Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting as I'm a person who like, uh, traditions. I like the feeling of holding a pen. I also like the feeling of flipping papers. Uh. I love.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes. Notice electric devices everywhere. We can't avoid to not to tap it.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Why was the student in grammar school? We have computer lessons. The first lesson for us was to learn how to tap and uh. Know the basic function of a keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Umm, just try to practice as much as I can to Inc to increase the speed. Sometimes I close my eyes to remember the specific location of every letters on the keyboard.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 在回答中要注意语法正确性、流利度和信息完整性。避免重复和填充词(如 uh),并把句子完整说出。可以直接给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持,保持在最多五句内。还要注意第三人称主谓一致(例如:I am a person who likes)和结尾不要突然中断。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy traditional practices and the tactile sensation of writing. For example, holding a pen and flipping through paper helps me remember information better. Also, writing by hand feels more personal than typing.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接对应问题并使用完整、自然的句子。避免含糊和双重否定(例如 “We can't avoid to not to tap it” 应改为更自然的表达)。提供具体信息(desktop 或 laptop)或频率(every day, sometimes)会更好。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I usually work and study on my portable computer. I find the laptop keyboard convenient for commuting and quick tasks.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接说明时间点并使用清晰的句子,不要用不相关的句型(例如疑问句开头反问)。避免口语填充词并用连词使表达连贯。可以说出具体年级或年龄并补充一两句细节。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school during our computer lessons. In the first class we practiced basic key positions and learned functions like Enter, Backspace and the letter layout.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁且语法准确,避免含糊词和发音填充(umm)。可以用一到两句说明具体方法并用连词增强逻辑性。细节化说明练习方法和频率会提高内容分数。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy. I also sometimes practice touch typing by closing my eyes and focusing on memorizing the key positions.
× I prefer handwriting as I'm a person who like, uh, traditions.
✓ I prefer handwriting as I'm a person who likes traditions.
错误类型:主语与动词的人称一致错误(属于代词/主语搭配问题)。句中主语是单数第一人称的表语结构“a person who”,从句中动词须与单数第三人称“who”一致,故应使用“likes”。建议:主句为单数人称时,关系从句中的动词也要使用第三人单数形式。
× I like the feeling of flipping papers.
✓ I like the feeling of flipping pages.
错误类型:用词不当(形容词/副词/名词选择错误)。英文中常用搭配是 "flip pages" 而非 "flip papers"。建议:学习并记忆常见固定搭配(collocations),使表达更地道。
× Uh. I love.
✓ Uh, I love it.
错误类型:句子结构不完整,缺乏宾语。单独的“I love.”通常需要接宾语或补语以明确意义。建议:补上宾语(如“it”或前文所指的事物),或将句子合并到上一句。
× Definitely yes. Notice electric devices everywhere.
✓ Definitely yes. I notice electronic devices everywhere.
错误类型:时态及词性使用不当。原句缺主语且“Notice”应为现在时的陈述句,且“electric devices”更常用“electronic devices”。建议:加主语“I”,使用一般现在时,并用更合适的词汇。
× We can't avoid to not to tap it.
✓ We can't avoid tapping it.
错误类型:动词搭配与不定式/动名词使用错误。动词短语“avoid”应接动名词(-ing),且原句多余否定“to not to”。建议:使用“avoid + -ing”结构,避免双重否定。
× Why was the student in grammar school?
✓ I was a student in grammar school.
错误类型:代词/提问结构使用错误。原句为疑问句但语境为陈述过去经历,应使用陈述句“I was...”。建议:根据上下文决定句式,描述经历时使用陈述句。
× We have computer lessons.
✓ We had computer lessons.
错误类型:时态错误(本质为过去时问题,归类为量词/时态选择关联)。根据后文“first lesson for us was...”表示过去,故应使用过去时“had”。建议:回顾叙述过去经历时使用过去时态的规则。
× The first lesson for us was to learn how to tap and uh.
✓ The first lesson for us was to learn how to type and, uh,
错误类型:动词选择与现在分词问题。这里应使用“type”或“type on a keyboard”表示打字,而“tap”不够准确。建议:使用更精确的动词“type”并补全句子。
× Know the basic function of a keyboard.
✓ (We) learned the basic functions of a keyboard.
错误类型:句子缺主语与动词形式错误。原句为片段,应补主语并使用过去时“learned”,且“function”应为复数“functions”。建议:完整表达为“We learned the basic functions of a keyboard.”以符合过去叙述。
× Umm, just try to practice as much as I can to Inc to increase the speed.
✓ Umm, I just try to practice as much as I can to increase my speed.
错误类型:情态/动词不定式使用混乱与词汇错误。原句中有多余词汇“to Inc to”,且“increase the speed”更自然为“increase my speed”。建议:删去多余部分,保持“I try to practice as much as I can to increase my speed.”的清晰结构。
× Sometimes I close my eyes to remember the specific location of every letters on the keyboard.
✓ Sometimes I close my eyes to remember the specific location of every letter on the keyboard.
错误类型:单复数与冠词使用错误。短语“every letters”不正确,应用“every letter”(every后须接单数)。建议:使用“every + 单数名词”,或改为“all the letters”表示全部的复数形式。