Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Do honest, to be honest, I prefer to type because you know, I in the this time we have to lower chances to right hand right and I think it's more calm play ticket for us.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Also I would choose the laptop keyboard because laptop also is convenient for us to take everywhere I need to go and it's also. Fast and uh.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
If my memory is right, I think, uh, I have learned that at my primary school because we have the, uh, computer class and uh, learn how to type like the words, how to spell it, and the type on the computers.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Just keep practicing typing in your company computers and also I think they have some apps to help you improve your speed and accuracy of the typing. I think it's more efficient for us to use that and the.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 首先,回答要直接并清晰表达观点,避免多余或重复的短语(如“Do honest, to be honest”)。其次,注意语法和词汇选择:将“in the this time”改为“nowadays/these days”;“lower chances to right hand right”意思不明确,应改为更清楚的原因(例如更快捷、整洁或便于保存)。最后,尽量用1-2个支持细节并使用连接词(例如“because”或“so”)。练习时可对答案进行简短的预先构思,控制在不超过5句。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I make a mistake I can correct it quickly, and typed notes are easier to store and search on my computer.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要先直接给出选择(topic sentence),然後用一到两个具体理由支持。避免口头语填充(如“uh”)和不完整句子。把“convenient for us to take everywhere I need to go”精简为“portable”或“easy to carry”。补充一个具体例子(如在咖啡店或通勤时使用)。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient to take with me. For instance, I often work on my laptop at cafés and during my commute, which I couldn’t do with a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 直接回答时间点(如“At primary school”),然後用一到两个细节说明学习内容或感受。减少犹豫词(如“uh”)并修正语法(如“I learned”而不是“I have learned that”)。可以补充具体年级或课程活动作为支持。
Ví dụ: I learned to type at primary school in a computer class. We practiced typing exercises and simple word-processing tasks, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 先给出方法概述(topic sentence),然後列举1-2具体方法并说明效果。避免句子未完成或重复(如最后的“and the.”)。使用更准确的表达,如“practice regularly”与“typing apps”并说明具体的改进目标(速度或准确率)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my work computer and using typing apps to build speed and accuracy. For example, I use an app that runs timed drills and gives feedback on my common mistakes, which helps me reduce errors.
× Do honest, to be honest, I prefer to type because you know, I in the this time we have to lower chances to right hand right and I think it's more calm play ticket for us.
✓ To be honest, I prefer to type because nowadays we have to reduce the use of our right hand, and I think it's calmer and more practical for us.
句子结构混乱、词序与搭配不当(属于句子结构错误)。原句多处短语杂糅(如“Do honest, to be honest”重复且不合常规;“I in the this time”词序错乱;“lower chances to right hand right”表达不通;“more calm play ticket”无意义)。建议理清主从句:先用固定表达“To be honest”,再说明原因(prefer to type because...),使用正确短语如“nowadays / reduce the use of our right hand / calmer and more practical”。这些改正使句子语义连贯,符合英语习惯。
× Also I would choose the laptop keyboard because laptop also is convenient for us to take everywhere I need to go and it's also. Fast and uh.
✓ I would choose a laptop keyboard because a laptop is convenient to take anywhere I need to go, and it's also fast.
使用介词和冠词错误以及句子断裂(属于介词和冠词/句子结构问题)。原句中缺少冠词“a laptop”,短语“convenient for us to take everywhere I need to go”介词搭配不当,习惯表达是“convenient to take anywhere I need to go”。此外句子末尾断裂。建议使用正确冠词并调整介词短语顺序,使句子完整流畅。
× If my memory is right, I think, uh, I have learned that at my primary school because we have the, uh, computer class and uh, learn how to type like the words, how to spell it, and the type on the computers.
✓ If my memory is right, I learned that at primary school because we had computer classes where we were taught how to type words and spell them on the computers.
时态使用错误(属于过去时问题)。描述过去的经历应使用一般过去时(learned / had / were taught),而不是现在完成时或混合时态。原句中“have learned”与表示明确过去时间的“at my primary school”冲突。建议统一使用过去时,并改为被动结构“were taught”以表明教学行为。
× Just keep practicing typing in your company computers and also I think they have some apps to help you improve your speed and accuracy of the typing. I think it's more efficient for us to use that and the.
✓ Just keep practicing typing on your company's computers, and I think there are some apps to help you improve your typing speed and accuracy. I think it's more efficient for us to use them.
介词和代词使用以及句子结构问题(涉及现在时和介词/代词使用)。先用现在进行/一般现在时“keep practicing / think”。介词应为“on your company's computers”(不是 “in”),名词所有格用“company's”。“apps”对应代词应为“them”而不是“that”。最后句子未完成,需改为完整表达。建议使用正确介词、所有格和代词,并使句子完整。