Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer timing because I often use computer and keyboard to practice my typing.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Ha ha, sure. I have a laptop so I often type on a type on my laptop keyboard every day.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
It's definitely an interesting question. I learned how to type on a keyboard in my childhood that I have taught. I have been taught how to type by my mother.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually I have not practiced my typing specially so I I just play my laptop often and from from my plane to practice typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语音或拼写错误("timing" 应为 "typing"),句子结构重复且信息量少。建议:首先直接给出简洁的主题句(例如:"I prefer typing."),然后用一到两句具体补充原因或场合,注意发音和拼写准确。可以使用连接词如 because 或 since 来使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because I use a computer every day for work and study. Typing is faster for me and makes it easier to edit documents quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答有多余的口语填充词("Ha ha, sure."),并有重复("type on a type on")。建议:直接回答并补充简短细节,避免重复和无关的笑声;使用一句主题句加一到两句说明,例如提及使用场景或频率。
Ví dụ: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I work and study on it. I usually type emails and essays for about three to four hours daily.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答开头冗长且不必要("It's definitely an interesting question."),句子语法混乱和时态使用不当("I have taught")。建议:直接说明时间点或时期,使用简单过去时描述学过的经历,并给出一两个具体细节(例如年龄、方法或记忆)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. My mother taught me basic finger positions and I practiced with simple typing exercises on our old computer.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊、重复且有语法错误("specially" 用法不当,重复词汇,"from my plane" 不明)。建议:直接说明是否有练习计划,如果没有可以描述你平时如何自然练习(比如写作、使用练习软件),并提出改进方法以显示反思。使用清晰的连接词如 actually, but, so。
Ví dụ: I don't do formal typing practice, but I improve by typing a lot while studying and writing emails. To get better, I plan to use an online typing course for 15 minutes every day to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer timing because I often use computer and keyboard to practice my typing.
✓ I prefer typing because I often use a computer and a keyboard to practice my typing.
问题:可数名词单复数与冠词使用错误。“computer”和“keyboard”是可数名词,单数形式前通常需要不定冠词“a”。改正建议:在“computer”和“keyboard”前各加“a”,并将“timing”改为正确拼写“typing”。注意单复数和冠词的搭配。
× Ha ha, sure. I have a laptop so I often type on a type on my laptop keyboard every day.
✓ Ha ha, sure. I have a laptop so I often type on my laptop keyboard every day.
问题:重复和现在分词使用不当,句中出现多余短语“type on a”。改正建议:删除重复部分,保留完整且通顺的动词短语“type on my laptop keyboard”。
× It's definitely an interesting question. I learned how to type on a keyboard in my childhood that I have taught. I have been taught how to type by my mother.
✓ It's definitely an interesting question. I learned how to type on a keyboard in my childhood. I was taught how to type by my mother.
问题:时态混用与被动结构不自然。原句中混合使用一般过去时和现在完成时("I learned" 与 "I have taught"),并且第二部分主语不清晰。改正建议:将表示过去经历的动作统一用一般过去时,改为被动语态“I was taught”,清楚表明动作是由母亲在过去教的。将不必要的短语删除以提高句子流畅度。
× Actually I have not practiced my typing specially so I I just play my laptop often and from from my plane to practice typing.
✓ Actually I have not practiced my typing specially, so I just use my laptop often and practice typing when I am on a plane.
问题:情态/动词使用和词语搭配错误及重复("I I"、"from from"),以及介词短语不当。改正建议:用“use my laptop”替换“不恰当的play my laptop”,并用“when I am on a plane”表示“在飞机上”练习。删除重复单词并调整从句使句子语法正确且意义明确。