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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing because in recent years with the development of technology, typing is very convenient and quickly, especially for me when I am studying or writing something.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Definitely, yes. When I started the university, I'd have uh, umm, a laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for me to take notes, uh, without papers. Everyone's do it.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

And I was a kid. My father taught me how to type on a keyboard because he worked as a computer engineer and he wanted me to control this useful skill. It's very beneficial for my education and the further development.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

There are several ways. First I would use some applications to improve my speed when I was typing, such as Jingsha software. Also I will umm.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有冗余与语法小错误。应更简洁自然地给出主题句,再用一两句具体原因或例子支持,避免模糊表达(如 "quickly" 用作副词位置错误),并注意时态与冠词。可使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting. Typing is faster and more convenient for me, especially when I study or write essays, because I can edit and save my work easily. For example, I often type notes on my laptop and organize them quickly.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答肯定但语言不够自然且有停顿语填充(uh, umm)和语法错误("I'd have a laptop keyboard"、"Everyone's do it")。应用更自然的表达,先直接回答,再提供简洁原因与具体细节,避免填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day. Since starting university I take notes and write assignments on my laptop because it is portable and helps me keep everything organized. Most of my classmates do the same.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答含信息但开头连词使用不当(不应以 "And" 开始),且有些表达不够地道("control this useful skill"、"further development")。建议用明确时间点说明,说明原因并给出具体效益,用自然短句连接。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child. My father, who was a computer engineer, taught me because he thought it was an important skill. It has helped me a lot with schoolwork and studying, especially when I need to type essays quickly.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整,存在时态混用("would" 与 "was typing")、填充词与未完成句。需要完整列出具体方法并用连接词组织(例如练习软件、盲打练习、定时测试),并给出具体例子或频率。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using practice applications like TypingClub or Jingsha to build speed and accuracy. I also practice touch-typing exercises for 15–20 minutes every day and take timed tests to track my progress.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× typing is very convenient and quickly

typing is very convenient and quick

这里 should 用形容词来修饰主语(typing),不是副词。原句使用副词 quickly(快速地)不符合语法,因为连系动词 be 后面要接表语,表语若描述名词性质要用形容词 quick(方便且快速)。建议记住:be 后面若描述状态用形容词。

6: Present tense issue

× especially for me when I am studying or writing something

especially for me when I study or write something

这里描述一般性、经常发生的情况,应使用一般现在时而不是现在进行时。将 am studying / am writing 改为 study / write 更符合习惯用法。建议在表达经常或习惯动作时使用一般现在时。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Everyone's do it.

Everyone does it.

主语 everyone 被视为单数,动词须用第三人称单数形式 does。原句用复数动词 do 与单数主语不一致。记住含义为“每个人”的单词如 everyone, somebody 等后接单数动词。

22: Article errors

× When I started the university, I'd have uh, umm, a laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for me to take notes, uh, without papers.

When I started university, I had a laptop and used its keyboard every day because it was very convenient for me to take notes without paper.

“start university”通常不用定冠词 the;此外原句中 I'd have 用法不当,应为一般过去时 I had 或 I used。还将 "a laptop keyboard every day" 重写为 "a laptop and used its keyboard every day" 更清晰。最后“without papers”应为不可数名词 paper。建议:固定搭配是 start university,不加 the;过去习惯或过去发生的动作用一般过去时。

5: Past tense issue

× And I was a kid. My father taught me how to type on a keyboard because he worked as a computer engineer and he wanted me to control this useful skill.

When I was a kid, my father taught me how to type on a keyboard because he worked as a computer engineer and wanted me to acquire this useful skill.

原句开头断句不自然,改为 When I was a kid 更符合时间状语位置。wanted me to control this useful skill 用词不当,control 不适用于“掌握技能”,应为 acquire 或 master。保持过去时态一致。建议注意时态一致性与动词搭配。

6: Present tense issue

× It's very beneficial for my education and the further development.

It's very beneficial for my education and for my future development.

原句中 the further development 表达不自然,常见搭配为 future development 或 personal development,并且需要在 education 之后平行地使用 for。建议使用常见搭配 "future development" 并保持结构平行。

4: Modal verb usage

× First I would use some applications to improve my speed when I was typing, such as Jingsha software.

First I would use some applications to improve my speed when I was typing, such as Jingsha software.

此句中 would 用来描述过去的习惯可以接受(过去常常会),因此无需改动。但需注意若要表达一般现在的改进方法,应改为 I use 或 I would use(讲述过去习惯)。此处保留原句并说明为允许的用法。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Also I will umm.

Also, I will ... (continue by mentioning another method or stop with a full sentence: "Also, I will practice regularly.")

原句残缺,缺少谓语或补充信息,导致句子结构不完整。需要补充完整谓语或补全内容。建议完成句子,例如 "Also, I will practice regularly." 以保证句子完整。

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