Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer typing because typing is truly convenient. When I send a message, I choose typing more. Some writers write their novels also use typing instead of handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I often type on the laptop keyboard. Every day when I finish my homework, I'll send some messages. Usually use it because it is very convenient. However, the desktop is very heavy, I can't buy it.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
When I took some online concerts, I learned some type skills on Internet. I could use 26 types on the keyboard because it was so convenient, and I also finished my homework by typing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Honestly I think send more messages on the website is a good way to improve my typing because it can improve my typing speed and it save a lot of time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题,避免重复和语法错误。可以先明确表态,然后给出一两个具体原因或例子,并使用连词使表达更连贯。例如注意主谓一致、正确时态与代词使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text easily and send messages instantly, which saves time compared with writing by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答时先直接说主要使用哪种设备,然后给出具体原因并用连词连接句子,避免句子不完整和含糊表达。不要引入无关信息(例如‘买不买台式机’除非相关)。注意人称和语法一致。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because it's portable and convenient. After finishing my homework I can quickly check and send messages, whereas a desktop would be less practical for carrying around.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答时间点(或大概时期),然后说明学习途径和结果。避免含糊或错误的短语(如“online concerts”似乎不合适),用更贴切的词汇并提供清晰细节。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was around 12, mainly through online typing courses and practice websites. After a few months of daily practice I became much faster and could complete my homework by typing.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 给出多样化、具体的方法并用连接词组织,例如列出练习、使用练习软件、定期测速并纠正错误等。注意语法(时态、主谓一致)和句子简洁性。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on dedicated websites, doing short daily exercises to increase accuracy, and timing myself regularly to track progress. This combination helps me type faster and make fewer mistakes.
× To be honest, I prefer typing because typing is truly convenient.
✓ To be honest, I prefer typing because it is truly convenient.
句中重复使用名词“typing”显得冗余,且在描述一般事实或习惯时应使用一般现在时。将第二个“typing”替换为代词“it”更自然、简洁。建议用一般现在时描述习惯或常态,并用代词代替重复名词。
× When I send a message, I choose typing more.
✓ When I send a message, I choose typing more often.
原句“choose typing more”搭配不当,缺少频率副词。动词与主语形式本身无误,但表达频率需用副词“more often”。建议在表达常做某事时用频率副词,如 often / more often。
× Some writers write their novels also use typing instead of handwriting.
✓ Some writers who write novels also use typing instead of handwriting.
原句缺少连接成分导致结构不完整,应在“Some writers”与“also use”之间加上定语从句连接词“who write novels”或改为“Some writers of novels”。这样主从句关系清晰,句子结构完整。
× I often type on the laptop keyboard.
✓ I often type on a laptop keyboard.
在一般现在时中,习惯性动作使用一般现在时正确。但冠词使用不当:应使用不定冠词“a laptop keyboard”表示一般情况,而不是特指。建议描述习惯时用一般现在时并注意冠词选择。
× Every day when I finish my homework, I'll send some messages.
✓ Every day when I finish my homework, I send some messages.
句子描述习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时而不是将来时“I'll”。“Every day when I finish my homework”表明经常发生的动作,用一般现在时“send”。建议将时态改为一般现在时以表达习惯。
× Usually use it because it is very convenient.
✓ I usually use it because it is very convenient.
原句缺少主语,属于句子结构错误。需要加上主语“I”。此外“usually”应放在动词前“I usually use”。建议每个完整句子都要有主语和谓语,注意副词位置。
× However, the desktop is very heavy, I can't buy it.
✓ However, the desktop is very heavy, so I can't buy it.
原句由逗号连接两个独立分句,且逻辑关系需用连词表明因果。使用连词“so”更清晰。另外“heavy”用于表示电脑笨重可以,但句子需连接成复合句。建议用连词连接独立分句或拆成两句。
× When I took some online concerts, I learned some type skills on Internet.
✓ When I took some online courses, I learned some typing skills on the Internet.
原句中“online concerts”显然为用词错误,应为“online courses”;“type skills”措辞不自然,应为“typing skills”;“on Internet”缺定冠词,应为“on the Internet”。该句为词汇与结构混合错误,建议使用固定搭配。
× I could use 26 types on the keyboard because it was so convenient, and I also finished my homework by typing.
✓ I could use all 26 keys on the keyboard because it was so convenient, and I also finished my homework by typing.
原句“26 types”用词错误,正确表达应为“26 keys”。此外“by typing”使用正确的动名词短语来表示方式。建议使用固定搭配“keys on the keyboard”。
× Honestly I think send more messages on the website is a good way to improve my typing because it can improve my typing speed and it save a lot of time.
✓ Honestly, I think sending more messages on websites is a good way to improve my typing because it can improve my typing speed and save a lot of time.
句中多处问题:1)“think send”缺少动名词形式,主语是think后面应接动名词或从句,故改为“think sending”;2)“on the website”一般说法更自然为“on websites”表示泛指;3)“it save”时态与主语不一致,应为“save”(与前面的“it can improve”并列,去掉多余的it)。建议注意动词搭配、名词单复数和助动词后的动词形式。