法来描述习惯。把回答分成主题句和具体用途两部分,使用更准确的动词(例如 use / type / do homework),并减少重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use either a desktop or a laptop every day. I usually type my homework and work reports on them because they make writing and editing much easier.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简练,修正重复词语和语法错误,并给出具体时间点和方法。可以用一两句说明什么时候开始以及是谁教的或用什么方法练习。注意单数复数和副词形式(regularly, confidently)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. My teacher taught us the basic finger positions and we practiced regularly at home, which helped me become faster and more confident.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体地说明你如何练习并给出细节,比如每天练习多久、使用哪些网站或软件、如何跟踪进步。避免重复短语,使用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, usually 20 minutes a day, and using online typing websites and tutorials. I also take timed tests to track my speed and accuracy and focus on drills for weaker keys.
× I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting and you can typing everything on phone in whether you want and you did, you didn't need a pen or pencil.
✓ I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting, and you can type everything on your phone whenever you want; you don't need a pen or pencil.
这是主谓一致和动词形式混用的问题(近似于列表中第27和第8/9类,但主要为主谓/动词形式应为原形)。句中出现了 'you can typing'(情态动词后应使用动词原形)和不一致的时态/人称 ('you did, you didn't need' 用法不当)。建议在情态动词 can 后使用动词原形 type;将断裂的部分改为连贯的时间状语 'whenever you want',并把过去式 'didn't' 改为现在时 'don't' 以保持时态一致。
× Yeah. So I think handwriting is more typing is more convenient.
✓ Yeah. So I think typing is more convenient than handwriting.
原句结构混乱,出现重复与主谓不一致,应将比较结构规范化。正确表达为 'typing is more convenient than handwriting',保持主语和系动词一致并用比较连词 'than'。
× Yes, I always tap on the desktop or laptop every day and I always use these for finish my homework or finish my report in daily issue.
✓ Yes, I always type on a desktop or laptop every day, and I always use them to finish my homework or reports in my daily routine.
句中存在主谓一致与动词形式问题:'tap' 用法不当(应为 type),'these' 指代不明确且与单复数不符,应为 'them' 或 'a desktop or laptop';'use these for finish' 错误,动词不定式 to 后需用动词原形 'to finish';'finish my report in daily issue' 表达不自然,改为 'finish my homework or reports in my daily routine' 更符合语法与语义。
× I learned to type on the keyboard keyboard when I was in the elementary school and my teacher showed us how to keep the basic during the regularly at home and it help it helped me become confidently and faster.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in elementary school, and my teacher showed us the basics to practice regularly at home; it helped me become more confident and faster.
这是过去时使用及形式问题(第5类)。原句有重复词 'keyboard keyboard',定冠词使用不当 'the elementary school' 应为 'elementary school','how to keep the basic during the regularly' 结构错误且词语搭配不当,应改为 'the basics to practice regularly'。时态应统一为过去时,用 'helped',形容词 'confident' 需要比较级或修饰词 'more confident',并把 'faster' 与其并列。
× I improve my typing about practice more regularly and learning on the Internet to improve my typing.
✓ I improve my typing by practising more regularly and by learning from the Internet to improve my typing.
这是动词 + -ing 形式与介词搭配问题(第8类)。原句 'about practice' 用法不当,应使用介词 'by' 加动名词 'practising',另外 'learning on the Internet' 更自然的表达是 'learning from the Internet' 或 'using online resources'。建议统一使用 'by practising' 和 'by learning' 结构以保持并列一致性。