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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

If I had to choose one of them, I'd definitely prefer typing races and handwriting. Uh, because typing is goes through the phone messages while handwriting you need to paper and the the the work of your hand and fan.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Well, I usually use the laptop keyboard because it is convenient. Races and desktop enter for example. I use it to message my friends and I do this everyday.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

Actually, I don't remember when I learn how to type on a keyboard. However, I believe that it happened when I started using a phone and with the help of my phone I started typing on a keyboard and I find it convenient and faster to message.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Well, I've never thought about this before, so I believe that we should type every day through messaging your friends and with correct words you can improve that.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, avoid filler words, and give two specific reasons with clear linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "typing is faster" not "typing is goes through the phone messages") and avoid repeating words. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for daily communication. For example, I can send messages instantly on my phone, whereas handwriting takes more time and requires paper and pens.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with a specific detail using a linking word. Remove unclear fragments like "Races and desktop enter." Use correct vocabulary and a short second sentence explaining how you use it.

Ví dụ: I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient and portable. For example, I use it to message friends, write emails, and do schoolwork while sitting in different rooms.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give a concise supporting detail with a linking word. Correct tense errors ("learned" not "learn"). Be specific about an approximate time or age to add content.

Ví dụ: I don't remember the exact time, but I learned to type when I was a child after I started using a smartphone. As a result, I practised messaging daily and gradually became faster and more accurate.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct method and a concrete, specific practice tip. Use linking words (for example, by, so) and correct pronouns ("you" vs "I"). Offer one measurable practice activity to show improvement.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day using typing websites and messaging friends. For example, I spend 10–15 minutes daily on a typing practice site to increase speed and accuracy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of conjunction

× If I had to choose one of them, I'd definitely prefer typing races and handwriting.

If I had to choose one of them, I'd definitely prefer typing rather than handwriting.

The sentence uses 'races and' which is incorrect and unclear. This is an issue with conjunction/coordination and word choice. Replace 'races and' with 'rather than' to contrast the two options correctly and make the sentence grammatical and clear.

Incorrect use of verbs / Sentence structure errors

× Uh, because typing is goes through the phone messages while handwriting you need to paper and the the the work of your hand and fan.

Typing is done through phone messages, while handwriting requires paper and the work of your hand.

The original has mixed verb forms ('is goes'), missing articles, repeated filler words, and an unclear final word ('fan'). This is a sentence structure and verb usage problem. Use passive 'is done' or active 'you do' consistently, include the article 'the' where needed, and remove filler words and unclear terms.

Article errors

× Well, I usually use the laptop keyboard because it is convenient. Races and desktop enter for example.

Well, I usually use a laptop keyboard because it is convenient. For example, desktop keyboards are used in some situations.

The original misuses articles and contains unclear fragments ('Races and desktop enter'). This is an article and sentence structure issue. Use 'a laptop keyboard' for a non-specific single item and rephrase the fragment into a clear example sentence.

Present tense issue

× I use it to message my friends and I do this everyday.

I use it to message my friends, and I do this every day.

The verb 'do' is fine, but 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; the adverbial phrase should be two words 'every day'. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

Past tense issue

× Actually, I don't remember when I learn how to type on a keyboard.

Actually, I don't remember when I learned how to type on a keyboard.

The clause refers to a past event, so the past tense 'learned' is required rather than the present 'learn'. This is a past tense error.

Sentence structure errors

× However, I believe that it happened when I started using a phone and with the help of my phone I started typing on a keyboard and I find it convenient and faster to message.

However, I believe it happened when I started using a phone; with the help of my phone, I began typing on its keyboard, which I find more convenient and faster for messaging.

The original is a run-on with repeated phrases and awkward structure ('started using a phone' repeated). Rephrase to avoid repetition, use past tense consistently ('began'), and use 'more convenient and faster for messaging' to clarify the comparison.

Modal verb usage

× Well, I've never thought about this before, so I believe that we should type every day through messaging your friends and with correct words you can improve that.

Well, I've never thought about this before, but I believe we should type every day by messaging friends, and using correct words will help you improve.

The sentence mixes pronouns ('we' and 'your') and has awkward modal/purpose phrasing. This is a modal verb and pronoun usage issue. Use 'we' or 'you' consistently; here maintain 'we' with 'we should' or switch to 'you' consistently. Use 'by messaging friends' to express method and 'will help you improve' to show result.

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