Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I usually prefer handwriting because my handwriting is quite neat and I think handwriting can make the memorize things better. However, these days, because I have too many essays that I have to do, I started to prefer typing.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient for me to carry this around.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I first learned in elementary school. However I'm still a very bad type and I type thing very slow.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I have never actually find a way to improve my typing, but because I have too many access that I have to do, my speed of typing has become faster and I think it's a way for me to improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 注意句子结构与时态一致,避免重复和语法错误;把观点先表明,再用具体原因支持,并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。例如把“memorize things”改为“remember things”,把“started to prefer”改为“have started to prefer”。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I generally prefer handwriting because my handwriting is neat and writing by hand helps me remember information better. However, lately I have started to prefer typing because I have many essays to complete and typing is faster for long texts.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁但可稍微丰富细节以显得更自然,注意代词与名词的一致("this"应改为"it"或直接说"my laptop")。可用一两句补充原因或场景,使用连词让回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient to carry my laptop around. For example, I often work on campus or in cafés, so a laptop is much more practical than a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和词汇使用错误,改正短语如“a very bad type”与“type thing very slow”。应先直接回答时间点,然后用一到两句说明现状或原因,并用连接词。保持句子简短清晰。
Ví dụ: I first learned to type in elementary school, but I'm still a slow typist. I didn't practice formal touch-typing, so I tend to look at the keys and make frequent mistakes.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 这段回答语法和表达较混乱,使用更准确的词汇(如"found"、"tasks"、"practice")。先直接回答有没有方法,再解释具体原因或方法,最好提供未来计划。用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I haven't taken any formal lessons to improve my typing, but frequent practice on many tasks has made me faster over time. In the future, I plan to use online typing exercises to practice touch-typing and reduce my errors.
× I usually prefer handwriting because my handwriting is quite neat and I think handwriting can make the memorize things better.
✓ I usually prefer handwriting because my handwriting is quite neat and I think handwriting can help me memorize things better.
错误类型:动词或动词短语使用不当。原句中使用了“make the memorize things”,这是不正确的动词结构。应使用“help someone do something”或“help someone to do something”,即“help me memorize things”。建议:用“help me memorize”或“help me to memorize”。
× However, these days, because I have too many essays that I have to do, I started to prefer typing.
✓ However, these days, because I have too many essays that I have to do, I have started to prefer typing.
错误类型:时态使用不当。句子开始说“these days”表示现在一段时间内的变化,应使用现在完成时(have started)而不是一般过去时(started)。建议:用现在完成时表示从过去到现在的变化:"have started"。
× I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient for me to carry this around.
✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient for me to carry it around.
错误类型:代词使用不当。原句用“this”指代笔记本电脑或键盘,不够自然,且应使用宾格代词“it”而不是“this”后面跟动词。建议:用"it"作为代词:"carry it around"。
× I first learned in elementary school. However I'm still a very bad type and I type thing very slow.
✓ I first learned in elementary school. However I'm still a very bad typist and I type things very slowly.
错误类型:名词及词类使用不当和副词形式错误。原句把“typist”(打字的人)写成“type”,而“thing”应为复数“things”。另外“slow”在此用作方式应为副词“slowly”。建议:将“type”改为“typist”,“thing”改为“things”,并把“slow”改为副词“slowly”。
× I have never actually find a way to improve my typing, but because I have too many access that I have to do, my speed of typing has become faster and I think it's a way for me to improve my typing.
✓ I have never actually found a way to improve my typing, but because I have had to do so much work, my typing speed has become faster and I think that's one way I have improved.
错误类型:动词时态与用词不当。1) "have never actually find" 应为现在完成时的过去分词形式“found”。2) "too many access that I have to do" 用词错误,"access" 不符合语境,应改为 "tasks" 或 "work",且结构"have to do so much work" 更自然。3) "my speed of typing" 更自然为 "my typing speed"。4) 最后句的时态和表达更自然改为现在完成或过去完成的表述,"I think it's a way for me to improve my typing" 改为更自然的 "I think that's one way I have improved"。建议:使用适当的过去分词(found)、用正确名词(tasks/work)、并调整时态与词序使句子通顺。