Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting. Handwriting helps me to think clearly and organize my ideas. For example, when I take notes, I can write quickly. What?
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I'm still a student, so there is no need for me to type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. However, sometimes when I want to write some essays, I will use laptop keyboard to record something.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I didn't learn typing very formally, I just try it by myself because I need to write an economic I essay on the computer and to send it and send it to my teacher.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I try to typing more. For example, I will choose typing to write most of my my homework for my accounting classes and economics classes. This can help me improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 总体回答可以更自然并避免多余的词(例如结尾的“What?”)。开头句已直接回应问题,但后续支持细节可以更具体(如说明为何手写更有助于思考:视觉记忆、减缓节奏等)。建议使用连接词使逻辑更连贯,并把句子控制在4-5句内。练习时注意流利度和准确性,避免简短重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts more clearly. When I write by hand, I remember information better due to the physical act of writing. For example, taking notes during lectures lets me summarize key points quickly and review them later. Therefore, I usually choose handwriting for brainstorming and studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答能传达大意但用词和句子结构有些重复与不够简练(例如“type on a desktop or laptop keyboard”在回答中重复)。可以直接说频率并给出具体情况或例子。使用连接词如“but”或“however”时注意后句更紧凑。注意冠词和动词形式(例如“use a laptop keyboard to type essays”)。
Ví dụ: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because most of my daily tasks are handwritten. However, I do use my laptop occasionally to type essays and assignments, especially when I need to submit work online. For instance, I usually type long essays on weekends.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有用但表达混乱且有重复(如“to send it and send it”),语法时态也需调整。应该给出时间点或时期(e.g. in high school, a few years ago)并说明学习方式和原因。将句子分成主题句和支持句,使用连接词如“so”或“because”。
Ví dụ: I never had formal typing lessons; I taught myself a few years ago when I started writing essays on the computer. Because I had to submit an economics essay to my teacher online, I practised typing regularly until I felt comfortable.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答能够说明方法但有语法错误和重复(如“I try to typing”应为“I try to type”,重复“my my”)。可以更具体说明改进策略(如定期练习、使用打字软件、练习盲打、设置每天练习时间等),并使用连接词让句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I type most of my homework for accounting and economics classes and also use online typing tutors for 15 minutes a day. Gradually my speed and accuracy have improved.
× Handwriting helps me to think clearly and organize my ideas.
✓ Handwriting helps me think clearly and organize my ideas.
句子中原有的不定式“to think”虽不完全错误,但在此处更自然的表达是省略“to”,使用动词原形“think”与“helps”搭配更常见。建议:在类似结构中使用“helps + 动词原形”更符合英语惯用法。
× For example, when I take notes, I can write quickly. What?
✓ For example, when I take notes, I can write quickly.
原句末尾的“What?”不合语境且非完整句子,属于句子结构错误,需删除。建议:避免在正式回答中加入与上下文无关的短语或感叹词。
× I'm still a student, so there is no need for me to type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
✓ I'm still a student, so I don't need to type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
使用“there is no need for me to...”虽然可理解,但更自然的表达是“I don't need to...”。按题单规则,改为更常用的结构以符合语法与习惯用法。建议:用简单直接的否定形式表达需求不存在。
× However, sometimes when I want to write some essays, I will use laptop keyboard to record something.
✓ However, sometimes when I want to write essays, I will use a laptop keyboard to type something.
错误点有两处:1) “laptop keyboard”前缺不定冠词,应为“a laptop keyboard”或直接“my laptop”。2) 用“record something”搭配不恰当,写文章应使用“type”。同时“some essays”可简化为“essays”。建议:注意冠词使用,并选择语义准确的动词(type用于通过键盘写作)。
× I didn't learn typing very formally, I just try it by myself because I need to write an economic I essay on the computer and to send it and send it to my teacher.
✓ I didn't learn typing very formally; I just tried it by myself because I needed to write an economics essay on the computer and send it to my teacher.
存在时态不一致和词形错误:前半句使用过去时“didn't learn”,后半句应与之保持一致,将“try”改为过去式“tried”;“need”改为过去式“needed”;“economic I essay”应为“economics essay”;重复“and to send it and send it”冗余,简化为“send it”。建议:保持句子内部时态一致,注意名词词形和避免重复。
× I try to typing more.
✓ I try to type more.
结构错误:动词“try”后接不定式时应用“to + 动词原形”,而不是“to + -ing”。因此应改为“try to type”或直接“I type more to practice”。建议:记住“try to do”与“try doing”区别,当前语境用“try to do”。
× For example, I will choose typing to write most of my my homework for my accounting classes and economics classes.
✓ For example, I will choose to type most of my homework for my accounting and economics classes.
问题有:1) 重复“my my”。2) “choose typing to write”结构不自然,改为“choose to type”。3) “my accounting classes and economics classes”可合并为“my accounting and economics classes”。建议:删除重复词,使用更自然的动词不定式结构,并简化并列名词短语。