Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because almost my study and work need computer I think. I think typing are convenient for me to correct my mistakes.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I tap on a laptop keyboard because laptop are convenient to boring and I need to use computer almost every day to complete my study.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Actually, I remember I start to learn typing when I was in primary school. We have computer classes, so we need to learn how to type, how to type. So from that time I I have I learned how to type quickly.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually I improve my typing use an app called Jinshan Dazu In in on my computer is a Chinese name. Many students use it to improve the typing the speed of typing it can.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并注意语法和连贯性。使用一到两句主题句说明偏好,然后用一两句具体原因支持。注意主谓一致(typing is),减少重复(不要两次说“I think”),并用连词增强流畅性。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my study and work are done on a computer. Also, typing is more convenient for correcting mistakes quickly, which saves me time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰并修正词汇和语法错误。说明具体设备并给出明确原因,避免模糊或错误的词(如“boring”用错)。使用连词使句子更自然,例如 because / so。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and easy to carry to classes. I use it almost every day to complete assignments and study materials.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 保持时间线清晰,使用正确的时态并避免重复。用一两句说明何时开始、在哪儿学,以及结果(例如打字速度提高)。可用连接词(when/so/then)让叙述更连贯。
Ví dụ: I started learning to type when I was in primary school during our computer classes. Since then I practiced regularly, so I can now type quite quickly.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答时要明确工具和方法,语法要正确并提供具体细节(如练习频率或练习内容)。避免重复短语,使用连接词如’by‘或’with‘来说明方式和效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising with a software program called Jinshan Input on my computer. I use it for about 20 minutes a day to practise accuracy and speed, and it gives exercises and progress reports that help me improve.
× I prefer typing because almost my study and work need computer I think.
✓ I prefer typing because almost all my study and work need a computer, I think.
主谓一致与冠词问题:原句中“almost my study and work”缺少限定词,应为“almost all my study and work”;“need computer”缺少不定冠词,应为“need a computer”。建议:在名词前加恰当的限定词或冠词。
× I think typing are convenient for me to correct my mistakes.
✓ I think typing is convenient for me to correct my mistakes.
主谓一致(第三人称单数)问题:主语“typing”是不可数名词或动名词,应与单数动词“is”连用,不能用“are”。建议:注意动名词作主语时用单数动词。
× I tap on a laptop keyboard because laptop are convenient to boring and I need to use computer almost every day to complete my study.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because laptops are convenient and I need to use a computer almost every day to complete my studies.
多个语法问题合并但均属主谓/名词形式与冠词问题:1) “tap”应为“type”(动词选择)——但该项不在给定列表,保留为“type”。 2) “laptop are”应为复数形式“laptops are”或单数前加冠词;原句意为一般情况宜用复数。3) “convenient to boring”语义与结构错误,应为“convenient”(去掉“to boring”)。4) “use computer”需加不定冠词“a computer”。5) “complete my study”更自然为“complete my studies”。建议:注意名词单复数与冠词,用恰当动词并删掉不合适短语。
× Actually, I remember I start to learn typing when I was in primary school.
✓ Actually, I remember I started to learn typing when I was in primary school.
过去时问题:句中时间状语“when I was in primary school”表明动作发生在过去,动词应使用过去式“started”而不是现在式“start”。建议:遇到过去的时间背景使用过去时。
× We have computer classes, so we need to learn how to type, how to type.
✓ We had computer classes, so we needed to learn how to type.
时态与重复问题:既然指过去的经历,应使用过去时“had”和“needed”;另外“how to type”重复出现一次即可。建议:用一致的过去时并避免不必要的重复。
× So from that time I I have I learned how to type quickly.
✓ So from that time I learned how to type quickly.
时态与句子结构错误:句中多余的“I I have I”是口语填充词,且混用了现在完成式“have learned”与一般过去时。因接续过去时间段,应使用过去时“learned”。建议:删除多余重复词,保持时态一致。
× Actually I improve my typing use an app called Jinshan Dazu In in on my computer is a Chinese name.
✓ Actually I improve my typing using an app called Jinshan (this is its Chinese name) on my computer.
动词+ -ing形式与介词位置问题:英文中“improve my typing using an app”中动词“improve”后应接动名词短语“using...”。原句还存在介词位置混乱,需将“on my computer”放在适当位置并用括注说明中文名。建议:用“using”连接工具或方法,并把介词短语放在正确位置。
× Many students use it to improve the typing the speed of typing it can.
✓ Many students use it to improve their typing speed.
句子结构混乱:原句重复“typing”和“the speed of typing it can”造成语义不明。简化为“improve their typing speed”更清楚自然。建议:避免冗余,使用简洁结构表达目的或用途。